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Hangman by littlebird
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: Past Featured StoryOn the morning of Hermione’s 18th birthday, Ron hunts as Harry gathers. One boy is successful, while the other is not. At the end of an hour, who is to blame?

One-Shot.

This story has been nominated for the 2012 Quick Silver Quills: Best Dark/ Angst Fic



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2844 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/09/11 Updated: 06/15/11


Reviewer: Sooty Salamander Signed
Date: 12/11/12 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

This story is beautiful and - if this makes sense - lazily captivating. It just holds onto your heart without you even realising, until you reach moments such as the green eyes reference (stunning, by the way) and it gives you a little squeeze.
From the very first paragraph I dove right into your writing style which matched Ron's state magically. I think we all wonder what went through Ron's head during this part of their adventure, and this describes it so fully that I believe every world, and yet it's so simply written, so clever and subtle.
I loved the way you described Ron looking at Hermione and how he sees her, it just works for Ron. So well.
Love it so much, one of my favourites!

 

'i' before 'e' by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 33]

Summary: Ms A Cadwallader wishes to improve herself and apply for a better job. Unfortunately, despite her impeccable qualifications, she is thwarted by a certain Junior Under Secretary for the Minister of Magic, who has let it be known that basic spelling errors can never be over looked.

This story, written in the style of a series of letters, first appeared in The Battle of the Genres over at the SBBC forum.

I am not JK Rowling. She would probably have been more amusing.

This story is for Minna because it was her birthday and she likes this pairing.

Thank you Natalie for liking the drabble and encouraging me to expand.

Winner of the Best Humour QSQ in 2012 - GOBSMACKED!!!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1538 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/21/12 Updated: 04/21/12


Reviewer: Sooty Salamander Signed
Date: 12/11/12 Title: Chapter 1: Letters

This is brilliant! It is so cute and bubbly, and the set out makes it all the more fun. This is one of the first times I've ever warmed to Percy!
Love it love it love it! I'm glad Percy found a snappy but playful girl :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this one and am pleased (if somewhat bemused) at the great reception it's received (i before e, :D). Audrey in my other stories isn't nearly as playful, sadly.

Thanks again ~Carole~

 

Vendetta by lucca4
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Past Featured Story

A story of one of Voldemort's most prized Death Eaters, and the three kills that changed her.

This is lucca4 of Gryffindor submitting my entry for Rosmerta's Mini-Gauntlet being held in The Three Broomsticks over at the MNFF beta boards.

Thank you and hugs to the lovely Jess for reading this over, and to Alex, for everything ♥.

Winner of the 2012 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Marauder-era Story.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 2524 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/15/12 Updated: 05/20/12


Reviewer: Sooty Salamander Signed
Date: 12/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: mercy. revenge. lust.

The line 'But she loves the taste of hesitation -- so different than the blind desire and simplicity of the opposite sex.' was just so wonderfully Bellatrix. This piece is an interesting way of looking at the character, I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line - I am hoping to explore more of Bellatrix's relationships in future stories. Thank you so much for leaving this review!

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