Haha Remus is in shock!! I love Lily begging "touch me please". But sooo cute when he finishes early and what she says :)
Haha this banter they have going on is hilarious!!! The "inability to get shagged comment is I think what made me want to read the story when my friend told me about it. Great work!
Sneaking around snogging was perfect! There are soo little RL fanfictions and even less completed ones. This is actually one of the really good ones ive read. I hope that you do consider finishing it because I want to know what is happening!! Lol