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Spontaneity by Northumbrian
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 69]

Summary: Hermione (and Ginny) chose to return to Hogwarts to study. Harry and Ron joined the Auror Office. It's the Easter holidays, two weeks home from school for the girls, but their boyfriends are both working. The all important NEWT exams are approaching, Hermione's revision schedule is already carefully planned. Will she find time for Ron? What about Harry and Ginny?

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 18766 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
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08/03/10 Updated: 05/28/11


Reviewer: AuroraB Signed
Date: 10/06/12 Title: Chapter 1: Hermione

I don't read much fanfic but I am always looking for some that fits my very specific criteria: canon pairings, sex, nothing else. I am appalled by the violence, death, drugs, & other depressing things in most fanfic. I want to be cheered up by a story, not depressed, and yours was uplifting. I did a search for "Professor" rating and "sexual situations" and this piece came up. I enjoyed the multiple viewpoints, the good writing, and keeping to canon. I would have enjoyed Harry & Ron's perspective on their first times & more explicit sex scenes rather than the ol' leave-it-to-the-imagination fade. Others will disagree, I am sure. Overall, great story.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
All of my stories take place in the same future, and all head inexorably towards the epilogue. This is probably the most rewritten and edited of all my stories. The Hermione chapter was originally a one shot. It is the only “rude” story I’ve written, mainly because writing good (and accurate) sex scenes is easy to get horribly wrong. This is simply smutty fluff. I have written a ruder version (and also a less rude version). I checked with my betas and this is as “adult” as this site will accept. Since your review I’ve taken a look at the (unpublished) very rude version, and I think that I’ve found a couple of sites which will take it. However, I will rewrite it (again) first.
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