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Hey everyone, my name is Nora!

Please read my fics and review!

Most importantly, please read and review my newest story, "Rose's Ramblings". Thanks!
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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Gemma Hawk Signed
Date: 07/08/06 Title: None

This is really great! I love it! So sweet!

 

Summary: A hilarious ride inside an author's head as he tries to write the best fic ever written by a fan. Unfortunatley, things don't go as planned and the author must get himself out of a sticky situation before he ruins the joy of writing Fan Fiction forever.

WARNING: Random and Bizarre humor ahead.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2243 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/19/06 Updated: 07/22/06


Reviewer: Gemma Hawk Signed
Date: 08/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Harry Potter and The Process of Writing Fan Fiction

*laughs her head off*

Harald, this is THE funniest parody I have ever read!! I love it! Especially the line, "It's not the fog," said Ginny. "The author is smoking." and 'Not THAT kind of climax!' and how China revevealed that she's a man... you know what? I love the whole thing!

*huggles*

-Nora

Author's Response: Nora!!!! *tackles* I\'m so happy you liked the story!! *huggles* Thanks for the review!

 

Harry Potter and the Mary Sue by bajab
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Yet another Mary Sue Parody, portraying the trio in a less than flatering light and completely irreverent.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 3681 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/11/06 Updated: 12/13/06


Reviewer: Gemma Hawk Signed
Date: 12/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the funniest story I have EVER read.

And I love you for it!!!!!!!!

 

Breaking the Mirrors by On Angels Wings
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: The infamous Draco Malfoy has been unexpectedly caught by the most unlikely of people; a young Muggle woman. His prejudices are still burned into his mind and woven into the threads of his soul, and he is more alone than ever. A static being, Draco Malfoy still doesn't know how to treat others properly, least of all the young Muggle who is treating his wounds and providing him shelter. He still disdains all Muggles and those who love them, despite his change of heart at the turn of the war. But is it possible he can learn to love just one?

Categories: Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Self Injury, Violence

Word count: 6943 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
02/02/07 Updated: 08/07/07


Reviewer: Gemma Hawk Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Part 1: The Rough Draft

hey! when are you going to update? I love this story :D I like how "things" are happening between Draco and Morgan

 
Reviewer: Gemma Hawk Signed
Date: 02/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Clearing the Mind

What an intruiging story! This is really, really interesting. It's a new and fesh idea, and I think it's awesome. :)

Just one little nitpick: "Go ahead," she whisperedd" has two d's, but that's so minor that it hardly matters.

Wow, let me start off with just the first paragraph. It was such a great way of starting the story, it really grabbed the reader in.

I loved how you only gave away small details before actually telling us what was going on, it kept me hooked!

The character of Morgan is just so sweet! She's really kind and caring and somehow I already feel sorry for her. After all, she's stuck with a complete stranger, and she doesn't even know that he's a wizard! I think that you've really created a great character here, although I'm looking forward to seeing some of her flaws, too, and her reaction once she finds out that Draco is a wizard. (Asuming, of course, that she will find out!)

Draco, meanwhile is so in character, it's wonderful. True, we don't see him this way in the books, but let's look at it this way: he's hurt and scared, not sure of who to trust, and who not to trust. When Morgan offers help he accepts, although he can't help but sneak in the comment about having sunk so low! Draco is so in character, which is great because it makes everything so real!

I love the scene with Draco taking a bath. (And no, it's not just because it's Draco taking a bath!) The thing with switching from paragraph to paragraph is cool, if you know what I mean. One paragraph you describe Draco taking his bath. The next it's him remembering that fateful nigh. Then you describe him bathing again. It was a really cool way of showing us not only what was going on, but also what was going through Draco's head.

The part with Draco trying to scrub off the Dark Mark was so sad and pathetic, in a way. It really made me just want to jump in and make that stupid mark disappear.

Your idea of the final battle was very original. I kept rooting for Harry, but at the same time I was really worried that something might go wrong! I've never before read a fic where Harry kills Voldemort with his own hands. Really cool. It kind of reminds us of PoA, when Harry attacks Sirirus, trying to kill him with his hands. He just forgets all about his wand and kills the muggle way. I love how you have him do it the same way here. It's awesome.

Draco's guilt over killing Bellatrix is so human that it kind of makes you feel for Draco, even though he murdered his aunt. I'm glad that he realized how many people he was actually saving by killing her, though.

All in all, this is a great, really gripping first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more!

-Nora :)

 
Reviewer: Gemma Hawk Signed
Date: 02/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Clearing the Mind

What an intruiging story! This is really, really interesting. It's a new and fesh idea, and I think it's awesome. :)

Just one little nitpick: "Go ahead," she whisperedd" has two d's, but that's so minor that it hardly matters.

Wow, let me start off with just the first paragraph. It was such a great way of starting the story, it really grabbed the reader in.

I loved how you only gave away small details before actually telling us what was going on, it kept me hooked!

The character of Morgan is just so sweet! She's really kind and caring and somehow I already feel sorry for her. After all, she's stuck with a complete stranger, and she doesn't even know that he's a wizard! I think that you've really created a great character here, although I'm looking forward to seeing some of her flaws, too, and her reaction once she finds out that Draco is a wizard. (Asuming, of course, that she will find out!)

Draco, meanwhile is so in character, it's wonderful. True, we don't see him this way in the books, but let's look at it this way: he's hurt and scared, not sure of who to trust, and who not to trust. When Morgan offers help he accepts, although he can't help but sneak in the comment about having sunk so low! Draco is so in character, which is great because it makes everything so real!

I love the scene with Draco taking a bath. (And no, it's not just because it's Draco taking a bath!) The thing with switching from paragraph to paragraph is cool, if you know what I mean. One paragraph you describe Draco taking his bath. The next it's him remembering that fateful nigh. Then you describe him bathing again. It was a really cool way of showing us not only what was going on, but also what was going through Draco's head.

The part with Draco trying to scrub off the Dark Mark was so sad and pathetic, in a way. It really made me just want to jump in and make that stupid mark disappear.

Your idea of the final battle was very original. I kept rooting for Harry, but at the same time I was really worried that something might go wrong! I've never before read a fic where Harry kills Voldemort with his own hands. Really cool. It kind of reminds us of PoA, when Harry attacks Sirirus, trying to kill him with his hands. He just forgets all about his wand and kills the muggle way. I love how you have him do it the same way here. It's awesome.

Draco's guilt over killing Bellatrix is so human that it kind of makes you feel for Draco, even though he murdered his aunt. I'm glad that he realized how many people he was actually saving by killing her, though.

All in all, this is a great, really gripping first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more!

-Nora :)

Author's Response: Oh my...this is the longest review I\'ve ever gotten...I love it! I\'m glad you think so highly of my story! Oh, and thank you for pointing out my spelling error, I\'ll fix that right away. Maybe you\'re the one who can point out if something isn\'t right, you\'re very observant. And not only that, you\'re comprehending everything that I\'m writing. Thank you! Sincerely, On Angels Wings

 

Poetry Collection: Simple Poetry by Cwiddy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Here is a small collect of 3 Haikus and one Tanka

A poem on Harry and Ginny, one on Remus and Tonks, one on the battle between Harry and Voldemort and the last is about Harry the night of the final battle.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 108 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/09/07 Updated: 02/15/07


Reviewer: Gemma Hawk Signed
Date: 02/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Three Haikus and a Tanka

Very cool poems! I especially liked the last one. You managed to create a descriptive secene with only a few lines! Very nice!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed them. :)

 

Lily's Smile by Trueillusions1
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Lily Potter has spent her whole life in the shadow of her father and brothers, but can the magic of her smile shine through all of that to make her own path in the world. Lily is a fourth-year Gryffindor and is dating a sixth-year Slytherin, Scorpius Malfoy. How will their family's react when they find out? Will their relationship help mend old feuds or will it be torn apart by them?

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 2656 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/29/07 Updated: 09/06/07


Reviewer: Gemma Hawk Signed
Date: 06/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Courage to Write

*squee*
Okay, sorry, this is just one of those stories that make me smile :) Maybe it's the foribidden love, I don't know!

Just one thing- maybe you could have been slightly more in depth with the descriptions? But I get that this is the opening chapter, and therefor the "real" story starts after the letter.

But I really look forward to reading more!

 
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