thanks for reading!
this is a very good start
Author's Response: Thanks! I plan on working up to something big. I'm going to write a short sequal to this, the first 2 weeks of school. And then I'm going to write to toher stories, Everything's Changing and Secret Feelings, which will pick up from the end of that, and will be two point of views of the 6th school year.: SF will be Luna's and her crush on Ron, and E'sC will be about the 6th school year from the reg. 3rd person view. I hope it's gonna be really good (I know it's going to be challenging for me!)
Author's Response: BTW - I loved Watching Ron.