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The Unexpected Task Returns by gryffindorcalvinist

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Another Christmas Ball. Ron gets it right this time with a hint of H/G.
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 08/25/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1/1

Very sweet and well-written. Everyone was in character, and I absolutely melted with the scene of Ron and Hermione in the snow! I loved that they held hands all the time too. Poor Ron, having to eat with his left hand!

Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls by GwendolynJames

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: If Hermione hadn't met the boys on the train that first day, things would most certainly be different. Featuring Metro!Ron, Loser!Harry, Stalker!Hermione, and Smoker!Ginny.
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 10/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls

Haha I loved all those characters in the "alternate universe." I wish you had developed Harry's loserness and Ron's metro-ness a little more, though. But nice job! Funny. = )

Daddy by blondebouncingferret

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 12/20/05 Title: Chapter 10: The B.A.T

I just hope you don't have Miranda and Viktor becoming an item. That'd make me shudder. But I like that Viktor and Hermione are still friends, and I also like how you described Ron as being taller than Viktor, hehe. Great chapter, and I can't wait for your updates. This is one of my favorites. = )

Goodnight Sweet Prince by kaiserzacc

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: My vision of the final battle and beyond. Warning Character Death. H/G fic
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 09/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

Ooh that was a very good fic. You describe the last battle really well! I was wondering what the incantation Harry used means...I know amo means "I love," but what does "Immolo aetas" mean? I'm giving you 9/10 just because I can't stand the thought of Harry dying. I love him too much.

Bittersweet by Aebhel

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's funny about wars. They drive people to do things we never would ordinarily--good and bad. Harry and I had only been dating for four months. He loved me--I know that and I knew it then--but if there hadn't been a war, he would have waited. I think he just wanted something to hold onto...for when it was all over.

Ron comes across Ginny's diary, four years after the war has ended.

EDIT: 1000 reads!
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Ohhhh my gosh this story was SO beautiful! I was so sad reading about Harry's death and the fact that he and Ginny were planning a future together. = (
But other than the plot, your writing style is also very good! Great grammar, spelling, etc. yay for you!

Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Ohhhh my gosh this story was SO beautiful! I was so sad reading about Harry's death and the fact that he and Ginny were planning a future together. = (
But other than the plot, your writing style is also very good! Great grammar, spelling, etc. yay for you!

Last Peaceful Days by Ravensgryff

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Set in the summer immediately following HBP. This is a sequel to Before It’s Too Late. It’s the day before the big wedding. Ron and Hermione take advantage of some alone time before Harry joins them at the Burrow. Mrs. Weasley and Ginny have a heart to heart talk about Harry and a bit about the first war. HBP Spoilers.
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 09/10/05 Title: Chapter 2: Nighttime Surprises

I really enjoyed this story, especially this chapter. Ron and Hermione were soooo sweet, and I thought you characterized Harry's emotions really well. I especially loved the proposal. = )

She Will Be Loved by unknown_force

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: We see people by what they seem to be on the outside, but can their greatest strengths be the result of their greatest weaknesses? As desire and passion tear through Ron, Hermione, and Harry's friendship, they begin to question whether they have found the right person to love, and at what price will they pay to correct their mistakes?
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 11/04/05 Title: Chapter 6: Mirrors of Your Eyes

This was by far my favorite installation of the story. I loved how you described Hermione's emotions on the carousel, but I imagined her as looking really beautiful then. I wish you had mentioned Ron thinking how beautiful she looked. And I loved the idea of Ron holding Hermione's hand to comfort her on the rollercoaster. I simply cannot go on those though! *shudder*

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter. The part where I described how beautiful Hermione looked is kind of from Ron's perspective, because even though I don't use first-person perspective throughout the story, I describe their motions and their thoughts in seperate paragraphs.

Loving Father by Berylla Chubb

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Post-Hogwarts--Ginny reminisces about the past while she watches Harry take care of their daughter.
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 09/06/05 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Aww I really enjoyed that one! I think the idea of a man taking care of his child is very sweet too. I give it a 10. = ) PS: Good grammar. I'm a grammar freak. = D

Author's Response: Yeah; I've always felt that a man with a baby is the most attractive sight in the world. I'm glad you liked it! PS: I'm a grammar freak too. Drives me nuts sometimes. ;-)

Where Do We Go From Here? by ColorOfAngels

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a one shot that has been floating around my mind since before the release of HBP so it is slightly AU but that doesnt affect anything......... Hermione is having a bad day...when Ron takes notice can he do anything to help?
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 10/14/05 Title: Chapter 1: Where Do We Go From Here?

Ohh this is beautifully done! And your grammar was pretty much impeccable. Great job! I really enjoyed this one. Your description of Hermione seemed the slightest bit stretched, but the rest of the story flowed beautifully. Again, great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have my beta to thank for that she is amazing!......Im so glad you enjoyed it....

Wine, Roses, and Blood by Facelessgirl

Summary: It wasn't supposed to happen like this. She was supposed to stay safe, so that they might both live when it was all over. However, it all comes together in this one moment, a moment that means the difference between life and death, love and despair. One shot.
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 10/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

Oh, oh, this fic was amazing! I actually wasn't that sad that Harry died. I mean, I was, of course, because who doesn't love Harry, but truly, the only reason I hate the idea of Harry dying is that he will leave Ginny behind. Since Ginny died, Harry is not leaving her behind. Ron and Hermione have each other, and everyone else will get along without Harry, but the idea of Ginny being left alone with Harry dead was just too heartwrenching. So great resolution of that conflict! It was veryvery well written, but I think they yelled a bit too much at the wedding. = ) 10!

Author's Response: Oh man, I'm happy you were able to see something optimistic about the demise of those two characters : ) I'm sorry you think they yelled too much at the wedding, but I accredit it to the fact that Harry is Post-traumatic stress disorder, and has been for some time, and Ginny, well Ginny likes to get her word in. Thank you very much for your input!

The Surprise Date by RoxyMarie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny one-shot. Full of warm fuzzies! Will Harry ever do anything romantic? I never thought I'd see the day. Based on a true story.
Please R & R I'd appreciate it much! Thanks for reading!!

Wow! Over 1200 reads! Thanks a bunch guys!!

Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Surprise Date

I thought it was ever-so-slightly too fluffy, but you did a wonderful job with the descriptions! I felt cold sitting here in my uncomfortably warm house just reading about the two of them playing in the snow. I loved the image of Ginny's hair coming over the collar of her coat, and of her falling asleep on Harry's shoulder. Also, I live in Houston and experienced the wonderful snow last year too! It was sooo beautiful. If only it wasn't soo hot this year!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! I was in Victoria for the snow! We got over a foot. It was amazing. But I LOVE fluff sometimes! So I'm so glad you said it was almost too fluffy! Hehe! I'm a nerd. I just felt like writing a warm fuzzy story!

Tears, Comfort and Clean T-Shirts by newquillnt

Summary: Hermione is confused about how Ron feels about her. Will a trip to The Burrow help?
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 12/09/05 Title: Chapter 5: Heart to Heart

Hey I agree with everyone else that this story was really excellent. Great job on the grammar haha. And I also loved the way you didn't rush them, like someone else said...I don't think Ron and Hermione "love" each other romantically yet. They will work themselves up to that point, but it's not there right now...But yeah, great on the awkwardness. I did sort of feel that when they got to talking about the events of the past year, the dialogue wasn't flowing as well as before, but the entire story was excellent other than that one section. I look forward to the H/G sequel!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review; I'm glad you liked the story. I figured they'd taken 6 years to get together, they wouldn't be rushing anywhere anytime soon. I thought that they would be fairly awkward talking about what had happened during year 6; it was a point where it could all so easily have gone wrong for them and they could have ended up having another blazing row about it. As for the sequel, it depends on the HP muse dropping ideas on my head!

Man's Greatest Power by aRRa_b00m

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hogsmeade is under great turmoil; Death Eaters have launched a surprise attack on the little village, wreaking havoc and mayhem whenever they could… Little did they know of the DA's superb fighting abilities and the master of Defence, Harry Potter, joining the fray… Join our favourite characters as they fight this epic battle against evil, realize their own strengths and powers, fight a most feared creature, and discover the greatest power known to man…
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 11/12/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Nice and loong, just as I like them! I loved the "she's my sister" about Hermione thing. That was so sweett! If I were Hermione, I would have cried too. And yayyy I love Harry/Ginny. I think it's because I'm pretty much in love with Harry too, just like Ginny. = ) Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! Yeah, I just think Hermione comes across as an older sister to Harry in the books... not as a potential life partner... that's just wrong... no offence to H/Hr shippers... ^_^' Yay, I love Harry, too!!!!!!! anyway, thanks again!! glad u liked it!

Drops of Crimson by Kachi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: One-shot. Hermione Granger isn't perfect - no one is. But perfection is expected of the very best and it isn't only the weak who crack under pressure and strain...
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 11/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: Drops of Crimson

Ooh this is veryvery good! I hate the idea of Hermione hurting that badly, but I do like that you acknowledge that she wants to be known as more than the smart girl. And niice closing sentence about the red. = ) Great grammar! 10!

No More Good-byes by Alessa

Summary: Harry has spent his entire life saying good-bye. Even now as he locks himself away in Number 12 Grimmauld Place, he may have to say it again. Can love pull him through?
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: None

I loved this fic! It was so sweet and a nice way for Harry and Ginny to get together. I loved the scene when she comforts him after his nightmare, very sweet. It was a nice long fic, but not drawn out, and it just progressed really well. I give it a 10. = )

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

King's Cross by coraskitten

Summary: It's the end of Ginny's sixth year and on the way home on the Hogwarts Express, she sees the Dark Mark hanging over the station. How does she react? What will she do?
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 12/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

I really liked this storryy. Like some other people said, I think it was odd that Harry proposed right after Hermione's parents died, but I think it showed how long Harry had been waiting to do it, so it wasn't thaat bad. I do think there could have been more about Hermione's reaction and how they comforted her, etc. Nice touch with Malfoy killing Bellatrix! I liked that you seemed to write well in character, and the dialogue was quite believable. Nice. = )

Wake Up by Silver Truman

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ron Weasley is getting tired of life slapping him in the face, and one rainy morning he finds himself alone at the Burrow with a tearful, irritable Hermione. Arguments, confrontations and confessions ensue. HBP Spoilers, RHr.
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 12/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: none

I like. LOVED this. Wow. wow. Greattttt job. I loved the way you described Hermione as wearing shorts and having her hair in a bun. I don't know why, but somehow that made her so much more clear in my mind's eye, much clearer than even JK's descriptions have made her. And I thought it was incredibly sweet how Ron kept thinking that Hermione looked incredibly beautiful. Ahhh just amazing work! I am so adding this to my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review! You really made my day! ^^

Hear Me by Wise Owl

This songfic is complete!
POST HBP! This fanfic is based on Kelly Clarkson's song "Hear Me". It is the prequel to my other fanfic A Moment Like This.

The Adventure: Harry is left with the task of identifying, finding, and destroying four Horcruxes that Lord Voldemort has hidden. He sets off with Ron and Hermione to face this huge undertaking head-on...when they run into trouble.

The Romance: Ron discovers his true value in caring, the only way he knows how, for the one he love. Hermione fights for something to live for when devestation strikes. Harry wrestles with his emotions, trying to decide if he was correct in leaving Ginny behind. Ginny's story is in A Moment Like This so go to my bio and click on the banner for it if you want to see what she is going through!

Rated PG-13 for violence.
Please read and review so I know what you think!

Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 01/29/06 Title: Chapter 5: Find Me

Oh my gosh your story is really incredible. You have an amazing writing style, and I totally can't wait to read the next fic!! Great job with switching viewpoints too. 10/10! (And the 1/7 verus lightning bolt thing?! AMAZING...but I hatehatehate the thought of Harry being a Horcrux. I love him too much to see him die.)

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! I'm letting the next fic marinate in my mind for a little bit...The plot seems to be falling into place but the scenes need some polishing up! :D Again with that horcrux thing...now I know I gave you guys an out so Harry would not have to die...how come so many people missed that clue? hmmm...thank you for reviewing!!!

Where I Wanna Be by snuffles2984

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When Harry returns to The Burrow for the Weasley-Delacour wedding Ginny finds herself fighting emotions she never thought she'd have to fight again.
Reviewer: pinkpPotter Signed
Date: 01/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Where I Wanna Be

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh this story is GORGEOUS! So much good writing and a really great exploration of Ginny's thoughts. I love it, and it's added to my favorites. = )