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Cry Lily, God Just Cry by Lilysdancin
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 45]

Summary: This fic takes place the 1`st year Lily and James get out of Hogwarts and the couple you love to love are not together!! Find out what went wrong when they were going out 7th yr. through flashbacks Lily, James and the gang have of Hogwarts. Also, Portrays the lives Lily, James and all their friends had while young and on their own in the wizarding world. Story w/ lots of twists, humor, drama, suspense, romance. READ AND REVIEW Its different from most Lily James stories but in a good believable way with lotz of flashbacks!!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 4520 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
11/27/04 Updated: 03/23/06


Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/23/05 Title: Chapter 3: Freaking Idiot!

wonderful! are you giong to update anytime soon?! i would really like to know what sirius' plan is!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: World on Fire

different...you're right it's not very easy to understand yet. like what happened with lily's parents? or what was james so depressed about? or why did they split before school ended? or, most importantly, what going on NOW?! please update soon!

 

Meant To Be by chloish
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 679]

Summary: "What can I say?" James shrugged his shoulders. "We are just obviously,"



"Completely,"


"Irrefutably,"


"Logically,"


"Undeniably,"


"Unfortunately,"


James laughed, "Meant to be."






Lily Evans and James Potter share absolutely nothing in common, not even their feelings for each other. Lily, perceived as a ‘model student,’ detests the handsome, popular, Quidditch star James, who she thinks to be something of a git. James, on the contrary, has been infatuated with Lily for years, and has let her and the whole school know it.





As time progresses into Voldemort’s ‘reign of terror,’ the two have to learn to trust, tolerate, and love each other.





Please note, this story is incomplete, and will likely remain so for a long time. I apologize!





Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 46881 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
01/09/05 Updated: 11/02/05


Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/02/05 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 ˝ - An Unwelcome Query

excellent, excellent! how's james going to smooth this one over? you've got plenty of reviews, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you :) The next chapter is in queue. ^_^

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/05/05 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste

*bursts into tears* LILY QUIT BEING SUCH A B****!!! i mean... um... stubborn... and... all... that...*blushes* in a more pleasent note, lily needs to open her eyes to what she can't live without!! grrr!! please update soon.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/08/05 Title: None

all right! action, action, action!! but what happened to lily at the end? i can't wait for her and james's talk. update soon! very, very soon!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/02/05 Title: None

SWEET LOLLYPOPS!! WHAT HAPPENS!! WILL HE BLAME HER AND GET MAD AT HER FOR BEING SO STUPID AND LEADING HIM INTO THAT?! OR WILL HE...DO SOMETHING ELSE?! HOW DO THEY ESCAPE?! LORD ALMIGHTLY, YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/05/05 Title: None

oh lucky me, number one!! two questions and i want them answered in the next chapter. 1. how will james and lily interact. will it be his fault, her fault, or both just love each other for being alive? 2. how on earth did sirius get there? update soon! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. As you know, I've already written 40 chapters, so I can't just change the next chapter to incorporate your questions. You will find out the first question not in the next chapter but in the chapter following that. And just to let you know: James had shown Sirius the letter he had received from Malfoy saying Lily was hurt. Therefore, when Sirius thought James was in trouble, he knew exactly where to go.

 

All's Well That Ends Well? by Shock
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 529]

Summary: James and Lily-their seventh year. We all know what happens in the end, but what about the beginning? In their last year at Hogwarts, mysteries unravel, friends are betrayed, and, of course, couples destined to be fall in love.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 52912 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
01/23/05 Updated: 07/19/06


Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/13/05 Title: Chapter 16: Reunion

yeah please clear up the whole bella making them dream and then waking up or whatever i still don't get what happened! anyway, Remus is being a prat, can't he see that he's hurting her more trying to protect her than he would be by not trying to protect her? anyway, update soon! great fic!

Author's Response: Yes, Remus has some personal issues to figure out. Don't worry about the whole confusing dreams stuff- I know what will happen and it will all make sense in the end! Thanks for reviewing!

 

Canis Majoris by trinsy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 645]

Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 56522 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/27/05 Updated: 04/04/06


Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 10/13/05 Title: Chapter 19: Charmed and Charmed Again

oh i love the romance between james and lily....:D....it's so cute and right....but when will they figure out red eyes isn't after sirius and james any longer but james and lily? when does that come into play? and i wouldn't mind some more of the angsty fighting!.....no offense just stating my opinion. carry on!

Author's Response: Thank you.... *becomes almost as mysterious as the talented JKR herself* I can't answer those questions, mwahaha! ... but angsty fighting... I love angsty fighting... angsty fighting... bring it on!

 

Summary: "Oh who can tell, save those whose hearts hath tried.” -Lord Byron. Inspired by a line of poetry by Lord Byron, this is the first in a series (hopefully) on Lily, James, and eventually Harry Potter. Lily and James' seventh and final year at Hogwarts. Post HBP with a bit of AU thrown in.





Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 11394 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
07/01/05 Updated: 08/19/06


Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 10/28/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Fresh as a Daisy

great! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: it's coming!

 

Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 78521 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/17/05 Updated: 07/21/06


Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 03/18/06 Title: Chapter 19: Saving Snape

Wow. Just... Wow. That's quite the chapter. You blended the frustration and heartbreak Sirius was feeling into his motives for sending Snape after Remus well. Great characterization with Peter. And God, James, that poor, poor boy. His year has been an absolute hell, and now to ice the cake, Remus will be found out (or so he thinks). But where had Snape gone? I'm guessing Dumbledore? Hmm... dunno. And what about Lily? Sorry she had to break up with Branden, he sounded like a nice guy, but I think I'd prefer James. Which was what Braden thought Lily was thinking, so he dumped her. How'd she get the alcohol? And, dear Lord, how will she react when she's told what happened? Or will James tell her? How will she explain getting drunk on Firewhiskey to Dumbledore? James will probably go to the hospital wing, so will Lily stay there too? Or how will she get back to her dorm? Will James have to take her to his? When she was rambling off all of her hidden truths, I though she was finally going to say what you have written in your summary. But, just to torture us, you keep us waiting. Anyway, back to Snape. How will the two parties (Marauders vs. Snape) interact around each other now? Ugh, that's a lot of questions. Questions that you better answer in the next chapter. Hmm... You write well. You're discriptive just so we can get the picture, but you aren't so in-depth you're spouting off how each rain drop sounds when it hits the earth. Wonderful overall. ~*~ Danielle :)

Author's Response: Hi! Wow, many, many interesting and intriguing questions. Heheh, I'm very flattered that you enjoyed all the characterization of the characters, and also the level of description. Your review is very flattering. Thanks SO much! I hope all your questions will be answered in the future! Thanks once again!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 03/18/06 Title: Chapter 19: Saving Snape

Oops, sorry, I think it's Brendan, not Branden. Mixed the vowels. :)

Author's Response: Heheh, no worries there, lol! There are so many ways to spell the same name.

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 10/23/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Duel

wow...omg omg omg...where's he going!?!?! omg i have to know!!!

Author's Response: Heheh, it's funny you say that because that is what chapter six reveals! Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/30/05 Title: Chapter 1: Crumble to Ash

beautful with the piano! wonderful way of having a moment between lily and james! but what did the note say? update soon! great job!

Author's Response: Hi there! You'll find out soon what the note said. Really, it's nothing too big, just very... subtle... Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 10/29/05 Title: Chapter 6: One Winter Night

i agree with the last two, please, please, please don't make james like audrey! AND WHO'S JAMIE?! ugh, now that's bugging me! update soon!

Author's Response: Hehhe, sorry if I keep my readers in the dark, but I guess that's the way I write, lol! I just sent chapter seven in, so it shouldn't be too long from now. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 04/14/06 Title: Chapter 21: Wine Tasting

Oh my gosh, this new site style is going to take some getting used to.

FINALLY! I love reading their first kiss. It's so... relieving after waiting and waiting for them to get together. You did it wonderfully, with a the whole opposites thing going on. Sun/moon, rain w/ no clouds. Very orginial discription. I hope there's another chapter; I want to read everyone's reactions!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 04/03/06 Title: Chapter 20: Eternally Bound

Brilliant, simply brilliant, but you know what we need now? Some LILY/JAMES action! You've managed to avoid it in this chapter, but that only means that in the next you'll have to tell what happened to Lily. And will Audrey and Sirius part on at lease good terms? Oh, and I loved the last line about Audrey always understanding. Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Some Lily/James action? LOL! Yes, yes, I will tell about what happened to Lily... or will I? Heheh, you'll find out as soon as I update! Tehe. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 11/13/05 Title: Chapter 8: A Sneak into the Night

I still don't like Audrey... I think she's starting to like James though if she doesn't already... I hope they don't hook up... and please update soon! I want to know what happens to Lily! And find out what she's doing in the first place. Is she going after Fang or is she checking out something else and just didn't want anyone to find her so she led Hagrid astray? I don't know, that probably makes no sense. Long story short: Love it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Wow! Your idea sounds fabulous! I understand what you're getting at. Pretty cool. You'll have to read the next chapter to find out though. Thanks a bunch for the review!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 12/10/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Christmas Party

Oh... My... God... SIRIUS AND AUDREY! Oh my God.... That was a major turn around! The only thing I can say is update soon!

Author's Response: HAHAH! I love your reaction. I was hoping many people would be surprised. I'll be sure to update a.s.a.p! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: grape_2010 Signed
Date: 02/02/06 Title: Chapter 14: Failing for the First Time

Damn, when are things going to start looking up for James? He was so close. SO CLOSE! *huffs out a breath* I hate Lily. I hate Brendan. Poor, poor James. I almost want to cry for him! Great chapter though, and great story! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Awww, I feel for James too. He just can't seem to get it right sometimes. Heheh, really glad you're liking it so far, and I'll update soon! Thank-you!

 
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