Penname: Teh Kiwi [Contact]
Real name: D
Member Since: 11/09/04
Website: www.xativa.co.uk/esr
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I hail from sunny London in England. I'm 18 years old and I'm a slasher.
Hello, I'm D, I'm a slash fan.
If anyone has any interest in what I've written, it's all at teh website. If any of you are interested in my highly entertaining personal life, LJ me at Kiwi666. It's also an idea to come and have a look around here if you want to check out the rest of my fics, as generally, they're NC-17, and can't really be published anywhere else...heh.
*wanders away waving Blaise/Theodore shipping flag*
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Summary: Slash- One Shot-Remus/Sirius. When Remus and Sirius are forced into yet another detention together a heartfelt conversation takes place between the two of the them.

Categories: Same-Sex Pairings Genre: Warnings: Slash

Word count: 2174 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 11/07/04


Reviewer: Teh Kiwi Signed
Date: 11/09/04 Title: Chapter 1: Detention for Two

It has potential, but at the same time, it isn't all that slashy. The content is good, although there are a few grammatical errors and it could do with more detail to add to the dialogue. Other than that...The ending is good as well. Nice and angsty.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Teh Kiwi Signed
Date: 11/09/04 Title: None

Wow. I haven't read a H/D for a while, and this is definately one to get me back into it! I look forward to your update! (Bonus marks for mentioning Blaise, and cookies for having him as a boy)

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not a big fan of female Blaise. Although my confirmation name is Blaise, I like it much better as a masculine name.

 

Summary: Past Featured StoryGiving high school essays a Marauder twist, this fiction is centered around the idea that some seniors in high school are require to write a letter to incoming freshman before they graduate. At Hogwarts, Seventh Years are given an assignment to write such a letter for the new First Years. Sirius decides to actually take an assignment, well seriously...sort of. He decides to look back on his entire Hogwarts years and write down his list of things not to do at Hogwarts.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 29400 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 07/25/05


Reviewer: Teh Kiwi Signed
Date: 11/09/04 Title: Chapter 1: Mum's Assignment

Well there's certainly something rather endearing about this. The idea is good, the list so far is amusing. It's just the dialogue between the lesson and the list which is a bit shady in my mind. No problem, though, look forward to the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks for being constructive, I really appreciate it. Glad you liked it.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Teh Kiwi Signed
Date: 12/29/04 Title: None

Heh, if this is not your best then damn, the other one must be mind blowing! This is really really good. You're one of the only people I've come across who bothers with description, and description is a wonderful thing for fics like this. You're a very good writer. Well done *hands cookies*

Author's Response: *takes cookies* Thank you very much. I love description, but sometimes get a little too involved with it. I agree, it adds dimension to a story. The other isn't exactly mind-blowing, but I hope you read it anyways!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Teh Kiwi Signed
Date: 12/29/04 Title: None

Thank you for the review you left on my story. I'm flattered. Het is really not my thing, but I read anyway, and it's ok, there's a good plot and interesting characterisation. One thing, when you write the next chapter, you should concentrate on detail more. It's ok to get the plot going, but descriptions and detailed thoughts are always good, especially Harry's. Well done though.

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