I always have a very hard time reading fan fics because I just don't find them believable, but that was definitely not the case with your story. I could seriously see this being published as an alternate ending to the series. This story kept me enchanted from beginning to end. I think the thing I liked most is that for once I found myself disliking the main character. Lottie is like the anti harry, and her personality is fascinating. Keep up the great work and keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. Years later, as I'm battling out of a writing slump, reviews like this are so encouraging and inspiring. Thanks!