Good job so far, I like. Ok, I have a suggestion (might be lame, but I dont know). What if Harry were to play a prank on Sirius for fun and totally mess with his head? That might be funny. I dont know. I'm really enjoying the story, keep it up.
Author's Response: thanks so much! glad you like it...hopefully the mods will FINALLY get it up!! (5 months in counting!!)
Summary: Seventh year has begun and Hermione Granger has found herself in great danger. What is the secret behind Voldemort's sudden change in targets, and what dangers lie in store for the trio? Riddled with plot twists and cliffhangers--the Potter Universe is in for a surprise. (This story is Pre-HBP)
That was so sad. I can't believe that Harry is blaming himself again. I can't wait to see whats going to happen next!
Author's Response: Soon in chapter 6, we will also see to what extent Harry will go to save his life. No clue why i said that :D its like a spoiler now :O well um ya. One person cried :O But just remember this sometimes things that are bad turn out to be a good thing, but not always. Keep that in mind. Thanks for your review!
Summary: Harry, Ron and Hermione are spending a day in the small wizarding village of Hogsmeade when they happen to come upon a strange amulet lying in the snow. This amulet has amazing powers and transports the three friends to Salem, Massachusetts in the year 1692 when Muggles lived in fear of witches and wizards and the penalty for being able to perform magic was death.
Love the story! I hope that Harry and Ron can figure something out. Please don't let Hermione die! I love the idea of the trio in Salem. Its great! Update soon!!!
"Why twice?" Is Dumbledore trying to make Harry stronger and able to overcome the possibility of his friends dying? Is he going to make Ron dead to Harry to prove his point?? That would be torture, I feel so bad for Harry! I hope I'm wrong, but it would make for a good story! 10/10 Great Job! Update!!
Love it love it! Okay, is Rebecca someone who is going to be hanged?? Is she Rebecca Nurse?? Update! Update!
Amazing. Sad, but wonderfully written.
I was moved by the last few lines. Very wise, but very sad.
I hope Harry can recover sometime.
Summary: Harry is getting ready to fight. With trials along the way, Harry will have to make Voldemort mortal before the final battle. Many ships going on in here...
Hey! I love the story. 10/10, it's so good! I hope that was Ginny's door that Harry was knocking on. Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it up! ~Kate
Summary: After his talk with Ginny after Dumbledore's funeral, Harry has been avoiding her eyes. When they finally meet at Bill's wedding, a sinking and raging in his insides take place.
Post HBP. One shot. My version of Bill's wedding and Harry's summer. Read, Review and Enjoy!
Great story! I liked it, I'm definitely going to read your other one. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It means alot to me!
Good start. I like what you have done so far. I hope you continue with the story soon. I gave you an eight out of ten. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the 8! :)
Wow. That was very well written. Poor Hermione! I like Luna's new personality. She is so much more aware with what is going on around her now, but I still like the old Luna. It's a great start. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will keep it up; I'm currently writing chapter three :D
Summary: The poem is from Harry's point of view just after the events at the end of HBP. Basically, letting all his fears and feelings show through to her (you know who "her" is). He knows that things are dark, but he still holds onto the little bit of light through his love.
Oh wow...verypowerful. Normally I don't read poetry, but this one definitly caught my attention. Very nicely written!
Summary: This is the story of the adventures of Lily and James Potter as they watch their son grow up from afar, only allowed these small moments....
great start, update soon! i love it so far! =)
Summary: Harry is leaving the Durseley's just in time for Bill and Fleur's wedding... But something horrible happens leaving everyone wishing they were somewhere else.
Ok, very good! I liked it and didn't really find it confusing at all. The only part was the last part, why were they all mad? [they were mad, right?] other than that I thought that it was a very good start!
Author's Response: thanks! its positive comments like yours that keep my writing!
Summary: A story about Harry Potter's children growing up and becoming legends in their own right. Full of heated arguements, glowering girlfriends, and a rival too good-looking to be considered fair.
Chapter Eight Now Up!
Chapter Eight Excerpt:
'"This morning," McGonagall began, her face white. "I was greeted by two hysterical young girls from Ravenclaw. They informed me that they, along with their best friend Melanie Trumpett, were approached by a cloaked figure who appeared to have came from the Forbidden Forest. These two girls tried to persuade their friend to come along with them, as they were cautious of the stranger, but they said that Ms. Trumpett was answering oddly. She didn't look the same, and her eyes looked "funny"...'
Ooh I like where this story's going! The poem was great, too! Update soon! =D
Author's Response: Ahh! Thanks so much! =D
Summary: Fourth Chapter Up! Sorry For The Wait!.
Three years have passed since Harry realizes that there is nothing left for him in the world he has grown up in. When he returns, he is surprised at how things have changed. What surprises him the most is how Ginny seems to have moved on...and how she claims that her two-year-old son is theirs...
I really like the story so far! I wonder what Harry will think if he comes back. Update soon!
Author's Response: Trying.
Summary: Lara Winston is a regular teenager--she's fourteen, loves books, and has her own garden full of plants and flowers. Her sarcastic attitude sometimes gets her in trouble, and her cat is the same way. Her grandparents are very old-fashioned, but that's why she loves them. Then, one night, Harry Potter comes to her bedroom--and her whole world is turned upsidedown.
Hey! Love the story! Keep up the FANTASTIC writing!!! =)
Author's Response: Hey Kate! Thank you very much, but you spoil me with all your compliments. You are THE best beta I\'ve ever had, and I hope you like Ch 3!
Great chapter as usual! Can't wait for the next one! I really like where you're going with this story! =D
And I hope you had a very Happy Birthday!!
Author's Response: I did, thank you, Kate! Chapter six is being hatched as we speak. :D
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Great Great Great Story!!!!!
Keep up the FANTASTIC writing!!!
Looking foward to the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: I like taking complement showers, they are very refreshing. XD Thanks, Kate. I hope it gets validated soon!
Yay! It was accepted!
Author's Response: As always, Kate, these complimant showers do my swelled head no good. ^-^ Thanks!
Summary: Dumbledore’s gone and Harry, Ron and Hermione have returned to Privet Drive to start their search for the Horcruxes. Their plan not to return to Hogwarts is changed with the reading of Dumbledore’s will. Harry must discover that his friends are a greater help then he can imagine and how to use the “Power the Dark Lord knows not.” With a little romance, action, mystery and even Quidditch along the way, Harry will find out if he and his friends can defeat the greatest Dark Wizard of the age.
This story was completely written before the release of DH or the Order of the Phoenix movie. Any similarities are entirely coincidental.
All reviews will recieve a response!
This story is really awesome! I can't wait to find out what happens between Harry and Ginny and how they deal with Voldemort! Ooh what was happing with Ginny and Ernie?! Looking forward to the next chapter!! Update! 10/10! =D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful words. I can\'t tell you how encouraging it is to hear that the reviewers are enjoying things. The next chapter should be submitted by the end of the weekend so hopefully next week. Take care!