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08/14/05




hey, i'm sara, and i just adore harry potter! all seven books in the series are exquisite, and the fanfiction is generally pretty awesome too! some other favorite books of mine include: lord of the rings, pride and prejudice, wheel of time series, any books by shannon hale, terry pratchett, gerald morris or l.a. meyer, and many others that i'm inconveniently forgetting...

so, now that you know a little bit more about moi, i'll end by saying this little tid-bit: i love to read, i love to write and i love reviews. the three "r's". so how about i write, and you guys read and review, yes? great! oh, but please don't get angry at the three-month long gaps in between updates...








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Miss Me by Valentinia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 22 Reviews
Summary: Merope Gaunt is alone and in love with a man she knows she can never have back. In her loneliness she writes a letter that is never to be delivered to Tom Riddle.

Reviews would be greatly appreciated! Constructive critism is definately welcome!
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 06/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

very good job! you captured merope's emotions very well, really showed how she was feeling and the despair she was in. this is the first fic i've read with merope in it/narrating it, and it was very well done. great job!

Author's Response: thanks! I hope there are more fics with Merope soon! Glad you liked this!



But Sirius by Loki MM

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 20 Reviews
Summary: Sirius and Remus are in the library when Sirius happens to notice Regulus sitting next to a girl. A little too close to a girl for big brother's liking. So big brother proceeds to make a foool of himself.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 06/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: But Sirius

this was great! short and sweet, and very well written. i really liked the relationship that remus and sirius had with regulus, they weren't all mean with each other, which was very original. great job, i look forward to reading more things from you!



Last Letter by whittyleah

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 22 Reviews
Summary: Alia is to be put to death for treason against the Dark Lord. She is alone, awaiting her fate. She could despair over her misfortune, but instead she writes a letter, her last letter.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 07/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Last Letter

wow. just, wow. that was very powerful. not too many details or chatacters or confusing plot twists, just simple and emotional. very good job, this is wonderfully written.

Author's Response: Thank you! *is getting teary eyed from all the good reviews*



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Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: None

wow! interesting start, very intriguing; it makes me want to know the whole story. good job, update soon!



A Change of View by A House Elf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 27 Reviews
Summary: James sees Lily at the beginning of their fifth year and decides it's time to stop treating her like an annoying little sister.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 08/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Change of View

hahaha, oh my gosh, i loved this! it showed really well james feelings of transiton and shock towards lily and then also why he was attracted to her. the ending was comical, and the story as a whole was well written. great job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you uberly! <3



How He Knew by A House Elf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 52 Reviews
Summary: Lily makes a slip-of-the-tongue that causes James to wonder.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

squee! i love it! excellently written, very believable, very fun! great job.



Broken Friendships by RedheadedWeasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 16 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: This is a story of what happened at Godric and Salazar's final meeting. The two men exchange more than words. My take on how it all ended for the four founders.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 09/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Duel

oh god...that was sad! very good portrayal of both characters, and it's a very believable version of what might have happened. i like your writing style, too. simple but powerful, and you really get the feeling of the story through with not that many words. great job, this deserves to be in the featured!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you enjoyed it! I\'ve always wondered what happened between the Founders when Salazar left. I never imagined that he just slipped away silently into the night. I\'ve always thought there had to be some kind of final confrontation. I\'m glad you liked my version of this. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



A Change of Tactics by A House Elf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 38 Reviews
Summary: Now that James is treating Lily a little more seriously, he must consult his friends on how to take his next step.



Sequel to "A Change of View."
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 08/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hehehe, very good job! i love your writing style and characters, and it was a very comical ending. i for one think that a sequel would be an excellent idea! just one tip: watch your spelling and grammar; for instance, here you say "remus was too nice either" which doesn't make sense, and there were a few spelling errors in there as well. otherwise, great job!

Author's Response: Yes, this story was definitely imperfect, but hey, I\'m only human. With humanity comes impatience, and I just couldn\'t wait for my beta to finish her vacation.



A Sleepwalk to Remember by Lady Knightly

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 943 Reviews
Summary: For once in her life, Hermione is faced with a problem she does not know how to solve...
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 06/30/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

excellent chapter! i'm liking the developments between snape and hermione, and their characterization is wonderful. great job once again!


Author's Response: thank you!!!



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

oh. my. good. lord. above. you have to update! i just got hooked on this story and i am already addicted. i love the plot and the characters, although sometimes it's a litle hard to believe that hermione and snape keep encountering each other in all of their little mishaps--for instance, that snape happened to find hermione in the forbidden forest. otherwise, though, it's quite well written. i can't wait for the next chapter! great job.

Author's Response: oh yeah i forgot to explain that a little farther...hm, will do in the next chapter though. thanks for bringing that to my attention! and thanks for reading!!



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

great chapter! one of my favorite parts was when you showed how snape struggled with himself when hermione was being tortured, and i thought, "oh he's in love with her!" and then he made the excuse that he was just saving her life because she had saved his. hmm. some very interesting character developemets with frend and snape and hermione--an animagus! wow! oops, i hope i didn't give too much away in that review...anyway, great job, i love your writing style, the plot is flowing and wonderful, so, on to the next chapter!!

Author's Response: wow great review! thank you so much! the inner struggles of snape are probably the most fun to write :D



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

oh, wow. wow wow wow wow wow !!!!! that was an amazing chapter! it took me like ten minutes to read, it was so long! and i love snape!!! hehe, great chapter!

Author's Response: i do what i can :D thanks for reading!



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 06/18/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

oooh, absolutely delicious! *squirms and giggles happily* i love the anger between hermione and snape, and the terrifying danger they're in adds a lot of tension as well. i like your characterization, and also i love snape's darcy-esque manner of falling love. wonderful story, i can't wait for the update!

Author's Response: thank you! i\'m glad it went over well! (i didn\'t mean to make snape darcy-esque. oops, oh well)



Mistaken Confession by A House Elf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 39 Reviews
Summary: When Lily confesses about her love for a man, James doesn't get it.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 08/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wherein James is Dense

aww, this is sweet and cute. it's well written and, while not too original, not clichéd either. good job, i really like your writing style. this was very good!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I appreciate your opinion. I\'m currently working on two uber original stories, but I don\'t know if they\'ll make here. I\'ll try though.



Being Strong by rem

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 17 Reviews
Summary: A short glimpse back into Ginny Weasley's childhood at the Burrow.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aww, this was very sweet! i must say though, i think having the ending as coming out of a pensieve memory kind of ruined the whole image for me. otherwise, though, the story was cute and comical. great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, I was afraid this would ruin the story for some people, but for others, it makes the story. So I decided to keep that specific ending in there. I\'m sure it\'s not for everyone, but I\'m glad you enjoyed the majority of it.



The Sun Has Risen by Lycanthropist

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 10 Reviews
Summary: Lily Evans, though popular and kind, has at times felt the need to distance herself from the world, to contemplate on the those she loves and those that annoy. On the train ride home to her last summer before her seventh year, she realizes that there are some people that she'll never quite figure out, but that maybe there's more to them than she had ever truly thought.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 08/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well, i must say, that while this wasn't phenomenal, it was fairly good! one problem was that it didn't really have a point; it was just kind of...random. it was well written though, and i like the last few paragraphs especially; they were clever and sweet. over all, a pretty good read! good job.

Author's Response: Yeah, it is kind of random, I know. I\'ve never written James/Lily before, but this idea kind of popped into my head that maybe there was a slow progression to them getting together before seventh year, that maybe something struck a chord with Lily that James wasn\'t just a marauding jokster who was hex-happy. I thought the train was a perfect place for her to start dawning on that.

Thank you for reviewing!



Drowning in Defeat by LostMaeblleshire

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 22 Reviews
Summary: "If you wanted to drown yourself," she commented casually, "you'd have had better luck staying out on the pitch." A missing moment, just after Gryffindor loses the Quidditch match in PoA, in which Katie Bell attempts to cheer up a forlorn Oliver Wood.
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Drowning in Defeat

i love this! very sweet and fluffy, and i love the ending. great job, i like your writing style too. very cute!



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Drowning in Defeat

i love this! very sweet and fluffy, and i love the ending. great job, i like your writing style too. very cute!



James's Sketchbook by Houlestar

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 53 Reviews
Summary: Lily placed the violin on the floor, the sorrowful song only added to her misery. She could still feel Snape’s kiss on her mouth, and wondered why she had done such a thing. Looking up at the doorway she saw James standing there, and a new emotion filled her, something she hadn’t felt before...
Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 09/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well, good first chapter! it was a little strange how lily despised james at first and then was willing to help him with his drawings. also, what's with the part at the end: "duh", said wormtail. ? that was a bit weird. anyway, good start, i can't wait for the next chapter.



Reviewer: lilyevans91 Signed
Date: 09/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well, good first chapter! it was a little strange how lily despised james at first and then was willing to help him with his drawings. also, what's with the part at the end: "duh", said wormtail. ? that was a bit weird. anyway, good start, i can't wait for the next chapter.