Nice work! Looking forward to catching up on the next piece. I really enjoy reading your work, although I have lost a bit of sleep because of it (can't close the laptop...).
Author's Response: That's a huge compliment! I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed my story. Thank you, Jenny
I like that you create spells on the fly - that's how most spells are created (it's the intent as much as the words).
Author's Response: I do a lot of research about spells and such online, then only make up my own when I can't find one in existence already in cannon. I'm glad you like them! Thanks, Jenny