I love Harry Potter, and I love to write. What more should I say?
This story is beautiful and - if this makes sense - lazily captivating. It just holds onto your heart without you even realising, until you reach moments such as the green eyes reference (stunning, by the way) and it gives you a little squeeze.
From the very first paragraph I dove right into your writing style which matched Ron's state magically. I think we all wonder what went through Ron's head during this part of their adventure, and this describes it so fully that I believe every world, and yet it's so simply written, so clever and subtle.
I loved the way you described Ron looking at Hermione and how he sees her, it just works for Ron. So well.
Love it so much, one of my favourites!
This is brilliant! It is so cute and bubbly, and the set out makes it all the more fun. This is one of the first times I've ever warmed to Percy!
Love it love it love it! I'm glad Percy found a snappy but playful girl :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this one and am pleased (if somewhat bemused) at the great reception it's received (i before e, :D). Audrey in my other stories isn't nearly as playful, sadly.
Thanks again ~Carole~
This is lucca4 of Gryffindor submitting my entry for Rosmerta's Mini-Gauntlet being held in The Three Broomsticks over at the MNFF beta boards.
Thank you and hugs to the lovely Jess for reading this over, and to Alex, for everything ♥.
Winner of the 2012 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Marauder-era Story.
The line 'But she loves the taste of hesitation -- so different than the blind desire and simplicity of the opposite sex.' was just so wonderfully Bellatrix. This piece is an interesting way of looking at the character, I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line - I am hoping to explore more of Bellatrix's relationships in future stories. Thank you so much for leaving this review!