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Scorpius Malfoy and the Disappearing Girl by Hotrav

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

Scorpius Malfoy, Jimber Dokes, Albus Potter and Rose Weasley are looking for a non-eventful second year at Hogwarts. However, even before the opening feast of the school year is over the entire second year Gryffindor class are called into a special meeting that will launch themselves and the entire school into a mystery.

As the Auror office, led by concerned parents Harry Potter and Ron Weasley, search for clues. Draco Malfoy will be tested when a former school mate drops back into his life forcing Draco to choose between his new life as an honest business man and a Slytherin Prefect sworn to secrecy for members of his house.

Beta Reader - The owl(Sophie)

Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 01/05/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Places of Interest

This is amazing!!! I didn't read much yet, but I can just tell that you could be another j.k. rowling. I love how you created the Margaret and polyjuice potion part. It's just so creative!

Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 01/06/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Friendly Meetings?

Is that it? Just like that? Can you pleassse write a sequel????? I love your stories!!!

Eyes Open by iLuna17

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It was what I imagined stars felt like. Burning bright, but floating high above anyone who wanted to pull them down.

The one summer where everything changed was when Voldemort returned. People were changing, too. It was the summer that changed Luna Lovegood for good.

This is iMusic17 of Slytherin writing for the Picture Prompt in Part I of Madam Pomfrey's One-Shot Triathalon.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 04/04/13 Title: Chapter 1: Eyes Open

I don't really know what to think. It was sad how Luna loved him but he loved Hermione, and I kind of hated Ron for being like that. But I liked the way Luna was drawn in this fic, that she knew Harry wasn't dead. I guess Luna would have known. The reason I'm confused is because I don't know if Ron likes her or not, but still, it's a beautiful story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It is rather sad, but Luna knew exactly how Ron felt throughout the entire piece. I think she's far more perceptive than people give her credit for, and though she really wanted it to work, after that kiss she knew it wouldn't. For Ron, it's always Hermione, and I believe he was trying to force himself to get over her that summer, but once (even though part of him felt something for Luna) he tried, he knew it was impossible. Thank you so much for the lovely review again!


Tongue-Tied by Maple_and_PheonixFeather

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: I was never one to be at a loss for words. But in my fifth year, all of that changed when I began to spend more time with Scorpius Malfoy. This is the story of how I, Lily, began to fall apart over Scorpius.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 04/05/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked the way you described how Lily felt about him, and how he asked her out.Scorpius was really nice in this story! I can tell why Lily fell for him:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! ~Maple

Pineapple in the Library by 1000timesingoldenink

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: It's late on a Sunday evening, and Neville has a couple of questions...

Why is there a whole bunch of confusing Arithmancy in his Herbology textbook? What in Merlin's name is the Fibonacci series? And since when has he been feeling so strange around Luna?

This is 1000timesingoldenink of Ravenclaw writing for the Great Hall Valentine's Day Cotillion 2013.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/01/13 Title: Chapter 1: Pineapples, artichokes, sneezewort, sunflowers and daisies

Jenny's last theorem:
You+WrenWinterSong=Amazing story!

I really like how you used the connection between math and biology to connect two characters, Neville and Luna. Please write more of Neville/Luna, I love how you write them.

P.S. My name is Jenny too, And I'm studying for a math contest. Interesting coincidence!

Author's Response: *yay another Harry Potter math nerd* Oh, I doubt it will be your last theorem. :) I'm glad you liked my story! I love writing Luna, or writing about her from other perspectives. I do have a Luna-centric chaptered fic growing in my head...but as I have another chaptered fic which is better-developed, I am writing that one first, so the Luna one will be a while. Sorry. Now I want to know what math contest you're studying for! Because I actually have another one this morning...and I'm kind of nervous...wish me luck, and good luck to you!

Waltz of Treachery by iLuna17

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In one dance, everything Helga thought she knew comes crashing down around her. She should have known all things come to an end, especially in matters concerning a heartless toerag by the name of Salazar Slytherin.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/23/13 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

I thought Salazar loved Helena Ravenclaw? I guess it doesn't matter when he's got no heart. It was a sad story that was somehow beautiful (I don't know how it can be beautiful when he dumped her but it just seems like that). I liked the slightest touches you made, the way you described their change of emotions. I'm adding this to my favorite story list.

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for the review! I think you're thinking of Helena and the Bloody Baron, but it's true, it doesn't matter when Salazar has a heart made of stone. I'm shocked and ecstatic that you liked it, and you noticed the little details. Just thank you.


Finally by Gmariam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Frank Longbottom is trying to propose to his partner and girlfriend, Alice Hamilton, but his attempts at romance are constantly being interrupted. If he ever manages to give her the ring, will she say yes?
This is Gmariam of Ravenclaw writing for the Great Hall Cotillion 2013.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/03/13 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two - Won't She?

This was great! I really like how you made them hate & love each other (if you know what I mean). It was so sweet how Frank left that ring for her.

P.S. Did you write any Neville/Luna?

Author's Response: THank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed how this played out for them with all the ups and downs. It was fun. No, I haven't written and Neville/Luna. I think a lot of people find Luna challenging to write. I've only written one real story about her, and it was a Draco/Luna (odd, I know!) Maybe someday an idea will pop into my head. Thank you so much for reading this one, I appreciate it! ~Gina :)

Trade Mistakes by Verita Serum

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: On the night of her oldest brother's wedding, Lily Luna Potter is nursing a bruised heart. When she is charmed by the strange, handsome Scorpius Malfoy, she makes a mistake that will change her life..

Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/26/13 Title: Chapter 3: Mess

I really liked the way Lily talked, the way Scorpius talked, the way Frank talked, ... I thought all the dialogues perfectly showed the stubborn side of Lily, and despite I saw all that, I really came to love Lily herself. I loved the way you pictured her, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you -- that is very nice of you to say. I think Lily is my favourite to write, and I tend to get attached to her, so I am glad that you like the way she is pictured. An update is coming very soon. Thanks so much for the review!


A Letter for Hugo by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •

Hugo Weasley waited for a Hogwarts letter that never came.

Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/05/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At first, I didn't understand why he couldn't go and took a look at the review. This just proves I'm really dumb. Reading it again, I noticed how you wrote 'magic or no' at the last sentence. Nice touch, maybe I should have read that more carefully. I liked how you came up with an unusual plot, a boy with no magic. It was really creative, and the way you described Hugo was so real. I almost tricked myself into thinking he was right in front of me! I'm going to read more of your fics, you seem like a great writer.

Author's Response:

Hi! I'm glad to see a new face and that you like my work. I would be happy to have you over any time. :)

Yeah, I didn't just come out and say he's a Squib, because it's usually not necessary to bludgeon a reader over the head with something they've likely figured out already. But really, it's not as if Ron and Hermione would keep Hugo from Hogwarts for any other reason than he just wasn't invited. And as you read the reviews, you can see a bit more of my thoughts on how the parents feel, but the story is mostly about Hugo and how he feels and his lack of coming to terms with not going.

Anyway, thank you for stopping in. Do swing by again some time. Out of a hundred stories, I hope I have some things you would like. ♥


Battered Heart by Ginny Weasley Potter

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Healer Hugo Weasley is forced to relive a rather painful part of his past when a patient turns out to be the girl he has always loved.

This is Ginny Weasley Potter of Hufflepuff House, writing for the 2013 Great Hall Cotillion.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/27/13 Title: Chapter 1: For Real?

It's so sad, how it ended just like that. And I do wish the end was more... I don't know ... natural? It's sad and horrible and everything, and the way he punched Grey was so awesome, but I do wish there was more to the story.

Author's Response: Hello, and thank you for your review! :)

About the way this ends -- my honest thoughts were that an explanation, or a more complete ending would take away the feel of the story. I just wanted to show how Hugo has actually given up on Annie, if you see what I mean. The story after this is open to interpretation, really, though I might write a sequel if it beckons. :)

Dragons and Teddy Bears by Maple_and_PheonixFeather, iLuna17

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily and Albus have always been close. When Albus is away playing with dragons and she-demons and Lily dealing with her own problems with Shady Scamanders and her favourite Teddy, the two communicate by the only way they can - letters.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 04/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this one. I loved the way they bickered with each other. I also liked the she-demon part as well.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Lily and Albus definitely have a teasing relationship, and there will be more she-demon to come. :)

Maple and Ellie

Something Worth Celebrating by Ali Wood

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's been eight years since the Battle of Hogwarts. Neville Longbottom has gone on to become a successful herbologist, but he is still struggling. However, there could be hope waiting for him at a party at the Potters'...
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/28/13 Title: Chapter 1: Something Worth Celebrating

Loved it! I have to admit, I was kind of used to Neville/Luna, but i loved the way you finished like that:
'Her smile was answer enough.'
Also, I really liked the idea of 'going on', but not forgetting entirely.

Portraits: Dudley Dursley by Alice in Potterland

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Dudley Dursley makes a speech to honor the world's most famous wizard.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/31/13 Title: Chapter 1: A Muggle's Address

I just loved it! I really liked how you let us know Dudley was making a speech for Harry's death without actually telling us, and the way Dudley spoke... It was just perfect, I could actually hear his voice inside my head! This is going inside my favorite story list.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Great to hear :)

Girl Beneath the Stars by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

On the day that Teddy Lupin begins his new life with Victoire Weasley, his bride, Lily Potter's heart breaks.

This story was submitted for the Milestone Celebrations competition and was voted into 1st Place. Thank you so much for your support!

This story has also been nominated for a 2013 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Next Generation Story.

Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/20/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well written, though not exactly fun. I feel so sorry for Lily.

Author's Response:

Well, it's not fun at all when your first love doesn't love you back in that way, and considering how uncomfortable it was for him, I think Teddy wouldn't have forgiven himself if he didn't put an end to it right then.

Anyway, thanks for reading and for the follow. :)


Shangri-La by the opaleye

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: The first time she sees him, he is leaning against the brick wall outside Tesco, paper in one hand, cigarette in the other.

A familiar stranger walks into Petunia Dursley's life.

Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 03/20/13 Title: Chapter 1: life ain't so happy in your shangri-la

Wow that was so amazing. I really liked how you went deeply into Petunia's emotions, the way she miss her sister. Still, I'm a bit confused. Is the man Sirius?

Author's Response: Thank you! The story takes place after Sirius went to Azkaban. It's Remus :)

Final Chances by IWriteToSurvive

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After the Battle of Hogwarts, Draco Malfoy and his family found themselves as outcasts. Hated by the Magical community, they were shunned for months following the battle. Draco, having changed dramatically during his service as a Death Eater, knew that his family got what they deserved - even felt they should have received a more severe punishment. He regretted and hated his past and had no reason to believe that his future would be much of an improvement.

Until he got a letter inviting him back to Hogwarts.

He knew the risks. He knew the consequences. But he didn't know her.
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 12/12/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Starting Over

Wow, it was fun! As you said, it wasn't exactly perfect. I could see parts that weren't smooth enough. But despite that, I really like the way you described Draco and his feelings. Hermione's feelings, too. And McGonagall giving Draco the Head Boy badge, that was something she definitely would have done. Overall, I can't wait for the next chapter. I expect Hermione and Draco will feel attracted to each other soon, and that would be something I would really enjoy seeing :)
P.S. I'm sorry if this review sounded arrogant or anything.. I'm not that good at English and I always feel awkward writing reviews

Author's Response: Oh, no! Your review was wonderful! I really appreciate the feedback. I know it's not perfect but that's okay. Nothing is ever perfect. I keep meaning to post the next chapter but I just don't have the time.

Come Home by WrenWinterSong

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Three year old Teddy Lupin ponders the photographs on the living room side table.

{Thanks for >1600 reads!}
Reviewer: J-Holly Signed
Date: 11/25/13 Title: Chapter 1: Home

Wow, I really liked this story! My favorite part was that Teddy doesn't realize Tonks and Remus is dead, that's so sad.. It's just the way a baby would think, I loved that touch! I'm also relieved to know that your other fic is going to come back someday, I couldn't check this site for a few months and I totally panicked when I checked for the next chapter and saw it was gone.. I'll be looking forward to it:)

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it. Death is a concept most kids don't understand, especially in Teddy's case where he never even knew the people who are dead so he can't even associate death with missing or being gone. And yes! My scorose fic will be returning, completely revamped. I just wasn't satisfied with the direction 'A Strange Distance' was headed, so I completely rewrote my outline, rethought my characters, and am very happy with how the new version is coming along. Already have three chapter written, so look for it soon! :)