Let's cause a SCENE
clap our hands and stomp our feet
I've got to get myself over me
This is a heart-warming story about true friendship, but I have one complaint. This wonderful story has been on my list of favorites forever, so you need a new chapter, I can't see what happens next!
This is a great beginning chapter, but you need to add another! Ive had this story in my favorites for a while, and I have been awaited a second chapter from you! Keep up the good work!
I love your details and metaphors....you have a really great writing style! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will keep it up... just as soon as I have the time.