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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 02/26/06 Title: None

I'm back! That was a really good chapter. It made me laugh! I love fics that make me laugh. I try some humor in my fics but I think they usually go AWOL. Do mind reading my fic and telling me what you think about that? Anyway, you deserve a ten! Again!

Author's Response: Haha thanks! I don't think a marauder-fic is complete without a bit of humor! I mean the foursome were such witty characters! And sure, I'll check out your story=)

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 02/26/06 Title: None

Oh, and you are now officially my heroine for not doing the broom closet snogging thing.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad! I didn't think so many people were bothered by the closet-snogging:, but I agree! :)

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/12/06 Title: None

Okay, I just had to review again. I'd like you to know that you have drawn me back into loving the Marauders (they used to be my obbsession) and my next fic will have to do with them. YAY! I'm putting this into my favorites. It is really good, and I really love it for letting me see how much I need the Marauders.

P.S I still love the Death Eaters too, so I'm torn.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! I love them too=)) And thnk you likewise for pussling into the new and strange world of loving those Death Eaters!

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 04/29/06 Title: None

Yay, Mandy, you're back!!!! I missed your updates sooo much! I'm on chapter five with L,B&BB already. Where have you been! I'm soooo happy you're back, and wonderful chapter by the way! *does happy dance*

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: None

Good job! That was a really good story

Author's Response: Thanks, but it's not over yet! I hope to hear from you in later chapters:)

 

Amortentia by Cruciatus Love
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 160]

Summary: Merope Gaunt has what seems like a flawless plan to get Tom Riddle to love her. She has everything worked out to the very last drop of Amortentia in his glass each morning. Watch as a country called Romania and a celebration of love takes it's effect on this 'perfect love.'

Written as a Term Challenge: Holidays Abroad submission for Slytherin.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 10936 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/22/06 Updated: 05/16/06


Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue ~ Birth of a Legend

Wow! I loved this story so much, my natural reaction was to add it to my favorites. I'm really sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, but when I tried my computer shut down and I had to restart and all that junk. Well, anyways, I offer you my complements on how well your characterization is! Merope and Tom are very vivid: The readers instantaneously feel sad for Merope and want her to succeed and I absolutely had to loathe Tom for what he did to her! This is a very original fic; I've never read a Merope one! Honestly, you should be awarded something, like a bag of ridiculously large chocolate chip cookies! Unless you don't like those, of course =]. This is really fantastic and I would take my hat off to you had it not been for the fear of showering you in spearmint bubblegum (tee hee). Well, you get my point.

Author's Response: Why thank you! I don\'t think I\'ve gotten such a kind review before!

I myself am pretty proud of this piece as well, but it\'s nice to know that someone else likes it as much as I do.

 

Summary: The regrets of a Death Eater.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Suicide

Word count: 310 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
01/26/06 Updated: 01/26/06


Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Death Eaters story.

Okay! Awesome! (By the way, that review below is lying because even though it say they like your poem they gave you a bad rating) This must be about Bella/Rodolphus! It must be, Because if it isn't I will have to jump out a thirty-first story window! This was so good, and I loved the way it ended. I've read all your poems and you certainly have a flare for poetry! 1000000/10! Keep it up! Keep on writing! I depend on it!

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Death Eaters story.

I have to review again! This is wonderful!! Yeepee! It is beautiful! I never thought I would like poetry this much before I started to read your work! This is awesome! This is actually the first time I've reread a poem before just to enjoy it again! You rock! a million/ten!

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Death Eaters story.

Hey, again! Sorry to bother you once more! Did I mention how much I loved this poem??? Well, I love it!! I LOVE IT! Must add to favorites list... Must add to favorites list.... a bazillion/ten!

 

Draco's Roses by Foxy Wolf
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: Hermione never imagined that she would develop feelings for Draco Malfoy. She longs for him even though she knows she shouldn’t. Her heart tells her to act on her feelings and she knows that they’ll be perfect together despite what other people might think. But what happens when things doesn’t turn out as you thought. Draco receives a bouquet and a note with Hermione’s deepest thoughts.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 179 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/28/06 Updated: 01/28/06


Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 04/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Draco's Roses

Yay! I loved this poem. I really loved how you used ryhming words to describe Draco. Personally, I could never have done that. I've often heard of people catching a sort of feeling of a character with poetry, but I haven't seen someone describe a person! That would take me a whole paragraph because describing people is so complex, in my opinion. Anyways, this isn't my poem, it's yours and you did a great job!

Author's Response: Ooooh. Thank you, FL. I\'m so happy you\'re finally able to log in and write the reviews ;-)

 

Sirius: The Black Knight by Pussycat123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 378]

Summary: Sirius was killed by Bellatrix. When he lands headlong at his dead best friend’s feet, he is a little perplexed. All is soon explained, however. He has reached Heaven, and James is here to welcome him. Before he can begin to get used to life in Heaven, he must first “watch his life” on the large screen in front of him, because it will help him understand things better. And so, that’s what he does. From the very beginning, to the very end. You too, can follow him through the ups and downs. Follow him through the highs and the lows. Follow him through the laughter, the pain, and the romance. Follow him through the story of his life. This fic is a tribute to Sirius Black. It is not all marauder-era, although a bulk of it is, and that is why it’s in this category.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 60481 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/31/06 Updated: 03/02/07


Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: Chapter 8: Coming of Age

Argh! I just wrote a really long review and then my computer got messed up. It basically said: Go LaLa! I'm really sorry but I really don't like Tara. My favorite character must be LaLa, not because we share names and appearances, but because her "story" kind of relates to mine, which you know about of course. I loved the scene with Snape in it... v funny. It was a good choice having Lily talk to Sirius, as I can't imagine Lola or Tara doing any of that. All in all, very good chapter! Keep writing,you rock at it!
With

Author's Response: Thanks LaLa (the real one). You know, you\'re supposed to NOT like LaLa, but then again, you do have a pretty twited mind ... :P Just kidding, you\'re great! Glad you liked the Snaoe but, but what about the scene in the bakers at the start? Anyway, thanks!

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 04/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Yay! Chapter four! I love the title for this one, Amy! I think that's exactly how to describe the marauders. My favorite so far is... James! He's so funny! Keep writing, Amy! ~LaLa

Author's Response: Yay! Reviews! Ahem. Really glad you like it ... The next ones ok too (gaak, I hope) and I\'m having lot\'s of fun writeing the eighth at the moment. Anyway, thatnks for the review! You rock!

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 06/03/06 Title: Chapter 7: Changes

YAY! My chapter. Well, I think I found myself quite annoying, the way I kept popping up, but I did ask for it. And, you guys, please don't drag me away and shoot me, I'm just the namesake (thanks for that, Amy ;-)). Yeah, well I didn't really get why he made out with her all of a sudden, but I'm not complaining. GREAT CHAPPIE!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!!

Author's Response: I think you are getting \"annoying\" mixed up with \"mysterious\" :-P lol. He randomly started making out with her because he and Tara had been arguing a lot, then there was the latest bust up with Lola, and whenever he had spoken to her, she had always seemed nice, and helpful, and intriguing ... Anyway, yeah. That\'s why.

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 07/29/06 Title: Chapter 10: Together (Part II)

Yay, Amy, new chapter!!! This was very good and I liked the part where Sirius asked if they were doomed together.... because they probably are and you are just forshadowing. I loooovvvved this chapter! Keep it up, Amy! You Rock!!!

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Author's Response: Same again

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 07/29/06 Title: Chapter 10: Together (Part II)

Yay, Amy, new chapter!!! This was very good and I liked the part where Sirius asked if they were doomed together.... because they probably are and you are just forshadowing. I loooovvvved this chapter! Keep it up, Amy! You Rock!!!

Author's Response: Same again

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 07/29/06 Title: Chapter 10: Together (Part II)

Yay, Amy, new chapter!!! This was very good and I liked the part where Sirius asked if they were doomed together.... because they probably are and you are just forshadowing. I loooovvvved this chapter! Keep it up, Amy! You Rock!!!

Author's Response: Oooh, I\'m glad you liked that part. Although, like Sirius said, it wouldn\'t stop him, if they were (I\'m not saying either way), so ... Yeah. I\'m glad you liked it! You rock also!

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 08/13/06 Title: Chapter 11: A Harsh World

Penny and Jack and LaLa and Bellatrix!! Yay! Ahh, the wonderfullness of it all! Your writing was wonderful again, as it always is, and I loved the descriptions. Yes, this is probably my fav chapter so far. You will one day rule the world, Amy! ~LaLa

Author's Response: Ah yes, you came back in this chapter ... Well, I sure hope I will rule the world one day ... I could name a country after you! How do you feel about LaLaLand?

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 04/29/06 Title: Chapter 5: Research and Lies

Yay! I loved the part where Peter asked Remus if he was in an "evil organization". That made me laugh so hard! I enjoy the little things, like the "finer" arts. And fat Italians? Sounds like my aunt- fat, Italian, and singing horridly. (I hope she will never read this!) You did great once again! I am awed!~LaLa

Author's Response: Yay! The fat Italian thing was indicating opera. I can just imagine James sitting there bored out his skull, or with his fingers in his ears and a pained expression ... Tee hee! Thanks for your review!

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 05/21/06 Title: Chapter 6: Not A Lot To Say

Hey, good job!! I knew this would get accepted soon!! I don't know why, but I didn't feel as sorry for Tara as I did for Lola, but I guess that's what you wanted, right. It's not Tara who's meant for Sirius, so you want us to like Lola more; you're a genius cause it worked. I liked how you ended that chapter, He was a Marauder. And, as much as he hated it, he was a black. Good job, keep it up!!

Author's Response: Ooh, it\'s a long review! Yay for LaLa! Yes, I guess you are meant to feel more sorry for Lola - but you\'re meant to like Tara too! I\'m sure we all know someone just like her - very nice, but a little dippy. That\'s what I was going for, anyway. Thanks for reviewing, LaLa! ^_^ ~~ Amy

 
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Very well done!!! I loved how Sirius meets James and then Lily. Is that symbolisim of James dying first and Lily dying next, or is it just a coincidence? That was one of the best fanfics I have read. If you'd like you can go read my fanfiction. Just click on my user name! And then, well you know the drill. If you do read it I'd be glad for a review. Only one person has reviewed so far (my best friend, she reviewed three times) Well anyway, you deserve a ten! Bravo

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You've just made my day (Well, my hour at least) and I went to see your fic and its good!! This isn't my only one by the way, there's another in the humour section ... I'm always glad of reviews! :D I'm really glad you liked it, chapter 2 should be on the way!

 
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