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Beaten and Blown by dreamsnape
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Snape meets with Lily in a graveyard, hoping to continue his friendship with her, and hoping that it may become something more. But she isn't who she seems to be, and years will pass before either of them learn the truth.

Categories: Severus/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6638 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
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10/23/13 Updated: 10/27/13


Reviewer: nborchers Signed
Date: 12/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

This is a neat addition to the story! Really liked the way it was written, especially the dialogue. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks Neil! I just now found this review--I didn't realize that you'd posted it before.

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