Me? Imagine a slightly short girl with black hair. Extremely talkative, never still and quiet, that's me. Nothing special.
I live in Korea(South), so my name is Jiyoung. But I like Jenny better. I'm 14 years old, and I love reading the fics in this site. I like writing too, but I don't post fics a lot here..(mostly because I'm horrible in English) But I keep reading!
P.S. I can't understand WHY I need to learn Physics and Math and everything at this age.. It's bloody hard but nobody else is complaining..
Summary: A story of how Rose Weasley and Scorpius Malfoy evolved from being two people who never spoke to each other to being two people who broke all of their families expectations to be with each other.
I liked it! Please go on with the next chapter, I can't wait!
Ginny Weasley is where she used to dream to be someday. She is being hailed as the next great Quidditch player. She is the starting Chaser on the Holyhead Harpies and is playing Seeker for the first Unified United Kingdom Quidditch World Cup team. However, Ginny has discovered that being a 'Quidditch star' has costs. You have no privacy, and people will talk about you, saying things that have little or no foundation in truth.
Ginny is facing a turning point in her life. She will be going up against Viktor Krum and the favored Bulgarians. She also has a long term contract with the Harpies awaiting a signature after the match.
And there's always Harry Potter, the other part of her dream. Can she or does she still want both of them as the main part of her life?
Is Maryam a girl or boy? Is Gwenog a girl or boy? Is Georgette a girl or boy??
Whatever. I still think your works are amazing. :)
Author's Response: Gwenog Jones is the world's best and famous female quidditch star. According to JK Rowling. she is the Captain of the Holyhead Harpies
Summary: The story of Ron and Hermione through a series of missing moments. Who said love was simple?
Your writing is amazing, and I enjoyed every single part of this story. Thank you, for writing this simply wonderful story and lighting up my life.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the kind words! It really means a lot when people take the time to review so thank you :)
Summary: Title borrowed from the song, If I Die Young, by the Band Perry
When the question is posed, Severus makes a promise he can't keep
I really liked the way it showed the two of them when they were young, since that's my favorite part in the books. The way Lily was so... well, innocent, was really sad. Overall, great story. Among your stories, this is the first one I read, and I'm happy to find that I have someone else to add to my favorite author list.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I am extremely glad you liked this, and it makes me want to write more one-shots. :) Keep reading.
Scorpius Malfoy, Jimber Dokes, Albus Potter and Rose Weasley are looking for a non-eventful second year at Hogwarts. However, even before the opening feast of the school year is over the entire second year Gryffindor class are called into a special meeting that will launch themselves and the entire school into a mystery.
As the Auror office, led by concerned parents Harry Potter and Ron Weasley, search for clues. Draco Malfoy will be tested when a former school mate drops back into his life forcing Draco to choose between his new life as an honest business man and a Slytherin Prefect sworn to secrecy for members of his house.
Beta Reader - The owl(Sophie)
This is amazing!!! I didn't read much yet, but I can just tell that you could be another j.k. rowling. I love how you created the Margaret and polyjuice potion part. It's just so creative!
Is that it? Just like that? Can you pleassse write a sequel????? I love your stories!!!
Summary: It was what I imagined stars felt like. Burning bright, but floating high above anyone who wanted to pull them down.
The one summer where everything changed was when Voldemort returned. People were changing, too. It was the summer that changed Luna Lovegood for good.
This is iMusic17 of Slytherin writing for the Picture Prompt in Part I of Madam Pomfrey's One-Shot Triathalon.
I don't really know what to think. It was sad how Luna loved him but he loved Hermione, and I kind of hated Ron for being like that. But I liked the way Luna was drawn in this fic, that she knew Harry wasn't dead. I guess Luna would have known. The reason I'm confused is because I don't know if Ron likes her or not, but still, it's a beautiful story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It is rather sad, but Luna knew exactly how Ron felt throughout the entire piece. I think she's far more perceptive than people give her credit for, and though she really wanted it to work, after that kiss she knew it wouldn't. For Ron, it's always Hermione, and I believe he was trying to force himself to get over her that summer, but once (even though part of him felt something for Luna) he tried, he knew it was impossible. Thank you so much for the lovely review again!
Summary: I was never one to be at a loss for words. But in my fifth year, all of that changed when I began to spend more time with Scorpius Malfoy. This is the story of how I, Lily, began to fall apart over Scorpius.
I liked the way you described how Lily felt about him, and how he asked her out.Scorpius was really nice in this story! I can tell why Lily fell for him:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ~Maple
Summary: It's late on a Sunday evening, and Neville has a couple of questions...
Why is there a whole bunch of confusing Arithmancy in his Herbology textbook? What in Merlin's name is the Fibonacci series? And since when has he been feeling so strange around Luna?
This is 1000timesingoldenink of Ravenclaw writing for the Great Hall Valentine's Day Cotillion 2013.
Jenny's last theorem:
I really like how you used the connection between math and biology to connect two characters, Neville and Luna. Please write more of Neville/Luna, I love how you write them.
P.S. My name is Jenny too, And I'm studying for a math contest. Interesting coincidence!
Author's Response: *yay another Harry Potter math nerd* Oh, I doubt it will be your last theorem. :) I'm glad you liked my story! I love writing Luna, or writing about her from other perspectives. I do have a Luna-centric chaptered fic growing in my head...but as I have another chaptered fic which is better-developed, I am writing that one first, so the Luna one will be a while. Sorry. Now I want to know what math contest you're studying for! Because I actually have another one this morning...and I'm kind of nervous...wish me luck, and good luck to you!
Summary: In one dance, everything Helga thought she knew comes crashing down around her. She should have known all things come to an end, especially in matters concerning a heartless toerag by the name of Salazar Slytherin.
I thought Salazar loved Helena Ravenclaw? I guess it doesn't matter when he's got no heart. It was a sad story that was somehow beautiful (I don't know how it can be beautiful when he dumped her but it just seems like that). I liked the slightest touches you made, the way you described their change of emotions. I'm adding this to my favorite story list.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for the review! I think you're thinking of Helena and the Bloody Baron, but it's true, it doesn't matter when Salazar has a heart made of stone. I'm shocked and ecstatic that you liked it, and you noticed the little details. Just thank you.
Summary: Frank Longbottom is trying to propose to his partner and girlfriend, Alice Hamilton, but his attempts at romance are constantly being interrupted. If he ever manages to give her the ring, will she say yes?
This is Gmariam of Ravenclaw writing for the Great Hall Cotillion 2013.
This was great! I really like how you made them hate & love each other (if you know what I mean). It was so sweet how Frank left that ring for her.
P.S. Did you write any Neville/Luna?
Author's Response: THank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed how this played out for them with all the ups and downs. It was fun. No, I haven't written and Neville/Luna. I think a lot of people find Luna challenging to write. I've only written one real story about her, and it was a Draco/Luna (odd, I know!) Maybe someday an idea will pop into my head. Thank you so much for reading this one, I appreciate it! ~Gina :)
Summary: On the night of her oldest brother's wedding, Lily Luna Potter is nursing a bruised heart. When she is charmed by the strange, handsome Scorpius Malfoy, she makes a mistake that will change her life..
I really liked the way Lily talked, the way Scorpius talked, the way Frank talked, ... I thought all the dialogues perfectly showed the stubborn side of Lily, and despite I saw all that, I really came to love Lily herself. I loved the way you pictured her, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you -- that is very nice of you to say. I think Lily is my favourite to write, and I tend to get attached to her, so I am glad that you like the way she is pictured. An update is coming very soon. Thanks so much for the review!
Hugo Weasley waited for a Hogwarts letter that never came.
At first, I didn't understand why he couldn't go and took a look at the review. This just proves I'm really dumb. Reading it again, I noticed how you wrote 'magic or no' at the last sentence. Nice touch, maybe I should have read that more carefully. I liked how you came up with an unusual plot, a boy with no magic. It was really creative, and the way you described Hugo was so real. I almost tricked myself into thinking he was right in front of me! I'm going to read more of your fics, you seem like a great writer.
Hi! I'm glad to see a new face and that you like my work. I would be happy to have you over any time. :)
Yeah, I didn't just come out and say he's a Squib, because it's usually not necessary to bludgeon a reader over the head with something they've likely figured out already. But really, it's not as if Ron and Hermione would keep Hugo from Hogwarts for any other reason than he just wasn't invited. And as you read the reviews, you can see a bit more of my thoughts on how the parents feel, but the story is mostly about Hugo and how he feels and his lack of coming to terms with not going.
Anyway, thank you for stopping in. Do swing by again some time. Out of a hundred stories, I hope I have some things you would like. ♥
Summary: Healer Hugo Weasley is forced to relive a rather painful part of his past when a patient turns out to be the girl he has always loved.
This is Ginny Weasley Potter of Hufflepuff House, writing for the 2013 Great Hall Cotillion.
It's so sad, how it ended just like that. And I do wish the end was more... I don't know ... natural? It's sad and horrible and everything, and the way he punched Grey was so awesome, but I do wish there was more to the story.
Author's Response: Hello, and thank you for your review! :)
About the way this ends -- my honest thoughts were that an explanation, or a more complete ending would take away the feel of the story. I just wanted to show how Hugo has actually given up on Annie, if you see what I mean. The story after this is open to interpretation, really, though I might write a sequel if it beckons. :)
Summary: Lily and Albus have always been close. When Albus is away playing with dragons and she-demons and Lily dealing with her own problems with Shady Scamanders and her favourite Teddy, the two communicate by the only way they can - letters.
I really liked this one. I loved the way they bickered with each other. I also liked the she-demon part as well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Lily and Albus definitely have a teasing relationship, and there will be more she-demon to come. :)
Maple and Ellie
Summary: It's been eight years since the Battle of Hogwarts. Neville Longbottom has gone on to become a successful herbologist, but he is still struggling. However, there could be hope waiting for him at a party at the Potters'...
Loved it! I have to admit, I was kind of used to Neville/Luna, but i loved the way you finished like that:
'Her smile was answer enough.'
Also, I really liked the idea of 'going on', but not forgetting entirely.
Summary: Dudley Dursley makes a speech to honor the world's most famous wizard.
I just loved it! I really liked how you let us know Dudley was making a speech for Harry's death without actually telling us, and the way Dudley spoke... It was just perfect, I could actually hear his voice inside my head! This is going inside my favorite story list.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Great to hear :)
On the day that Teddy Lupin begins his new life with Victoire Weasley, his bride, Lily Potter's heart breaks.
This story was submitted for the Milestone Celebrations competition and was voted into 1st Place. Thank you so much for your support!
This story has also been nominated for a 2013 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Next Generation Story.
Very well written, though not exactly fun. I feel so sorry for Lily.
Well, it's not fun at all when your first love doesn't love you back in that way, and considering how uncomfortable it was for him, I think Teddy wouldn't have forgiven himself if he didn't put an end to it right then.
Anyway, thanks for reading and for the follow. :)
Summary: The first time she sees him, he is leaning against the brick wall outside Tesco, paper in one hand, cigarette in the other.
A familiar stranger walks into Petunia Dursley's life.
Wow that was so amazing. I really liked how you went deeply into Petunia's emotions, the way she miss her sister. Still, I'm a bit confused. Is the man Sirius?
Author's Response: Thank you! The story takes place after Sirius went to Azkaban. It's Remus :)
Summary: After the Battle of Hogwarts, Draco Malfoy and his family found themselves as outcasts. Hated by the Magical community, they were shunned for months following the battle. Draco, having changed dramatically during his service as a Death Eater, knew that his family got what they deserved - even felt they should have received a more severe punishment. He regretted and hated his past and had no reason to believe that his future would be much of an improvement.
Until he got a letter inviting him back to Hogwarts.
He knew the risks. He knew the consequences. But he didn't know her.
Wow, it was fun! As you said, it wasn't exactly perfect. I could see parts that weren't smooth enough. But despite that, I really like the way you described Draco and his feelings. Hermione's feelings, too. And McGonagall giving Draco the Head Boy badge, that was something she definitely would have done. Overall, I can't wait for the next chapter. I expect Hermione and Draco will feel attracted to each other soon, and that would be something I would really enjoy seeing :)
P.S. I'm sorry if this review sounded arrogant or anything.. I'm not that good at English and I always feel awkward writing reviews
Author's Response: Oh, no! Your review was wonderful! I really appreciate the feedback. I know it's not perfect but that's okay. Nothing is ever perfect. I keep meaning to post the next chapter but I just don't have the time.