Penname: WytchyChycXX [Contact]
Real name: Cydney Elyza Bevys
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I'm NEWNEWNEW and I've always written stories for my friends - and now I'm going to try to show you some - hopefully... :) xxx
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Shadow People by the fetal positon
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 7]

Summary: During their sixth year, Malfoy and Potter meet in a corridor each night, as Malfoy struggles to move and Potter tries to smother their shadows.

Categories: Harry/Draco Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity

Word count: 3676 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/22/12 Updated: 06/27/12


Reviewer: WytchyChycXX Signed
Date: 07/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: Shadow People

Really interesting - but a little bit jumpy (it moves too fast and is sometimes confusing).
BUT!! I liked your style, and improvement isn't impossible - but nobody is perfect.

Overall!! : WELL DONE, GOOD WORK:)! Xx

Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you for your review and criticism! I see what you mean with it being jumpy. I meant to write it that way, but it may be too much. I’m glad you still liked other aspects of the story. :) Thank you for reading!

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