I am 19 years old and I like Novel Length fanfiction. Not too big on Romance fics compared to Humor and Adventure. I can only seem to write humor myself, and never anything too lengthy.
Written for Challenge #1. Ever so slight HBP spoilers. Forum Name: skarm House: Ravenclaw
I have seen you writing for many months now, skarmy, and I think this is your best work to date. A lot of your other work comes off masterful but strained. I suppose that is what happens when you have to organize an expansive plot and keep things in order. It is not always easy. One-shots suit you well, that is for certain. The entire symbolism at the end was great, highlighted by the scarf. I know the scarf is not the only part of it, but it is the best one, I believe.
That was very good. At least the good ole rhyme time was. Kreacher's singing was quite amusing.
Certainly one of the better Challenge 6 fics I have read, I like the fact that you took a challenge that was filled with seriousness and turned it into something with good humor.
Good Kreacher 'accent,' by the way.
I was wondering why she was asian, but if my gut is correct it was so you could rhyme 'song.'
Author's Response: Yes, it's for the rhyme *grin* was in the mood for light pointless fun and this just seemed to be the challenge wherein that's possible since I've already doe the 12 days of Christmas.
Thank for the review :)
I liked this quite a bit. It's a fresh angle on the whole redemption take and it had a lot of the ideas I love in a story. I like your description of Harry as he wrote the letter, it's apt and very realistic. Although, as soon as I read that every drop must be taken I rolled my eyes a bit, but that cannot be helped, I read far too many stories. My one problem with this story is "pain worse than any Cruciatus." That is just so corny to me, and those kind of lines will always be a pet peeve of mine. Nonetheless, excellent fic.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, as well as taking the time to review. This idea seriously just popped into my mind, and so it did not have a lot of time to work out. Also, it is my first foray (sp?) at writing something like this.