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Nineteen Days Later by HalfASlug
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 51]

Summary: It has been nineteen days since the war ended. For everyone involved, it's time to move on and rebuild but can they after everything that has happened?

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Suicide

Word count: 23195 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/08/12 Updated: 01/01/13


Reviewer: lauraloo22 Signed
Date: 02/07/13 Title: Chapter 4: An Awkward Conversation

I just re-read the Hermione chapter and have to re-review, of course! The way you intertwine the story of her father and Ron is perfect and fitting, because like you said, Ron will take over many of her father's roles. You do an amazing job of capturing what I imagine post-war Hermione would be, not ridiculously hysterical but far from being alright. Also, you do so well at portraying Ron and Hermione's new relationship, because I think that's how they would go about it since it happened in such a crazy time, in the middle of a war!

I love all of your stuff!

Author's Response: Oh wow reviewing is wonderful enough - double reviewing, I don't even know what to say! Thank you! Yeah, I really can't see Hermione falling apart completely but none of them are going to be okay for a while. They'll be okay because they have each other, but outsiders won't understand. Thank you! Nothing else about them has been carefully thought through, has it? I love all of your words! Too much? Oh well, thank you!

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