I am a 30 year old teacher obsessed with HP. It's quite sad actually. My friends have threatened to disown me because of it. My favorite character is Snape and I believe he is good, so don't try to convince me otherwise. I write mostly about him because let's face it, the guy needs some lovin'.
Aw, that was really sweet and sad. I envy your flair for description. You really paint a vivid picture of the surroundings and the mood. I like how he was admiring her from afar, wanting to be with her but unable to be. Nicely done!
I was so excited to see that this was up today! I love seeing things through Dean's eyes and I like that you've chosen a minor character as your protagonist. We know very little about Dean and it's interesting to see his point of view on things. Good work! : )
Author's Response: Thank you my wonderful beta reader :)