To my wonderful, amazing readers:
I will be moving countries in two weeks time, so please forgive me if I don't update a lot. I have to get to a new school, get used to a new continent, and lots of other very time consuming stuff. Please understand, and leave me a review - they're what keep my stories and poems up!!
I'm an eighth grader in Australia who really loves Harry Potter. JKRowling is the most ingenius author, and has earned my deepest respect. Keep it up, JK!
Second Half is my very fist ever fanfic, and it's very freaky to be doing it. Below are some results from the HP quizes I've done... Funnily enough, my arch enemy keeps teasing me about being 'a know it all like that squirel toothed girl from Harry Potter', or at least he did back at my old school... HA! This should show him!
Which HP Kid Are You?
You belong in Gryffindor!
Not Your Average Harry Potter House Quiz
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13 inches, holly and griffin feather. An unusual
Ollivander's wand, but one that speaks of
righteousness and heroism. The wand of a born
leader, this one.
Which wand will yours be?
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luv it gtg sleep now, but will read later, 10!
Very good! I started reading, and finished this today!!! I think that you have a wonderful story, and, although a few grammar errors still persist, I feel that you have the story working very well for yourself and your audience. It would be good for Lily and James to get together, I can't wait for that to happen. I am also having the sneaking suspisions that something bad (other than TJ's death, I mean) is going to happen to Alex, but that's up to you, isn't it? :-) Keep it up... Remember, it doesn't matter about the length of a story, but the plot and the inner happenings. 10/10 for a wondrful job so far! Please update soon!!! Lillian Potter
PLEASE update soon!!! I just thought that I should mention, in response to a previous review, that I do think school work is more important than everything, even writing. Your grades determine the course of your future....
Anyways, sorry about that, but nevertheless, do try to update soon!!
OOO. I was think that putting peter on a broomstick was insanity. tragic tho, it might have finished him off, then james and lily would have lived.... watever. he could have crashed into voldemort or something... hihi. the holidays are really boring, so i am thinking of crazy schemes. anyways, good on you, short chapters, so compensate up updateing sooner!!!
o yeah.. resolutions.. um.... write a lot more, and (i am quite geeky) try to ace every one of my classes. makes the parents happy eh? happy new yrs to u too,
My only feed back is to try and stick two chapters together and make them a bit longer. Otherwise, UPDATE!!! hahaha.. yes, you have all your fans on edge... ;-)_
I luved it SO much, make SURE u let me know WHEN u pick it up!!!
Great story... There were a few spots where you have some gramar errors, but they haven't damged the context... I hope you update, as I can't wait to know what happens.
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes...::~!~::..
"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
I noticed that this has been up since October, so please update really soon!!!!!!!!
This is AMAZING!!! I LUV UR FIC!!!
James/girl, then James/Lily.... Luv ur fic!!!
very nice, i enjoyed it, can't wait for the battle/showdown, but in som places i think you didn't really have the right sort of dialogue for harry, that's more the dumbledore kind of thing... keep it up! o, and i can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Thanks! The battle/showdown will be my most difficult to write and I'll have to apply myself completely to get it finished. The dialogue. . .I think one of my failings as a (loosely used term) writer is that I want everyone to think in "flowery" language and sometimes that leaks onto the more inept such as our Harry. (You see what I mean?) Well spotted, and thanks!
Good chapter! I was wondering, isn't this in the xmas holidays??? Anyway, good chapter, the bit with Petunia was interresting, keep it up!!! :-)
Author's Response: No, it's actually the Easter holidays now. Thanks much for the review! I appreciate them so much!
very good, tenouttaten, keep it up!! Lily Potter
Author's Response: Thank you much!!!
Great story, very nice, could you please write some more or at least a sequel? The battle was a bit quick, but I liked it all the same. Cheers, and keep writing!
I'd just like to add that I agree with DoctorDetroit that although this is an awsome fic, you could fix some grammar mistakes.... :-)
Otherwise, the swarms of desperate fans will HAVE to come after you, demanding you put an end to the cliffhanger!!!..... haha Just kidding o'course.
But still, PLS think about updating this fic???
I luv your plot, BUT u have SO many grammar errors, it makes the story flow less smoothly, and you should think about fixing it, as it would bring you many more fans!
Wow! This story is really awsome, it's really good that you're not ending it because of HBP!! Character death?? - I'm on edge, update soon!
This is a marvellous story!!! Please do a sequel, or else I will most probably go crazy....! 10/10. Please, seriously consider a Book Seven!!!! Your Devoted Fan
Thank you SO much for writing this wonderful story! I am delighted that you are making a sequel, and I solemnly swear to read it as well! 10/10!!!!! :D