Wonderful story. Once I started reading I couldn't leave it without finishing. Loved it. Thanks.
Very nice really. Hope you update it soon. And I agree with you about Ginny's patronus and i personally prefer to stay as a deer.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And I am very pleased that you agree with me about the Patronus. cj
Very interesting story. Ginny will not die, isn't it? And of course Harry too. Please say "no". Hope you update it soon.
Honestly I don't like the idea that Ginny betrayed (if she really did) Harry as they are my favorite couple, and I don't believe Ginny can do such a thing. Of course sometimes people does stupidly things but this was a bit much. If they didn't seem so much together in the books, that doesn't mean they didn't love each other. At least I think so. But still I would love to know that what happened and how. How Harry heard it? Hope you let me know.
Author's Response: In my mind she and Harry had split up, so were on a break, when she had a brief fling with Dean. But then she got back with Harry. She didn't tell him because they were on a break, so really it's not his business, but he found out because there was possibly some gossip, or he just guessed. Yes, she loves Harry very much. Yes, he loves her very much. Sadly being in love with someone and being loved back does not make one immune from making a mistake. Plus ... I will say this again a la Ross from Friends 'They were on a break' Thank you for the review ~Carole
That's really a creative story. Hope you continue to write stories like that. I looking forward for your other stories too.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I currently have two stories being beta read, so expect more from me soon. -N-
Thanks for update. I've been waiting for it. Great chapter as always. Friendship between the two families is progressing very well. But I think, it will be increasingly difficult to keep secrets when their friendship growing up like that. I can't wait for next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The friendship is progressing nicely, but as the full moon approaches, the case is also beginning to cast a shadow.-N-
I just read first 6 chapters of this story and loved it. The plot of the story is very nice and binding. Everything really amazing. Hope you update it very soon. If you can complete it soon, it would be quite better. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review (number 250, hurrah!). I'm hoping to update soon, but we've only just passed the halfway stage of this story, so it won't be complete for a while. Also, I'm trying to finish at least one of my other stories. -N-
I was waiting for it. Great chapter as always. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you. More soon. -N-
Thanks. Great chapter. Ron's idea of cutting the girl's hair is brilliant. Hope, the boy will recover and Fenella is okay.
Author's Response: Thanks, you'll find out about Ross in the next chapter. -N-
Absolutely great chapter and now I don't know how I'll wait for another chapter. It's a wonderfull idea that turn their patronus to a phoenix. Thanks a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you. As it's my intention to get this story marked complete by the end of next month, I hope that you won't have long to wait. -N-
I tried to read this story but the chapters looks like doesn't in correct order. For example chapters 1,2,3,4,5,6 and seven doesn't seem continue in order. I don't really know but I think it should be 1-3- 5- 2- 4- 6 or something like that. Can you fix it or give exact sequence please? Thanks.
Author's Response: Hello.
You're the first so make this observation. The clues are in the chapter titles. If you want to read the story chronologically the chapters run: first, Introduction; second The Hunt chapters; third, Interlude; fourth, The Snare chapters; fifth, the Prey chapters.However, I suspect that the story won't make much sense if you read it that way. I deliberately wrote it to flash back and forwards in time and some things revealed in The Hunt chapters relate to events in the Snare chapters, and to add another complication, all of the Prey chapters are happening at roughly the same time, but in different places. I know what I was trying to achieve, perhaps I've failed, but this story was not written in straight chronoligical order, and it isn't meant to be read that way.
Hi again and thanks for explanation. I understand. Now it was makes sense. I will read it but as you say, not chronologically. Can I ask when you will update it?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and sorry for the delay in my reply. Personal issues have stopped me writing for the last two weeks. The next chapter is almost ready, and I’m hoping to be able to mark this story as complete by the end of April at the latest. -N-
Ginny Weasley is where she used to dream to be someday. She is being hailed as the next great Quidditch player. She is the starting Chaser on the Holyhead Harpies and is playing Seeker for the first Unified United Kingdom Quidditch World Cup team. However, Ginny has discovered that being a 'Quidditch star' has costs. You have no privacy, and people will talk about you, saying things that have little or no foundation in truth.
Ginny is facing a turning point in her life. She will be going up against Viktor Krum and the favored Bulgarians. She also has a long term contract with the Harpies awaiting a signature after the match.
And there's always Harry Potter, the other part of her dream. Can she or does she still want both of them as the main part of her life?
It have been over a year since the last update but hope you didn't give up on this story. I want to know what it contains of that letter and the box. And all of those other things. Hope you'll update soon.
Good chapter. I was waiting for it. I tought that Ginny rejected Harry's proposal once. I'd love to know what Harry wrote in this letter. But I guess it is not that important. What's important is that make Ginny accept Harry's marriage proposal this time.
Thank you to the ever inestimable Soraya for the beta and Ellie for helping me reconstruct the story after my planning file was corrupted.
This is Acacia Carter of Hufflepuff writing for the Great Hall Chaptered Challenge of 2012.
Very good story. Hope you'll update it soon.
Great chapter as always. I'm confused about the real killer though. Who is it really? Even though Zach Williamson appear to be the prime suspect, it sounds like he wasn't. How could he enter to school without help? What about Lucy's friend? She knows everything. Could she be the connection between them? I'm looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm so sorry for the late reply. You've already met the real killer, but I won't tell you who it is. You'll probably find out what happens to Zach in chapter 15 - and it's gonna cause a major plot turn. And as for Lucy's friend...she has a few secrets of her own. You'll find out soon enough! I've already submitted the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be up this week. :) Thanks once again! --Nadia
Great chapter. What a sentence this is, "He just didn't know how terribly wrong he was." What are you planning now? Of course, it couldn't be that easy. But as long as no one died from Potter and Weasley family including Teddy, it would very intriguing.
Author's Response: Hehe, I still have a few tricks up my sleeve. I can't promise you no deaths, though! I'll see what I can do about it. You'll be getting a good scare ;). Stay tuned!
The third story in the Scorpius Malfoy and the Sins of the Fathers series.
Lucius Malfoy took control of the wizarding Criminal organization of England in the second story and has vowed to get revenge on Harry Potter and to set Scorpius up as the next 'Dark Lord'. However, first he must hewn his minions into a weapon strong enough to bring the 'whelp' Potter, his Aurors and the Ministry they serve down.
Meanwhile in the United States, Scorpius, Rose, Albus, James, the Jones cousins (Kaitlin and Rhys) and Geoffrey Grindus are the members of the United Kingdoms under-15 Quidditch team competing on the campus of the Salem Witches Institute. The U.K. is one of 36 countries competing in the first Junior World Quidditch Cup Tournament.
Beta Reader - Chapters 1 - 15 by Maple_and_PhoenixFeather
Great story. Storyline is very good and interesting. "Harry’s third thought was finding Lily and making sure no boys had moved in on her." Typical girl's father. Loved it.
Very good chapter. Thanks.
It's so sad to see Harry alone like that. I don't understand why Ginny not there. I know she have to think the childrens but they already at school. She should be there, beside her husband. At least for moral support. And when Ginny rejected his proposal, and why? Why Harry doubted her?