Harry Potter fan, interest in writing and improving. Much experience with reading and writing fanfics.
Summary:
Harry Potter has come to Hogwarts.
But I am waiting for him.
I who loved his mother, detested his father for taking her away from me. I deserved Lily Evans. I gave my word to protect her son. But how shall I stop myself? I want to see a young, helpless James Potter sqirm and writhe under my gaze....This is most excellent! Short and sweet!
It makes me want to reread the entire series JUST so I can pick up clues of the Lily/ Sev ship
Winter by Padfoot11333
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 7]
Summary:
He says when you gonna make up your mind?
When you gonna love you as much as I do?
Cause things are gonna change so fast
I tell you that I'll always want you near
You say that things change my dear
Boys get discovered as winter melts
Flowers competing for the sun *
Lily Evans and Severus Snape are best friends. Right?
Severus Snape and James Potter are worst enemies. Right?
But what happens when Lily has to make up her mind? What happens when she can no longer put up with Severus, and she can no longer ignore James?
Things change, and that's what Lily has to discover. But what else she discovers is that many things stay the same. And she can't decide what should stay and what should go.
*Lyrics taken from Winter by Tori AmosHello, I'm very interested in this fic!
I've been curious about the Severous/ Lily relationship and I like where this story is going.
One thing I noticed in the first chapter that was improved in the second chapter was the use of unnecessary.. um words or add ons. For example "slytherine is dark and green and stuff," or, "...For our final project or something." The "and stuff" and "or something" phrases just seem a little unnecessary and take away from your nice writing if you know what i mean
