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11/09/04

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A 19-year-old Egyptian,undergraduate at Alexandria University studying Computer and Communications Engineering. An avid Harry Potter fan since the age of 9. When not reading, I write poetry, listen to good music and practice card magic.


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A Second Chance by Dracosgirl1992

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 4 Reviews
Summary: Draco Malfoy never thought he would get s second chance. But after he receives a letter inviting him to finish his education at Hogwarts, he is thrilled, but still scared of the reception he will get. He thinks he will be all alone.

Astoria Greengrass makes sure this is not the case.

As the year goes on, Draco and Astoria get closer and closer, and Draco realises that maybe he does deserve a Second Chance...
Reviewer: Moody Signed
Date: 01/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An interesting premise although with slightly too much focus on dialogue. It would be more interesting to see how the characters unfold rather than having them display all their emotions through their dialogue; this goes specifically for the conversation between Narcissa and Draco. Otherwise, interesting work and I'd like to see more of this!

Author's Response: First of all, thanks for taking the time to read :) I think I focused more on dialogue in this chapter because it's what I think my strong point is. I understand what you mean about the amount of dialogue. I hope you continue to read and tell me if the amount of dialogue is getting better! :)