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08/14/05




hey, i'm sara, and i just adore harry potter! all seven books in the series are exquisite, and the fanfiction is generally pretty awesome too! some other favorite books of mine include: lord of the rings, pride and prejudice, wheel of time series, any books by shannon hale, terry pratchett, gerald morris or l.a. meyer, and many others that i'm inconveniently forgetting...

so, now that you know a little bit more about moi, i'll end by saying this little tid-bit: i love to read, i love to write and i love reviews. the three "r's". so how about i write, and you guys read and review, yes? great! oh, but please don't get angry at the three-month long gaps in between updates...








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Forever Yours by harry_potter_star

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 872 Reviews
Summary:
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Okay. Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay


For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!


James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.


Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 12/04/05 Title: Chapter 8: The first Summer

really good story, update soon, well as soon as you can, good luck on your operation!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I will update soon!! thanks for the well wishing!! :)



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 12/25/05 Title: Chapter 1: First Year: The beginning

hello there, THAT IS SO COOL THAT YOU LIVE IN AUSTRALIA!!!!! I JUST READ A BOOK ABOUT AUSTRALIA CALLED FEELING SORRY FOR CELIA AND IT WAS REALLY GOOD AND WHY AM I STILL ON CAPS LOCK AND UMMM...oops i started rambling, i do that sometimes...back to the story (was i ever at the story in the first place?) i LOVE it, i hate this christmas break (i mean i love it i just don't like it that we can't submit fics) and i NEED to know what happens to remus and lily and james and...yeah, this is really good, my favorite scene is when, um, let me think, er, oh yeah! my favorite scene is when james and remus talk to each other about what calista said about lily being mean, don't know if you know what i'm talking about, sorry bout the long review, update as soon as you can!

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review!! Oh, I really hope that book wasn't full of G'days and crikeys!! sorry, but i swear I am going to lead a protest against those stereotypes!! It is cool to live in Australia, but I just wish that I could see other countries too!! Like, I have no idea how English wheather works, i'm just going with the flow, hoping noone objects lol! Yer, that's a good favourite scene, lol, there doesn't yet seem to be a double mention fav scene, I hope there will be soon! Dont ever say sorry for a lovely long review!! understand?? Thanks again!



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 12/25/05 Title: Chapter 11: Great Danger

damn i just realized i accidently submitted this review for the first chapter...so here it is: hello there, THAT IS SO COOL THAT YOU LIVE IN AUSTRALIA!!!!! I JUST READ A BOOK ABOUT AUSTRALIA CALLED FEELING SORRY FOR CELIA AND IT WAS REALLY GOOD AND WHY AM I STILL ON CAPS LOCK AND UMMM...oops i started rambling, i do that sometimes...back to the story (was i ever at the story in the first place?) i LOVE it, i hate this christmas break (i mean i love it i just don't like it that we can't submit fics) and i NEED to know what happens to remus and lily and james and...yeah, this is really good, my favorite scene is when, um, let me think, er, oh yeah! my favorite scene is when james and remus talk to each other about what calista said about lily being mean, don't know if you know what i'm talking about, sorry bout the long review, update as soon as you can!

Author's Response: its alright! same answer as before!! You were my first ever reviewer, so you can review anywhere you like! lol



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Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 11/19/05 Title: None

really really really really really really really really funny! i really really really really really really liked it a lot! updat NOW!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll try to update.



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 11/19/05 Title: None

whoops, mispelled update! once again, update soon please.

Author's Response: heehee, don't worry 'bout the misspellings! I do it ALL the time!



Crazy, Kooky Confessions of Lily Evans by SexY_LydZ

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 156 Reviews
Summary: Summary: Life for fifteen-year old Lily Evans is pretty crazy. So when Gods-gift-to-the-women-of-Hogwarts, James Potter himself, develops a crush on her, life gets even crazier. And with an insane, gorgeous best friend who belongs in a house for the criminally mad, a bunch of Marauders playing pranks and plenty of laughs, her only retreat is her faithful diary. Yes it’s shaping up to be quite a year…






This story is now in the process of being re-written. Please keep an eye on my author's page as I will update it with a note when I begin to put up the rewritten chapters.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 11/18/05 Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me, and I'll Kill You

hey this is a really awsome story ya know1 i love the whole different languages thing, but isn't beaxbatons a girl's school? anyway, update soone plz!

Author's Response: No Jk mentioned a boy from Beauxbatons in book 4, but thankyou



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 10/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: Entries and Encounters

raelly funny story so far, canīt wait to read the next chappie! update soon please.

Author's Response: Why thankyou! *takes a bow* As I said, Chapter two is in Que.



Whether We Wear Masks by Seren

Rated:24 Reviews
Summary: 'There is no black and white, Blaise.' Hermione teaches Blaise that she knows about hatred and discrimination. Warning for historical references to racism.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 09/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: Whether We Wear Masks

oh goodness. that was excellent! it was very well written and eloquent and it addressed the problem of racism and hatred very bluntly but not roughly. very nice job, this is a wonderful piece.



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Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 02/07/06 Title: None

HOLY COW!!!!!! that ending was so unexpected!!! Also I could imagine just perfectly voldy saying "she looked better back then too" about McGonnagal. Great start.

Author's Response: thanx! it always struck me as curious that voldy and mcg were 2gether at hogwarts at once, so i expanded on that. i'm glad u like it.



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 02/07/06 Title: None

This is defineetly gotng into my faves!!!! awesome writing.

Author's Response: thank u! *blushes*



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 02/07/06 Title: None

O.K. I dont care if someone laughs at me but what is an OOC?!?! Good chapter though.

Author's Response: Out Of Character. Basically, some mods, if they cant find anything actually wrong w/ the story, will grab something from the story, say it's OOC, and reject the story. thats wat's keeping ch. 7 from u guys. if it werent for OOC, u guys wud hav double the chapters u hav rite now. (i'm half-done w/ ch. 16 at the moment, and still trying to get ch. 7 to u guys).



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 02/07/06 Title: None

O.K. I need to know if any other chpters will be rated PG-13!!! Thank you.

Author's Response: yes, there will be several. the christmas chapter will definitely be pg13. anyway, i dont differentiate btwn the 2 much. thruout the story, there will be a bit of adult humor, and allusions to, well, u figure it out. if there's a lot of that in the chappie, i rate it pg13. the pg rating i put for the story is most of the story, including the 1st chapter. i dont believe in "rated r just 2 be safe". i hope it dusnt offend u, i'd hate 2 lose a reader, especially one who has already reviewed 4 times!



"Mum, Dad, It's Me... Harry." by Mudblood428

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 475 Reviews
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 05/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

oh. my. god. that was great! and really sad :( poor harry, i could never live without my parents! i honestly cried, it was so sad! great job though, you really got everything right--that is, what i imagine harry would say. 10/10



Casualties of War by JessicaH

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 51 Reviews
Summary: A war has many casualties and Hermione has lost more than most. Years on the run from Voldemort and his followers has taken it’s toll, but is she strong enough to stop to rest, to trust, to learn to love again?

Hermione/Blaise

Written in response to, and winner of, October's monthly challenge, number six. JessicaH, Ravenclaw.


Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 07/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: The End

oh my goodness. this was excellent! wow. it was very subtle and well written and exciting and wonderful! you really showed how war changes people so much, and even though it was sad that ginny didn't understand about hermione's baby, it was the truth. very surprising ending, i just hope everything works out alright for blaise and hermione! wonderful story, great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I\'m so glad you liked the story and that you think I captured the way war changes you. Again, thank you.



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Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 11/12/05 Title: None

wow. this is really good. you portray all the characters so well, it's really well-written, and i can't wait for the update!

Author's Response: thank you so so so much. u have no idea how much every review means to me (even though i only have 4 so far). the next chapter is in queue, if it gets in i hope u like it!



A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 1704 Reviews
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 11/12/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Fight and the Punishment

i really like this story! it's well-written and funny, and i can't wait for the update!



The Awakening by hearyoume

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 104 Reviews
Summary: My own shocking ending to the Harry Potter series (last chapter). Harry wakes up from a deep sleep and what he learns turns his world upside down...
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 07/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

oh. my. god. this was amazing! totally weird and different, and it really made me think, oh god, poor harry! that must feel so strange! but honestly, it would be so wierd to wake up and find it had all been a dream. excellent job, this deserves it's place in the featured section.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I\'ve been pretty shocked ever since it was made a featured story, especially when so many people started reading it. I\'m love that you think it\'s weird, lol, \'cause I wanted it to be that way. I appreciate your review! Thanks :D



All Right, Evans? by anglophile

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 270 Reviews
Summary: Everyone knows the story after that Halloween night that Harry Potter became an orphan... but what about before? James Potter and Lily Evans are two young people with an extroadinary story of bravery, friendship, and love. Join them throughout their seven years at Hogwarts and see how the past affects the future.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 12/28/05 Title: Chapter 2: A New Beginning

this is really good so far! you portrayed the characters really well, and it's nice to have a story begin in first year--lots start in seventh year, when all the "action" starts, but this explains in a good way why lily dislikes james. update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, those were my reasons exactly for starting in the first year. I wanted to show how James and Lily came from such different backgrounds, and show how all the characters evolved as they got older. I'm glad you appreciate it! Keep checking for the next chapter, I e-mailed the staff cuz it's not posting ;( so hopefully they'll fix it!!



As the Wall Crumbles by Aequitas

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 21 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: She laughs and turns, eyes set on the door on the other side of the kitchen. Her hand touches the doorknob, cold but inviting. Light envelops her as she steps out into her imagination. Open the door, child, her grandmother once said to her. Your imagination is waiting. On a beautiful summer afternoon, a child learns of her two worlds--reality and imagination--and what she must do only six years later in order to keep both in existence.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 10/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: As the Wall Crumbles

wow. this was excellent. the writing style was unique, but powerful. the story idea was good too, and one that i had never thought of too deeply. this is a wonderful piece, great job!

Author's Response: Thank you for everything! I\'m glad to see some feedback on my work.



Learning to Love by There you are Peter

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 167 Reviews
Summary: Set in James and Lily's fifth year - this is their story. I promise you it isn't the whole 'James has changed - let's get married' but it does stick to getting together in the 7th year. We begin just after OWLs and James' pathetic attempts to charm Lily go from bad to worse and not without the help of a certain friend...whose name sounds like furious...but with an i instead of a u...and no o...
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 02/10/06 Title: Chapter 5: All Things Potter

very good story so far!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter, i need to find out what happens next!! jeez, though, lily is really being stubborn about james!!! anyway, great story, update soon, yadda, yadda, yadda. 1000000000/10

Author's Response: Wow thank you! Chapter 6 is stiiiiiilll in the queue...