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The Attack On the Longbottoms by Narcissa

Rated: Professors •
Summary: One shot: The night the Longbottoms were attacked and the posible reasonings. Please note, I do not think Neville was supposed to be The One. I think that the Death Eaters could have easily misunderstood the reasoning behind their Master's disapearance. (Language warning!)
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 02/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: (One Shot)

Now I am tearing up. You did a really good job with this story. I really liked the beggining with all the death eaters talking to each other and having formed a connection between Bella and Rudolphus without actually mentioning that they were together! The part of the story where the Longbottoms were being tortured was really sad, but my loyalties still lie as a Bellatrix fan! 10 10 10 10, 110!

The Ever Secret Diary of Sirius Black by Amalynne

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sirius Black is dead, but a memory of him still remains. Rummaging through Padfoot's old possessions, Remus finds a bit of the past in a diary. Sort of a Tom Riddle's diary experience with a 16yr old Sirius Black.
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/18/06 Title: Chapter 17: Dreadful Discoveries

Yay! That was my favorite chapter so far. Keep doing what you're doing, and don't give up! I think it's fantastic what you do with your ability to write. You were my inspiration to write my own fanfic, and I don't think I'd have one up now had it not been for you! This is a unique story with lots of emotion! I love reading and writing emotion!! Loved the end with Elise's letter. Nice way to tie things up! 1000000000000/10!!! You are going in my favorites!!!!!!!!!! Really!

Author's Response: wow... well, thank you so much :). That really motivates me, it really does... because I've felt like i can't write for the last few weeks. It's great to hear that someone supports my pointless Sirius/fanfic obsession (my parents have voiced their severe concern for my mental stability). Anyhoo, thanks a million+a million and God bless. -ama

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 09/02/05 Title: Chapter 15: Marauding and Mistletoe

Hi! Greeeeaaat job! You did fantastic and I think you have real talent. I love the whole idea of there being a diary that held the thoughts of Sirius Black and I honestly cannot wait until you put up your next chapter. I also love the fact that Sirius has found an interest in a less than popular girl (Elise) and she doesn't push him away like Stella Sinistra. I admire the whole "Your a jerk, I'm too smart for you" thing, but sometimes that just seems a little vain. And I really love the way that Sirius uses Dark Arts on Elise to keep Remus safe. (Am I gonna review your whole story here?) Even though it was a bit cruel. ....JUST KEEP DOING WHATEVER YOU'RE DOING! I LOVE IT! HERE COMES A MIGHTY TEN!!!!!

Author's Response: You're too nice, i'm glad you like the direction its going. haha, in my mind I'm Elise... oh, I can dream can't I? *giggles*

I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 05/05/06 Title: Chapter 48: Peter's Shining Moment

You have a couple dialouge errors. I won't go back and copy them but, I'll give you an example.

ex. "Hi, Lily," He said.

What it should look like is:

ex. "Hi, Lily," he said.

Just don't capitalize the "he" and you'll be fine.

This was a particularly good chapter, but I didn't really understand the Quidditch part, it was a bit confusing. Maybe you could clarify that a bit. I'm not saying your chapter was bad, I'm just trying to help. Actually, I think the chapter was quite good. Now for the poll:

Scene: Quiddtich, despite the confusion

Chapter: Forgive Me?

Quote: Boys were so strange sometimes.

Character: Sirius

Couple: Alex/Sirius

Title: The title of the whole story!

Yay! Keep writing. I hope you're having fun with this story!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 02/20/06 Title: Chapter 40: Saying goodbye

I know this review is probably really out of place for a Lily/James fic, but I'd really like to know why the Marauders alway have to make Bellatrix embarrass herself. I thought it was Snape they were after. For some reason, I feel sorry for her when she gets embarrassed. Oh, maybe that's cause I'm a Bellatrix fan-lol :-). Anyway, I've been reading you fic since its first chapters and its good.

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/04/06 Title: Chapter 40: Saying goodbye

Oooh, wait. I just realised that Rodolphus said "eliminate the source". Does that mean the Marauders????? Ooooh... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *presses too hard and breaks keyboard*

Temporary by Queen of Serpents

Rated: Professors •

Hermione knew this thing she had with Malfoy was purely physical. She knew she shouldn't have fallen in love with him. And she knew that when he said he loved her too, a dozen misfortunes would befall them. Yet they both did admit it and just when she thought this temporary relationship might just last, she was left all alone and he?...Well he became one of Them.

RUNNER-UP in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards for "The Where Did That Come From Award" (Best Twists and Turns) and WINNER in the He Had it Coming Awards.


I also want to add that all this support you all have given me is just fabulous. Thanks a lot. I love you guys!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 07/20/06 Title: Chapter 29: Power of Love

I love Bella too! Yay! This fic is the most bitchy hardcore fic ever!! TEMPORARY IS AWESOME!!!!!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 07/18/06 Title: Chapter 3: You're Mine

Awww, how sweet! I wish this were a movie then I would sit there replaying it over and over again! This fic is going on my favorites!

::Squidventures of the Slytherins:: by Aimless Hexes

A light-hearted one-shot collaboration - Marauder Era.

Join the Slytherins for an afternoon of insults, squid harrassment, 'Bowling for Badgers', and terrifying waterfowl.

{Amelia Bones, Antonin Dolohov, Bellatrix Lestrange, Mundungus Fletcher and (OC) Lydia St. James}

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 04/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

Ha Ha! No complains, cept one! Why didn't you put Rodolphus in???? I know you mentioned him, but it would have been so much funnier if you put him in! Anyway, 10/10!

October thirty first by padfootprongs

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem in which tells the tale of the night Voldemort killed Harry's parents. It's lots better than it sounds. EXCERPT: As James drew his wand as his enemy cried "Avada Kedavra!" and then poor James died Please, Let me know you care! You reveiw my fic, and I'll reveiw yours!
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: October thirty first

Kewl poem! That's a lot to hear me say of a poem that's not about Death Eaters as the main points. You must be really good! 1000000000000/10! What? There's only ONE zero?!? An outrage! I'm giving you a 1000000000000/10 anyway!

Rodolphus the Red Nosed Death Eater by The Future Marauders

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Just a random funny poem that's bound to raise a laugh in even the darkest of hearts.
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Rodolphus the Red Nosed Death Eater

I'm very sorry to say this, but I think you are in need of some severe medical attention at St. Mungos. This was wacky (and severly incorrect) to the extreme.
~LaLa P.S If you'd like a real description of Rodolphus read my fic. P.P.S I am aware that I cannot take a joke. P.P.P.S Bellatrix Rocks!

The School of Insane Students by Hogwartzgrl479

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One morning Harry wakes up to find the school in a chaotic mess. Everyone has gone completely insane except for him. Pretty mindless story with just good humour.
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: The School of Insane Students

Kewl! Funny! I have only one disappointment. For the battle of the bands part- try picking three different bands who aren't made up of posers!!
P.S Try Panic! At the Disco, From First to Last, and My Chemical Romance. They're awesome!

Author's Response: That pretty much why I choose those bands! lol I like the bands you chose though! But i choose the others as a bit of a joke really. thanks for the review!


Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: None

Alright, I just read all three chapters and can say that this is very well written! I

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: None

Sorry, something went wrong with my computer and the review was cut short! Damn, I wrote a really long one too. Oh well, I'll just start over.

I really like Zee. She's very believable! And you describe her brilliantly. That being said, I have a critque about Tom. He seems a little OOC to me. I mean, he's not supposed to be capable of love, but if he did love someone, I think he'd be a little more subtle about it, right? Him being so gentle with her is hard for me to believe.

Anyway, this is a wonderful fic! Update soon!

Dry Your Eyes by Evilpersonified

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Bellatrix and Severus once loved each other, but circumstances would not allow them to be together. An explanation on why they are who they are today (ONE-SHOT, SONG-FIC, RATED R FOR SEX AND SWEARING)
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dry Your Eyes

Though I am a real big fan of Bella/Rodolphus, this fic was deeply moving. It was sad and intense, and I wanted to cry. The beauty of your word set off a vivid picture in my mind. I absoulutely adored the part right before Bella walks down the aisle. This was beautiful- more beautiful than any fic I have ever read. The most beautiful. *tears run down face* You are brilliant. I am putting this into my favorites. Keep writing!

Year Seven: Harry Potter & The Blood Debt by GringottsVault711

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry, heavy with the summer's grief and his future's burden, begins his final year at Hogwarts. He will hide something from his two best friends, but he isn't the only one keeping secrets; there's a mysterious organization on the rise, and Hogwarts is under fire from the public. The truth about the past will be revealed, while secrets of the present are hidden, and Harry must struggle to find his own sense of morality, all while knowing that his destiny is to kill. SEQUEL to Harry's Sixth Year. This story is PRE-HBP
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 04/08/06 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Bloodshed

whew! Good, long story. Thanks for telling me about this. It's really great. I wish I had more to say, but I'm at a loss for words. Good job! 10/10


Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 09/02/05 Title: None

Real good! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! I cannot beleive I am writing a short review but I have nothing else to say except.... HAVE A TEN, YOU ROCK!

A Thousand Words by annie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: For the rest of the Ministry, the interdepartmental challenge was merely a failed attempt to restore trust between workers. But for Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger, it was the catalyst for an unexpected relationship built on passionate letters, concealed identities, and secret meetings – and the beginning of an end that neither of them could ever have imagined possible, not even in their wildest dreams.

Post-war. Based somewhat on the story of the Phantom of the Opera. Also contains R/Hr, so don't read if you can't stomach that ship.

Status: Complete. Thanks for reading, everyone!
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 07/09/06 Title: Chapter 12: In Dreams

That was very good! I loved how Ginny said, "A Sirius look-alike" I don't know why, but it made me laugh. Maybe I'm just stupid though... ;-). You writing is so wonderful, the idea of the whole story is brilliant. Really, Ive never seen anything quite like it!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 07/07/06 Title: Chapter 12: In Dreams

wow, you have quite a following *looks at reviews below*. I cannot wait to read this chappie either... too bad I have to wait... I hate waiting *throws temper tantrum*

A World United by QueenHal

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: PRE-HBP :: At the end of his sixth year, Harry Potter, the boy-who-lived, defeated Voldemort for the last time. But the tides of war have taken a toll on him, as much as they have taken a toll on his beloved Hogwarts and the entire Wizarding World. But when Harry returns for his seventh and final year at Hogwarts, the new traveling Quidditch team might be just what he needs to piece his life and his world back together. I won't be doing anything more with this sotry, but since I like the chapter, I'm leaving it up.
Reviewer: ForbiddenLove Signed
Date: 03/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Shooting Stars and Broomsticks

Wow, that was really good! I can't believe how you ever get time to write like this ontop of bannermaking!

Anyways, this was my favorite part:“Doesn’t mean I have to like them.” Ron muttered, though he looked resigned. The three of them glanced over at the Slytherins, who although remained cool and calm on the surface, were still obviously amazed with the going-ons above. For many years, Harry had believed all Slytherins to be evil, subjects of Voldemort that didn’t have a good bone in their body. Last year, though, he had learned differently. Slytherins were ambitious, true, but it didn’t mean they were heartless. Many had joined him in the final battle against Voldemort. He owed his life to some of them, and he was ready to admit it. Ron, on the otherhand, hadn’t been there. He, Hermione, and Ginny had been spread out among the depths of the castle, magically connected with Harry. Each of them had provided a bit of their life force in order to equip Harry with the strength and skill he needed to defeat the Dark Lord. It had been a tremendous feat, but none of them had seen how a group of Slytherins had surrounded Harry and protected him from Death Eaters, as he tapped into the combined power. He, himself, would never forget it.

I don't know why, I just liked that part. Your writing was magnifique! I wish I could write like that! No fair! 10/10! Yay for you!