"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”
“No,” Sirius said simply.
“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”
The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP
its a nice story,really.but you might want to extend chapter length...most of them are a bit short.and wizards use knuts,sickles and galleons for money,not pennies
wonderful schems and ideas!
Harry Potter had seen death - a lot of death. Friends had passed in his lifetime, more so than any one person should ever experience, but how much is too much, even for the Chosen One?
Ron Weasley is dead, leaving behind his wife and his best mate. How can these two cope with their Trio being cut down to two? And when danger lurks in the shadows, can they find the strength to fight for one another?
proudfoot?sounds like padfoot :3
when do Nev and luna come in?:D
I love how you wrote this story,Ron's death is sad,but I've always had something agenst him....
never mind that. the punctuation and grammar is fairly nice,but the rest of Harry's life as a doll rita controls is a bit boring.
oh,you spelled "with" as wit in one paragraph. lovley voice!