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Hi, I am 'TheLoonyHermione'.

I love to sing and play guitar. Some of my favorite bands/singers are: The Head and the Heart, Gotye, Taylor Swift, James Taylor, and The Beatles.
And, obviously, I like to write. Harry Potter fanfics are mostly what I write, but I have other stories and fanfics as well - I have one that I'm doing on my own about a boy who lost his best friend, his dog; 3 HP fanfics by myself and 3 with a friend; One Hunger Games Fanfic by myself, one with a friend; and one Warriors fanfic with a friend. I also enjoy writing plays that me and some friends 'star' in.
I'm American but can do a fairly good British accent (I wish I was British...waah) and once someone asked me and my friend which part of the UK we were from...haha!
My favorite books/series are: Harry Potter (duh), the Percy Jackson series (although I found the movie horrendous), and The Hunger Games (I am currently obsessed).
My top 3 favorite sports are: 1. Tennis!! 2. Swimming (if you count that as a sport) 3. Softball (I'm a pitcher :))
My top 3 favorite HP characters are: 1. Neville!!!! Extremely cute!!! Even cuter in the movies!!! 2. Hermione!! I have been told that I sound like her (while speaking in a British accent), that I have the same personality as her (I do, however, think that I am more loud and rule-breaking, and also not quite as obnoxious), and even once that I look like her (which I seriously doubt, and I seriously thought the person who said that was insane). 3. Uh....can't pick between these guys...Lupin, Tonks, Snape, Sirius, Dumbledore, and Luna. There may be more, but I can't think of them at the moment...
My BFFLE is Kreacher Feacher!! She's amazingly loony, and I think you should read her stories!!
Guess what? I also love reviews!
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Love Song by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: A love song for Lily from an unusually poetic James Potter.

This poem has been written for the Queen of James/Lily romance, Gina (gmariam) for her birthday.

Disclaimer: JKR, Moi? No, no, a thousand times, no.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 112 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/19/12 Updated: 07/19/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 09/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Love Song

I really liked this! Your ending was great, I always find those so hard. My favorite lines,
'Come close to me, I’m in your thrall,
Give night its wings on scented air.' This just flowed very well and I liked the image it gave.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. ~Carole~

 

Lucky by Maple_and_PheonixFeather
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Late at night, Lily reflects on how lucky she really is.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2031 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/20/12 Updated: 07/20/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 07/23/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay. So, before reading this story, I absolutely HATED Lily/Scorpius, and only read stories like this to give it a chance. Well, you changed my mind. I just read your most recent story (I forget what it was called, but it was another Lily/Scorpius) and that combined with this one did the trick. I am still not a huge fan of them together, but I'm not completely against it now.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you! You have no idea how much this means to me :) Maple

 

Roller-Coaster by armagod679
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: The rise. The fall. The thrill. The rush. This is Tonks's love life. And she never wants to get off.

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 856 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/23/12 Updated: 08/02/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 08/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Rise and Fall

Oh my gosh I LOVED the beginning part, it was beautifully written!!! Great job, I would be clueless writing like that!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Yggdrasil by Northumbrian
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary:
Luna attends the International Symposium on Fantastic Beasts in Sweden. She is looking for proof of the existence of the Crumple-Horned Snorkack. What she finds is something else entirely.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for Round Two (Travel Prompt) of the 2012 Madam Pomfrey’s One-Shot Character Triathlon.


Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2943 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/30/12 Updated: 07/30/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 07/31/12 Title: Chapter 1: Yggdrasil

AAAAAH!!! OH MY GOSH I LOVED THIS!!! SHE KISSED HIM! SHE KISSED HIM!!!! AAAAH!!!!

Author's Response: :-D Thanks :-D

 

Stages of Grief by Eliza Lupin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: A short poem from George to his Twin.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 118 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/03/12 Updated: 08/12/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 09/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Stages of Grief

I really liked this and it's really good for your first poem! I am a new poet myself and I think you should keep going with poetry! I can almost imagine this being a song, it has that sort of rhythm to it.

 

The Aquavirius Maggot by Gred the Ravenclaw
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: For the first time ever, Luna Lovegood is going on an expedition alone. Not only does she find what she's looking for, but something else entirely different.

Categories: Various Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1805 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/03/12 Updated: 09/11/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 09/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Aquavirius Maggot

Awww, I loved it! This was good! At first I thought it was going to be a neville/Luna, which I wish would have happened, but your version of Rolf made me like Luna/Rolf more. But the second-to-last paragraph did make me sad. I do like how you made Luna call Xenophilius 'daddy'. I think that's cute and very fitting. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I can never personally think of Neville/Luna like the movies imply; I'm stuck in my mental state of canon (Neville/Hannah, Luna/Rolf)!

 

Mourning by noblefate
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: After the Battle of Hogwarts, the Wizarding world starts to piece itself together, but Molly Weasley knows that’s easier said than done.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1030 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/09/12 Updated: 09/16/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 09/16/12 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning

Wow, this was really good. I thought you captured Molly perfectly, and the part about Andromeda was really sad. I'm sure that was the emotion you were trying to get across, though, so great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. ~ Megan

 

Never Let Go by majestic_ginny
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary:

DAUGHTER OF MINISTER FOR MAGIC FOUND DEAD

Lucy Weasley, youngest daughter of Minister for Magic Percy Weasley, was found dead in her room early yesterday morning. Forensics has revealed that the death occurred due to poisoning, though the nature of the poison is yet to be confirmed.


Harry Potter has a difficult job at hand. Well, being an Auror has never been simple, but when the victim is a part of the family, things are bound to become far worse. Relations are put to the test, and old secrets resurface. And sometimes, it may just get too personal…

This is majestic_ginny of Hufflepuff writing for the Great Hall Chaptered Challenge of 2012.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 16606 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
09/25/12 Updated: 05/16/13


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 09/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow! Way to leave me in suspense! I can't wait for the next chapter! And, for a few spelling errors:

I don't know if you meant to do this or not, but in your first sentence, you capitalized 'Breakfast'.

"And know you're finally speaking sense!" Audrey said happily, clapping her hands. This should be now, not know.
This was very good and kept me hanging. I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Author's Response: Thanks for the nitpick; I corrected them! And I'm glad you liked the story. :D I'm writing the second chapter right now, so I hope I'll be able to update soon.Thank you for the review!

 

Summary: “Not good--I mean, not bad. Uh, you?”

“I’m alive,” she said cheerfully.


The first three days after the battle, from the perspectives of Hermione, Ginny, and Luna.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 9285 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/01/12 Updated: 10/15/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 10/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: Sunday

Oh my gosh! This was awesome, and congrats on it being your first story! You had me nearly in tears one moment, and laughing the next. I've always loved Neville/Luna, and you should definitely write more with them. I'll be sure to read it.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I like Neville/Luna too, and initially I was annoyed with JKR for saying they didn't get married, although I've come to feel that Luna was probably really meant for somebody as weird as she is, and Neville just isn't.

 

Relativity by Padfoot11333
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Past Featured Story

Failure: fail·ure: a fracturing or giving way under stress, a falling short.

Hermione has faced a boggart before. The problem is, she didn't succeed.

This is Padfoot11333 of Hufflepuff writing for the Great Hall Mini-Challenge: The Boggart Challenge.

IT WONNN--alongside Gmariam's Afraid of the Dark. I am shocked :)



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1669 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/13/12 Updated: 10/13/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 01/17/13 Title: Chapter 1: (a relative concept)

I really like the idea of this story and I think you write Hermione well. You really captured her worst fear in this story, more than just the dread of a third-year girl. Your writing style is unique but enjoyable.
I have a bit of crit, but who doesn't love it if it's constructive?
'(I am six yours old and work is what Dad...' This was a bit confusing because it wasn't in italics like the rest of the flashback, and I think that, if it were me, a good way to make it less confusing would be to change the tenses so that the flashbacks were in past tense and the current times in present. Not somehthing, I'm pushing you to do (because I don't have the power to do that anyway), but just a suggestion.
'I let him hold my hand.' This isn't crit, but I just loved this line. It was simple and gave you a very happy image. :) good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate all the compliments, particularly on the characterisation. That's something that I always struggle with.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Slide on in and kick off your shoes. Celestina’s Songbook is back! Here are the hits of the summer season, brought to you by the authors of MNFF.



Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 4289 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/13/12 Updated: 11/14/12


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 11/14/12 Title: Chapter 7: Owl Me, Baby

OMG, I'm sorry but I hate this song (no offense), but this was hilarious!! I loved the reference to Simon Cowell!!

Author's Response: yes, i was struggling with a rhyme with owl - hahahaha. Oh, I love the song. It's so catchy and baaad, that it has to be celebrated. I was on holiday in USA this summer and it became our anthem - ha. Thank you. ~Carole~

 

Believing in Fairytales by HalfASlug
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Hermione was his daughter and, therefore, was as perfect as a ten year old could be in his eyes. Sometimes the rest of the world didn't agree though.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Mental Disorders

Word count: 2289 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/12/13 Updated: 03/13/13


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 03/15/13 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

This was just beautiful. :) Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

 

I Would Be Good For You by HPAlison
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Remus Lupin is a man haunted by loss and self-hatred. Nymphadora Tonks is a burst of energy but also a young woman looking for more out of life. The story of how they met and fell in love.

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1941 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
03/26/13 Updated: 03/31/13


Reviewer: Theloonyhermione Signed
Date: 04/01/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really good and I can't wait to read what happens next! Your characterization is really nice, and your writing style easy to read. :) Adding to my favorites so that I can see when it's updated!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

 
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