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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 06/09/06 Title: None

hahahah aw cute.. and a lovy slogan for a teashirt too..

 
Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 06/09/06 Title: None

hahahah aw cute.. and a lovy slogan for a teashirt too..

 

Academic Discourse by adjectived noun
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: 1993. The passive-aggressive wife of a Death Eater harangues the passive-aggressive Professor of Defence Against the Dark Arts. Hilarity ensues.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1835 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/01/05 Updated: 09/01/05


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 05/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Academic Discourse

I read this story a wile ago and it’s always bothered my that I didn’t review it, as it is with out a doubt the finest piece of HP hummer Fan Fic I have ever read. You were perfectly in character, the plot and scenario were very believable and nothing in it was far fetched what so ever. Very few humor fix out there managed to combine the first two elements. Over a month later I still remembered the title- and what attracted me to the story. Mazl Tov on a job well done!

 

Tasks by Blakeney Green
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Set during PS/SS, with implications for HBP, this story explores the question of why Snape saved Harry. Was it a simple life debt, or were darker, more sinister forces at work? One-shot, complete.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1318 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/08/06 Updated: 02/08/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 06/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Tasks (One-Shot)

hehehe I love this one I read it months ago and wantted more- and Ive reqad ti twice today.. keeping comady fics oc is difactlt you did a tremusedues job. PLESE update soon.. thanks Zara

 

I Don't by Madame Marauder
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Severus Snape refuses to drink since it reminds him of his father. However, Snape has put the past behind him and has moved on with his life. Of course, the past always has a way of catching up, and one summer's day in the Hog's Head, it does.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Substance Abuse

Word count: 1425 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/04/06 Updated: 03/04/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 04/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I like this one. Mostly beouse I engoyed seeiing snape sand up for something even if it ment tstandign up to malfoy. PS soory about the spelling Im learing Disabled

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed my story. I love making readers happy. You\'re review made me smile; I\'m glad someone else likes seeing Snape stand up for his beliefs. We see so little of that in the series. Thanks for your review. -MadMar

 

A Night to Forget by Alessandra_C
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Dumbledore has been killed, and Snape and Draco leave Hogwarts (for good?). Where have they gone? What was passing through their minds? A look at a missing scene in "Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince".


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Suicide

Word count: 5895 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/26/06 Updated: 07/27/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 05/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Tempers Run High

Hi, I liked this story- it drew me in and was very believable- your portrayal of Snape Draco and Peter was very nice. I was a bit thrown off by the multiple points of view, but I loved they way it was so easily to visualize what was going on. I can’t wait for the next installment. Good Job

Author's Response: Many thanks for reviewing ! I\'m sorry you had trouble with the multiple points of view. Yes, that was a pretty crowded chapter. Don\'t worry, that won\'t happen again. I\'ll post another chapter very soon. I just hope it won\'t took the mods too long to upload it. This first part took like eternity! Enjoy your reading and keep reviewing. Love Alessandra

 

Mistakes of an Old Man by blackhairedweasley
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: A poem detailing Cornelius Fudge's thoughts after the battle in the Department of Mysteries.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 296 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/29/06 Updated: 04/29/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 09/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww poor Fudge. I like the bit about Cedraic.

Author's Response: Thanks! - Jacie the Cat

 

Lazing on a Sunday Afternoon by MaiaMadness
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: “I go off to work on Monday morning. Tuesday I go off to Honeymoon. I’ll be back again before it’s time for sunny-down. I’ll be lazing on a Sunday afternoon.” The thoughts of Cornelius Fudge right before he goes to see the Muggle Prime Minister, grumbling about what a good life he had.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 905 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/01/06 Updated: 05/07/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 05/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Lazing on a Sunday Afternoon


Cute, totally in character and makes us feel both amused by and saddened for Fudge at the same time. I love how you have him thinking Percy shouldn’t have to get in trouble because of him, and admitting however reluctantly that he was wrong. I like it.


Author's Response: I\'m glad I succeded in doing what I set out to do! Thank you!

 

Worn Away by Cherry and Phoenix Feather
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: "He never did anything hastily anymore. He had been hasty in his youth, and now all he had to show for it was an empty heart and an empty cabin."





Written by cherryandphoenixfeather of Hufflepuff for the May Monthly Challege #1--Pilgrimage.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1077 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/05/06 Updated: 06/06/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 06/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Worn Away

Sniff.. aww that was encrable.. ive wanted to read somethign like this for a very long time... it was wonderfuly bitter sweet and very resalic- angery dose slow over time..

 

One with the Shadows by whittyleah
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Draco finds a way to move like the shadow...will he let it overtake him?





Winner of the May Monthly Challenge number two by Whittyleah of Gryffindor house!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 897 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/13/06 Updated: 06/16/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 12/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

You used a lot of lurid imagery here, and took what might have been a tired allegory and give it strong meaning. I was thrown off at first by the time line- that it took Draco so little time to get from where he was to the tree and lake. That's when I realized it was (most likely) a dream sequence, (though you never come out and say so- nice touch). My only criticism is the internal dialog didn't sound how I would imagination Draco, but that could be just me. All and all a well written an pointed fic.

Author's Response: Thank you! I haven\'t got a review in a while!! *hugs*

 

Wings by MaiaMadness
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary:

"Ten-thousand days in the fire is long enough; you're going home. You're the only one who can hold your head up high, shake your fist at the gate saying: "I've come home now! Fetch me the Spirit, the Son and the Father. Tell them their pillar of faith has ascended. It's my time now, give me my wings!"



Harry sits at St. Mungo's, waiting for the death of his friend; waiting, hoping and praying that Remus will pass from this Earth at last, happy and complete, with no more pain. Praying that he'll get his wings, because no one deserves them more.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 1097 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/29/06 Updated: 08/08/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: 10.000 Days

Wow that was powerfull. And hevy. great Fic

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, and I\'m glad you liked it! :)

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 09/16/06 Title: None

Soory I wasnt clear- i mean i want to know why he came in with the falcle bood - why that MO...

Author's Response: Oh, to trick her. He knew Avalon was really quite predictable, so yeah...

 
Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: None

Griping and deatiled. now i have to know what casused all this. And why he staged his owndeath to start with....

Author's Response: Uriah staged his own death? Oh well. Thanks for the review!

 

Sit Down Potter by Starmom
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 45]

Summary: We love writing stories about our favorite characters in our favorite universe. But what do those characters DO when we're taking a break, suffering from writer's block or abandon a story? A 'behind the scenes' look with a lot of cliches.


Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 4404 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/27/06 Updated: 12/05/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 12/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAHHAHAHah
Oh... This was priceless.
I loved the way you mad “LV”'s angst believable. And Snape and Sybille was great.

Author's Response: LV, Sybil, Snape and I thank you very much! starmom

 

He's Best for Me by nikkiolapotter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: A bride reflects on her future husband.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 100 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/04/06 Updated: 12/06/06


Reviewer: Zara Ravenwood Signed
Date: 12/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: He's Best for Me

You have nice meter here, and the format is clean and simple.
I like the way you sort of give Narsisa the appearance of having her own option on this- but you don't come right out and say it, you just say “My mother says,” and “so i must.” giving us the impression of her thoughts, but leavening us unsure what they are. Good Job.


Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was my second attempt at poetry (the first is with my beta), and I\'m glad I did it right! I love fleshy reviews like this...

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