A 19-year-old Egyptian,undergraduate at Alexandria University studying Computer and Communications Engineering. An avid Harry Potter fan since the age of 9. When not reading, I write poetry, listen to good music and practice card magic.
Two thumbs up, and an applause! That's what I ought to say after reading such a great story.
Author's Response: Hmm, I've noticed that you sent that in twice. Whatever
Summary: The final battle has now come and its time for Harry to face Voldemort in the fight for surival
I felt like reading the seventh book written by JK. Rowling, and not Kristina. This is great. Pure talent, ana amazing amount of effort, that I have noticed in each chapter of yours. You have the spirit of an amateur author, and the pen of an even greater one. Just one advice, that I usually give, for you and all like you: Keep posting!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm blushing. I must say I love this story I think I wrote it two years ago and its still my favourite. I've had to change it a bit because they said my Harry was OC but never mind. Thanks so much for what you said it really means something to me and I hope you like the next chapter when its up and everything
Author's Response: *blushes* thank you, I don't know what else to say...
A writer of excellence, and a story as accomplished as ever. What would the best story ask for after that?
Author's Response: Thank you, I think that's all I can say, and all thats left well I think its called epilogue, but thank you so much, you've made me blush like mad
I find this story pretty gripping and electrifying. You have an excellent talent of keeping the reader turn fast through the chapters. You have proved that you're quite a bright author. I found just a tiny grammar mistake, that I'm sure you'll correct it.
Author's Response: Thank you, thats so nice, I will look back through for grammar mistakes, it seems that I've missed another one, thank you Kris
OH MY GOD!
THIS IS AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZING!
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, POST THE TENTH CHAPTER AS FAST AS POSSIBLE!
Author's Response: Okay the next chapter will be up realyl soon, I promise
That was funny. no no no,
Author's Response: thanks!!
Summary: "He knows the prophecy,Potter." Lucius' sneering voice traveled through the darkness. "The full prophecy, and he's waiting for you."
After Hogwarts; Harry is about 29. Not really that dark at the beginning, but there will be a few character deaths by the end. Lots and lots of action and general but-kicking.
You have a really good writing talent. You have the writer's spirit and the very soul of wit. With such qualifications, you didn't only make an untersting story, but a fascinating one. Francis Bacon once said that writing make you an exact man, and this is what I have noticed in your story. You know exactly when to use the perfect word in the perfect time. You need to practice a lot, don't let your talent to be wasted by all means. And whenever someone discourages you, you just make sure that you write better. Overall, I keep my opinion, this is a really great story. Thanks for shring it with us, and keep up the good work! P.S: Rating:10
interesting* makes* sharing* Sorry for typos!
Still doing really great. I find this chapter, like I told you before, another episode of your gripping plan, am I right? W O N D E R F U L
Summary: Running from Voldemort wasnít as easy as it looked; sure, Iíve been doing it for the past fifteen years, but somewhere down the line Iím not going to be so lucky.
Did Harry die?
Did Voldemort become MINISTER?
If it's so, than this is horrible, not the story, but the plot. It IS so persuading!
Author's Response: I don't understand how Harry finally being released from pain could be so horrible? Sure, he's dead, but he'd be happier that way, right? And the whole Voldemort becoming Minister, well, i thought that was his plan anyway, he wanted both the Ministry and Hogwarts.
I sometimes have a bad idea about fics containing a lot of quantity, but reading your fantastic fic made me change my mind. You're a fine writer with a great storyline. You have the great mind of portraying Harry's feelings just as we had always saw it in all five books. Now let me say this loud: You are a GREAT author who is currently writing a GREAT story!
Summary: Harry Potter is celebrating his 66th birthday, and he has agreed to watch his grandchildren for a week. Things get interesting when a spell goes wrong and Harry finds himself fifty years younger! Will Blake and Gina manage to change Harry back before they get caught?
You have a great story! A fantastic one if I can say! i find your language, grammar, and punctuation is very accurate. You have a really nice plot, with all of the characters, you know, grown up! It's real fun, and I hope it's fun for you to write something like that as well. It's always fun for me!
Summary: Seventh year has begun and Hermione Granger has found herself in great danger. What is the secret behind Voldemort's sudden change in targets, and what dangers lie in store for the trio? Riddled with plot twists and cliffhangers--the Potter Universe is in for a surprise. (This story is Pre-HBP)
That's all I could think of...I was speechless after reading this.
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks so much! Read the other chapters! I have 8 of 'em! 9 is comin soon! Enjoy!! Thanks for the review!!
I think the most interesting thing in a story is always the start and your first paragraph gripped me like mad. A REALLLLY J.K -GREAT story! Keep up the good work
Summary: In a world where the Order failed and Voldemort reigns supreme, Hermione concocts a desperate brilliant scheme to reach across dimensions and find a world where Voldemort was defeated and ask for help. And they find such a world, a world where Riddle was vanquished, a utopia where Wizards and Muggles live together under a benevolent dictatorship and Harold James Potter is the heir apparent of Lords Dumbledore and Grindelwald.
An interesting and very very well-written story...I finished the first two chapters today and will be back for more very soon! Great work!
Summary: Who said that all heroes had to be brave?
Who said that all heroes had to be bold?
Who said that all heroes should be Gryffindors?
Who said that all heroes want to be heroes?
Who said that Harry Potter was a hero?
Harry Potter has never thought himself to be an ordinary boy - and he is proven right when in the middle of the night an old woman and a large man come to speak with him.
This is the story of Harry Potter, The Boy Who Lived, Slytherin snake.
Just finished all your three chapters and I must say; it really looks like quite a good story. Harry with a little more vengeful twist is something I had never really read before and your AU portrayal of the Dursleys is also very interesting to read.
Good job and I'm waiting for your next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :) Unfortunately, I'm pretty sure that I'm not the first to utilise a vengeful Harry, a lot of Slytherin!Harry stories have the same sort of idea too :). As to more chapters, I have up to chapter 8 completely finished, just awaiting the skills of my beta, so should hopefully be up soon. Much thanks for the review!
Summary: My name is Rose Evans. My parents were Lily and James Potter, and Harry Potter is my twin brother, though he didn't know. I was raised by Severus Snape. This is my story.
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I found this a highly imaginative story...The concept is very intriguing and original. I always figured it'd be hard writing Severus as a father without sounding too OOC...However, you managed it quite well actually. I like this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It is kind of hard to imagine Snape being a father figure, but I like the challenge.
Good work again with this one. But I'm waiting for more of the first couple of chapters' original action, rather than just witnessing the Book 6 events from a different eye on this chapter. However, I'm still thrilled by the experience and the concept of this story.
Author's Response: I know, I was sooooo bored through most of writing the beginning stuff, and I managed to squeeze it into the first six chapters. I try to skim over repeats, though. Christmas has a pretty good twist... I've said too much! Thanks for the review!
Some new and interesting characters introduced, all very believable I guess! I liked this chapter too! Waiting for your next!
Author's Response: Thank you!