Er...right...this is Caitlin this time. You know the one WeasleyChica would always talk about? Yeah. That one. See...WeasleyChica kind of gave up on writing, so she handed the account to me, which means the story: All mine. I'll try to update ASAP, but it might be a bit now that I can put all MY ideas in the story.
Ok.I found it appauling.It gave me that sucky:Oh my god this sucks and I feel so disturbed that my heart will rip out feeling.It's not like YOU write bad,it's just the idea.J.K. even said Harry wasn't evil.In fact,this is the first story I've given less than an 8....or 5 at that matter.Keep writing....just not this story....
Author's Response: Well Miss Chica, I respect your response to the story. I mean everyone's entitled to their own opinions. And yes, I know J.K said that Harry isn't evil. It wouldn't be "harry potter and so and so" if Harry were evil. But, this is my alternate ending. I felt that Harry needed a view from the other side. ANYWAY. Thank you for commenting on my writing. and I always enjoy reading reviews. Even if it's bad.
Haven't you heard of the warning button?YOu obviously haven't because you didn't mark this as slash!I liked it until it was just so you know because man,this is just sad!What if a little kid were to read this?What would their parents think!?
*gasps* I loved it!Awesome so far.I also love that you do the H/G ship!Weeee!Uh,sorry,I'm a little on the hyper side right now.
It was awesome!I just have one little mistake you should fix.When Remus is giving his speech he talks about what Harry had done in the past books,but they are out of order;you have the Deparnment of Mysteries before The graveyard.The only reason I brought it up is because you also say "Last June" after it so......ya.Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Actually, Remus was just throwing things out at Harry, it wasn't necessarily supposed to be in chronological order, but more like just the series of terrible things he'd faced. Thanks for taking the time to review! Terri
I love it!All of it!All chapters 1-3!I especially like that you aren't mean to Ginny as alot of writers are(I actually read one where she was strangled by her mum because she wasn't a prefect,ugh!Not amusing!)!5 stars!
Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughts! I appreciate you taking the time to write. Terri
I loved it!Write more soon,please!
I loved it!Please add more soon!
Author's Response: Ooh! Thanx, I'll be sure to post more. Oh and if you want to get a head start on my already written 12 chaps for this, go to fanfiction.net under name Amalynne O'hara.
I don't know what he's saying about predictable really...she was my...3rd guess?5 stars!
I loved it!Write more soon,plese!
Ok,I know I'd forget before I finished reading,so I'll say this:There are a few typos in it.It's great,but fix the typos.I saw a grammar mistake,and a few missing commas,so,ya.Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll really try my best to fix all the flaws that you've mentioned. I'll also try to fix the typos (I do think it's my major problem). Thanks again! P.S: Please read my other chapters and review them, as you're such a positive reader.
Ah,no worries,I am not offended in the least by the red head comment.5-wait..what was I talking about? :)
OH MY GOD YOU SHOULD SEE ME RIGHT NOW!My face is redder than my hair,and I was laughing harder than Sirius and James!Hahahahaha,"I hope he can swim!" *dies of laughter*
I really want to see reactions,if it was me I'd have a stroke and die then,not later,and then they wouldn't have to worry about naming their son Harry!Lol.
Oh my god,here it comes....SIRIUS'S MOTORCYCLE!I can't wait to see...I mean read that!I can just imagine...
YA! CLAPS FOR SNAPE! Uh, never mind, he's a git :). That makes me think of this thing my friend made up in science to remember the classification of animals...but I won't get into that now...let's just say it involves dancing kneazles making your face look like Snape's ok?
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: lol, um, okay :D Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
I loved it!
Um, nothing else can decribe that chapter for me than that, because, well, yeah, you get the picture.
Author's Response: lol, yeah i get the picture :) thanks for reading and reviewing! glad you enjoyed it :D
Haha, it's the dreaded two time reviewer! LOL. No, this is WeasleyChicas friend, and the only reason I use her account is because my parents won't let me get one! Well, enough of that.
I LOVE IT!
And by the way, I cheat; I read this on another website when I get impatient, so all I can say is: hehe, I know what happens in the next couple chapters!
wow, strangest comment I've written yet.
Author's Response: Aha! You're the first person to figure that out! Luckily no one figured it out too early on, since I was WAY behind on this site than the others. Thankfully now, though, I'm alsmot caught up so there aren't too many secrets that you guys don't know :p Anyway, glad you found the story and liked it enough to review!
Oh my gosh, I would have reviewed your other chapters, but I don't like reviewing them when I'm, how many, about 10 from the last! I hadn't read this for so long, which is deppressing seeing as it's my favorite! I started crying at the end of all 3 of the last chapters! The only thing that's been on my mind for the past few days is: Sirius can't be dead again! if he was, wouldn't he have vanished? But didn't he get hit with the curse... yatta yatta. Yes, I do like to talk :). Ok, basically, I love it, 10 out of 10!
P.S. I suggest this story to all of my friends who like HP!
Author's Response: oh! Thank you SO much for your kind review, and double thanks for spreading the word! ^_^
Weee!100th reveiwer on TMA,now I'm the 1/4th of 100 on here!I have some dumb ideas for you!Put them on Girls VS Boys(it's a show on the-n,you can find out about it on www.the-n.com),or on a movie station,in VanHelsing and make them mob VanHelsing and all the other people because they kill werewolves*grabs pitchfork to join them*.That's all of my dumbness for today!Update soon!
Author's Response: Hey! I'm not good at math, but I'll believe you! Those are good ideas. Van Helsing. That would be a FUNNY idea! Thank you!!
I have to agree with the first couple of posters.Mrs.Weasley is definatley OOC,and I don't think they would ever leave,especially without packing anything....it's just not normal.It's still good though,just think about that.