Penname: Naomi Evans [Contact]
Real name: Sarah
Member Since: 11/10/04
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I love Harry Potter and I love to write. I've already written a book, but I'm scared to turn it in. I wanted to see if people liked my writing style before I send it into the publishers. Just to let you know I haven't spent the large amount of time on my Fanfic as I have my story. But I'll change that soon enough. So let me know people. And thanks for reading it means alot to me. ;)
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"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 11/10/04 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting with Dumbledore

I love this story! It is really good. I would like you to hurry up and let us have some more. Although it is not exciting yet, it is an interesting take on on the James and Lily love story. Keep on writing!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 11/10/04 Title: None

It's not too bad at all. I think that the story is great, but the lyrics in between the text made it hard to stay with the story. It's a good idea, but I think that next time just stick with the writing. Your a good writer!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 12/13/04 Title: None

NO! You can't leave us hanging like this. Well at leasted you posted one more before you left. Its' great. I wonder what Harry and Ginny will do now. It's a good place to snog if you ask me. Hee hee....

 
Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 12/09/04 Title: None

Wow! I'm really impressed with you work. It seemes to me that this is exactly what J.K. might do in the sixth book. Some of the Characters aren't exactly right, but on the whole your story is entertaining and very good. Please don't stop writing. And hurry up with your finals. I know they are important, (I hate finals!) But I'm waiting for you to finish. I'm so impatient, especially with a story I like. So keep up the good work.

 

True Design by Arianna
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: Lily tries to recognize her fate, and figure out her life and what has happened in this One-Shot Songfic. (Somebody by Bonnie McKee) The chapter does not include lyrics.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1490 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/17/04 Updated: 12/29/04


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 02/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: Why She Fell

Hey girl! I like it! Very interesting. I love the lyrics that you added to it. A nice touch actually. I think that most people feel that way at one time or another. And I wish it wasen't a one shot thing. For our own sanity, write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Muahhahaha! Your sanity is in my grasp! Really though, this is a one shot as I don't know what I'd write next, and I've got two other fics in the works that deserve more attention. MY sanity is more important than yours, just kidding. Thank you though, I really do love this fan fic, and I'm glad other people like it too.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 03/02/05 Title: None

It's very good. Hurry and update it! I can't wait!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 03/02/05 Title: None

Not too bad at all. Interesting how you did the dream. But just a suggestion. You could just make the transition from the dream to reality by saying that Ginny woke up from her nightmare..etc. So that way you don't break the flow of the story with *end of dream*. Otherwise not too bad. Although I do agree that was out of Character for Harry, but it was a dream.

 

Summary: After Harry mysteriously disappears after the final battle, Ginny is left with nothing. She experiences a pain that she never thought one person could feel. Harry just happens to be feeling this pain as well. Will Ginny ever see Harry again or will she just have to live with her pain forever? one-shot--please review! i think this came out really good so please take 5 minutes to read it and review!

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2583 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/27/05 Updated: 03/01/05


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 03/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Pain Felt

OMG I loved it! It was so sweet! I love stories like this. Maybe you could write another chapter about their kids or something. Yeah, I know it is only a one shot. But I loved it alot!!!!!

Author's Response: im glad you loved it! you might want to check out my story now or never which is similar to this one...but its a lot longer (8 chapters are posted right now) and when im done with that im writing another story about Harry and Ginny and their kids in the future. I hope you read those and thanks for reviewing!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 05/12/05 Title: None

This is great so far! I like it. I can't wait to see if the bugs work on Hermione and Ron. I love the things that the Twins have come up with; it was funny!

 
Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 05/12/05 Title: None

Oooo! That's a freaky dream! I liked this chapter alot. It was very interesting. I wonder what it all means. Very good! I liked it alot!

Author's Response: Just to let you all know, I am currently revamping this story as it is wildly apparent that I will not be finishing it before HBP. Thanks for reading!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 05/20/05 Title: None

This was great! I like it alot. It's very impressive that English is your native tongue. hurry up and write your next chapter I can't wait! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I cant believe so many people like it=) trying to update but it seems like those who accept the stories hate me=)

 

Love Always, Ginny by DeerKillerBeemer
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 51]

Summary: AU as of the release of HBP.

i'm suffering MAJOR writer's block, but i'm working on it!

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 16005 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
04/02/05 Updated: 05/14/06


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 05/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: His First Letter from Her

Not too bad. I like it. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks..I'm having some trouble with my second chapter getting validated...but look for it soon...hopefully!^-^

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 05/20/05 Title: None

That was great! You've got to update soon. I love the way that Ginny tells Harry how it is and that its like it's his turn to wait for her. I'm so scared for Ginny! I hope she lives.....sad if she doesn't. Great story keep writing.

Author's Response: Lucky for you, the story just got edited today! Thanks for reviewing.

 

Promises to Keep by Gemmika
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 676]

Summary: It's been six years since Harry and Ginny have come face to face. Different career oprions led them in different paths than they had hoped but now at the wedding of Ron and Hermione they are forced back together. Will their fragile love survive the troubles that haunt their pasts? Rated "R" for Sexual scenes, Teen Pregnancy and Spousal Abuse in this story.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Sexual Situations

Word count: 30099 Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Published:
05/06/05 Updated: 02/13/07


Reviewer: Naomi Evans Signed
Date: 05/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home

OMG! Don't you dare leave it there! I would die if you don't finish it. I don't even care if it ends sad, just by all means finish it. PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that everyone likes it! It is my new baby!

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