Penname: BrianBoggart [Contact]
Real name: Brian
Member Since: 09/01/05
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American Male in my early 30's. Father of two wonderful daughters. Separated/Divorcing guy and moving on. Reading Fanfic to pass the time. :)
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Summary: In the summer after HBP, Ginny tries to find a way to deal with her separation from Harry. Contains spoilers.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3554 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/11/05 Updated: 08/11/05


Reviewer: BrianBoggart Signed
Date: 09/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

This a great story. Very well written and bittersweet. I, personally, like the Weezer reference since they are my favorite band. :)

 

When It Seems Like All Is Lost by KateH
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 74]

Summary: After everything that has happened to Harry Potter, after everything that he has gone through and endured, he has learned things about himself that he never knew before. At a time in his life when he needs it most, Harry finds a friend that truly understands him and shares some of his experiences and feelings. The world around Harry is shifting and he soon realizes that changes are occurring that he has no control over. Some changes are good while others will bring Harry further from happiness than he has ever been before. He will learn that his friends are the most important aspect of his life and nothing can change that.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 59790 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/07/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: BrianBoggart Signed
Date: 05/08/06 Title: Chapter 9: Home

I think you've created an interesting story thus far. You've created a wonderful new character (admittedly at the expense of one my personal favorites :( ). A few things: first, make sure to go back and not have Sara say Harry's name in front of her parents. She said called him Harry in one sentence and James in the next. Secondly, but probably more important, the story seems to have a "rush" to it. Not sure if you're pushing it to a crescendo or just feel you need to push it along for your own needs, but there are areas you should go back and add more depth. I do like the general story and you obviously are a good writer. I will continue to read and I await your next chapter. Thank you for taking the time to share with us.

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