Just a fan :) Especially of the wonderful fan fiction around
I just finished reading your story. it was a delight to read and a great way of adding some positive insight to Snapes rather dark life. You did a great job and the humour as well as the language was great. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments! You're the first reader to leave me a review in over three years. You made my day!
Thanks for an interesting first chapter!
So a few thoughts that went through my mind when reading it:
- nice with a poem at the beginning
- french? Do anybody know that sentence, or would they have to look it up like me?
- Is it a flashback or real time? Not really sure... But I like his imagination of himself as an old man.
- Nice detail with the metaphor of the mountain and Lily.
Overall a lot of depth and strength in the story and it makes you want to read on and see what is hiding on the other side.
I am curious :)
Author's Response: Hey! Thank you very much for your review. - Thanks, I went back and forth about how to begin, and something poetic seemed right... - French. I wasn't sure about this, as I know what people mean by je ne sais quoi when I hear it SPOKEN-- but I myself had to look up how to write it properly... - The prologue is actually a flash FORWARD. I know that's confusing as the first chapter then begins with a flashback. I have actually changed the first chapter now to make it a little less confusing. But the prologue is a glimpse into Sirius' mind well into our story... - Thank you very much:)