Writing is hard when you are nurlogaly incapeable of spelling...
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hahahah aw cute.. and a lovy slogan for a teashirt too..
hahahah aw cute.. and a lovy slogan for a teashirt too..
Academic Discourse by adjectived noun
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 23]
Summary: 1993. The passive-aggressive wife of a Death Eater harangues the passive-aggressive Professor of Defence Against the Dark Arts. Hilarity ensues.
I read this story a wile ago and it’s always bothered my that I didn’t review it, as it is with out a doubt the finest piece of HP hummer Fan Fic I have ever read. You were perfectly in character, the plot and scenario were very believable and nothing in it was far fetched what so ever. Very few humor fix out there managed to combine the first two elements. Over a month later I still remembered the title- and what attracted me to the story. Mazl Tov on a job well done!
Tasks by Blakeney Green
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Set during PS/SS, with implications for HBP, this story explores the question of why Snape saved Harry. Was it a simple life debt, or were darker, more sinister forces at work? One-shot, complete.
hehehe I love this one I read it months ago and wantted more- and Ive reqad ti twice today.. keeping comady fics oc is difactlt you did a tremusedues job. PLESE update soon.. thanks Zara
I Don't by Madame Marauder
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Severus Snape refuses to drink since it reminds him of his father. However, Snape has put the past behind him and has moved on with his life. Of course, the past always has a way of catching up, and one summer's day in the Hog's Head, it does.
I like this one. Mostly beouse I engoyed seeiing snape sand up for something even if it ment tstandign up to malfoy.
PS soory about the spelling Im learing Disabled
Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed my story. I love making readers happy. You\'re review made me smile; I\'m glad someone else likes seeing Snape stand up for his beliefs. We see so little of that in the series. Thanks for your review. -MadMar
A Night to Forget by Alessandra_C
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Dumbledore has been killed, and Snape and Draco leave Hogwarts (for good?). Where have they gone? What was passing through their minds? A look at a missing scene in "Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince".
Hi, I liked this story- it drew me in and was very believable- your portrayal of Snape Draco and Peter was very nice. I was a bit thrown off by the multiple points of view, but I loved they way it was so easily to visualize what was going on. I can’t wait for the next installment. Good Job
Author's Response: Many thanks for reviewing !
I\'m sorry you had trouble with the multiple points of view. Yes, that was a pretty crowded chapter. Don\'t worry, that won\'t happen again. I\'ll post another chapter very soon. I just hope it won\'t took the mods too long to upload it. This first part took like eternity!
Enjoy your reading and keep reviewing.
Love
Alessandra
Mistakes of an Old Man by blackhairedweasley
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]
Summary: A poem detailing Cornelius Fudge's thoughts after the battle in the Department of Mysteries.
Aww poor Fudge. I like the bit about Cedraic.
Author's Response: Thanks! - Jacie the Cat
Lazing on a Sunday Afternoon by MaiaMadness
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]
Summary: “I go off to work on Monday morning. Tuesday I go off to Honeymoon. I’ll be back again before it’s time for sunny-down. I’ll be lazing on a Sunday afternoon.” The thoughts of Cornelius Fudge right before he goes to see the Muggle Prime Minister, grumbling about what a good life he had.
Cute, totally in character and makes us feel both amused by and saddened for Fudge at the same time. I love how you have him thinking Percy shouldn’t have to get in trouble because of him, and admitting however reluctantly that he was wrong. I like it.
Author's Response: I\'m glad I succeded in doing what I set out to do! Thank you!
Worn Away by Cherry and Phoenix Feather
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]
Summary: "He never did anything hastily anymore. He had been hasty in his youth, and now all he had to show for it was an empty heart and an empty cabin."
Written by cherryandphoenixfeather of Hufflepuff for the May Monthly Challege #1--Pilgrimage.
Sniff.. aww that was encrable.. ive wanted to read somethign like this for a very long time... it was wonderfuly bitter sweet and very resalic- angery dose slow over time..
One with the Shadows by whittyleah
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Draco finds a way to move like the shadow...will he let it overtake him?
Winner of the May Monthly Challenge number two by Whittyleah of Gryffindor house!
You used a lot of lurid imagery here, and took what might have been a tired allegory and give it strong meaning. I was thrown off at first by the time line- that it took Draco so little time to get from where he was to the tree and lake. That's when I realized it was (most likely) a dream sequence, (though you never come out and say so- nice touch). My only criticism is the internal dialog didn't sound how I would imagination Draco, but that could be just me. All and all a well written an pointed fic.
Author's Response: Thank you! I haven\'t got a review in a while!! *hugs*
Wings by MaiaMadness
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]
Summary:
Wow that was powerfull. And hevy. great Fic
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, and I\'m glad you liked it! :)
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Soory I wasnt clear- i mean i want to know why he came in with the falcle bood - why that MO...
Author's Response: Oh, to trick her. He knew Avalon was really quite predictable, so yeah...
Griping and deatiled. now i have to know what casused all this. And why he staged his owndeath to start with....
Author's Response: Uriah staged his own death? Oh well.
Thanks for the review!
Sit Down Potter by Starmom
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 45]
Summary: We love writing stories about our favorite characters in our favorite universe. But what do those characters DO when we're taking a break, suffering from writer's block or abandon a story? A 'behind the scenes' look with a lot of cliches.
HAHHAHAHah
Oh... This was priceless.
I loved the way you mad “LV”'s angst believable. And Snape and Sybille was great.
Author's Response: LV, Sybil, Snape and I thank you very much!
starmom
He's Best for Me by nikkiolapotter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A bride reflects on her future husband.
You have nice meter here, and the format is clean and simple.
I like the way you sort of give Narsisa the appearance of having her own option on this- but you don't come right out and say it, you just say “My mother says,” and “so i must.” giving us the impression of her thoughts, but leavening us unsure what they are. Good Job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was my second attempt at poetry (the first is with my beta), and I\'m glad I did it right! I love fleshy reviews like this...
