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The Possibility by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 1]

Summary: As challenged by WrenWinterSong, the following is a Snamione poem.

Snape notices Hermione, but he just can't seem to face the possibility of what they could be...

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 123 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/03/13 Updated: 02/03/13


Reviewer: RobinTheRed Signed
Date: 02/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: The Possibility

Nice job displaying a "quick-witted tongue" by using phrases that flow quickly off the tongue with alliteration and rhyme. Closing the poem with a sly smile makes the relationship real, human - not just an idealization. Good stuff.

Author's Response: Why, thank you very much! I was not expecting any reviews- and then yours showed up, and I had skipping puppies within my stomach. I am excited that you enjoyed it. :) Keep reading!

 

Today I Do Not Want To Be... by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: A series of poems involving Harry Potter subjects wishing that they could be something else...

Written for the Today I Do Not Want To Be A challenge in the PA.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders, Violence

Word count: 1510 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/04/13 Updated: 02/19/13


Reviewer: RobinTheRed Signed
Date: 02/08/13 Title: Chapter 1: ...Hope

Not sure why, but your poem reminded me of this - "Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow; - vainly I had sought to borrow
From my books surcease of sorrow - sorrow for the lost Lenore -
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels named Lenore -
Nameless here for evermore."
Not a bad comparison to conjure!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am flattered that you would want to compare my poetry to more well-known poets. :)

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