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06/16/12




Just reading right now but am a natural proofreader so might be able to help with spelling/grammar.


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Odd Couple by Raven_Stag

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 151 Reviews
Summary: Rather suddenly Hermione found herself single and out on her own. Luckily for her, Harry has a spare bedroom. But when the fit hits the shan, will they be able to come out the other end sane? That remains to be seen ... Chapter EIGHT is HERE! YAY! Please enjoy. Warning: mild to severe language.
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/20/12 Title: Chapter 5: An Evenings Revelations

Nice story for now but a few typos. Angel is spelled wrong twice and then when Harry was kissed on the forehead by Hermione, "She had pulled a blanket over him and placed a pillow behind his head." is what I think you meant there?



This Time by Subversa

Rated: Professors • 258 Reviews
Summary: After the fall of Voldemort, an inexplicable illness plagues the surviving Death Eaters. Albus Dumbledore has a plan to save Severus Snape—but how, exactly, is Hermione Granger involved?
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/16/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would love to review this story, but the site is not letting me read it! I get stuck in this endless loop of "You must be logged in to read this" and the age appropriateness of the story. If you could help me fix this so I can finish reading it, I've only read the first chapter and want so much more!!!



Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/17/12 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I finally got the site to work properly and finished reading this story. I LOVED IT! It was excellent!



Second Chance at Life and Love by mudbloodproud

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 66 Reviews
Summary: “Is it true five years have passed since that night? That I have been dead for five years?”


Hermione had known love with Ron. But, now he was married to someone else and Hermione was alone with only her work at the Ministry to keep her busy.

But, when she was asked by Minister Shacklebolt to handle a problem, would Hermione find love with someone from her past?

Sirius Black’s life was cut short when he fell through the Veil in the Department of Mysteries. But, somehow, he inadvertently found a way to come back through the Veil.

When he was told it was five years after he fell, Sirius didn’t believe Kingsley. Sirius found himself being held in a room in the Department of Mysteries. A prisoner again.

When the door opened and a grown-up Hermione walked through it, Sirius was stunned. How could this be the same girl he had known?


This is the story of a lost girl, a man back from the dead, and a love story that will be talked about for years.
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/18/12 Title: Chapter 8: Questions without Answers

Love this story!! Minor spelling error though:
I think with what we went through with Voldemort, that point is mute.
Should be:
I think with what we went through with Voldemort, that point is moot.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'll get that spelling error fixed. Both my beta and I missed it. Ooops. :)
Terri



The Dragon Does the Tickling by jenniferes

Rated: Professors • 454 Reviews
Summary: After the war, Hermione returns to Hogwarts to complete her seventh year of studies as Head Girl, only to find Draco Malfoy has been appointed Head Boy. Her life is further complicated by the fact that Headmistress McGonagall is strongly encouraging Malfoy and her to attend one of the three wizarding universities in Europe after they graduate from Hogwarts. The story starts HG/RW, but the focus is on the development of HG/DM.
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/17/12 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Preparing to Capture the Azkaban Escapees

I am loving this, but found a typo. Hope you don't mind...
“You too appear to be getting along well,”
Should be:
“You two appear to be getting along well,”

Author's Response: I tried to go in and fix this typo, but the html is messed up and a whole bunch of new problems emerged, so I couldn't do it. I'll keep trying though! Thanks, Jenny



The Phoenix Or The Flame by GinnyRULES

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 119 Reviews
Summary: Several years after the final battle, Dudley Dursley is struggling to come to terms with his past and the things he has done wrong. His life is turned upside down when he meets a charming young witch and is drawn into a path that leads him back into his cousin's world.
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 07/21/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nice! So glad to see an update. However, there's a typo, it's in the news article text:
A break-in at Hogwarts School of Wtichcraft and Wizardry shocked students and teachers alike yesterday afternoon,
Should be:
A break-in at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry shocked students and teachers alike yesterday afternoon,



Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 08/16/12 Title: Chapter 9: CHAPTER NINE

Oh, nicely done there! I can't wait for more :)



Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 09/18/12 Title: Chapter 12: CHAPTER TWELVE

Oh wow!!! What a chapter!



Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 01/07/13 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Beautiful ending to a great story!!



More Wandless Magic with Malfoy by jenniferes

Rated: Professors • 341 Reviews
Summary: Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy attend the Wizarding University of Paris the year after they graduate from Hogwarts.

This is a sequel to the Dragon Does the Tickling, where Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy complete their seventh year at Hogwarts after the war.
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/17/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

Spectacular story! I'm so glad to see that there's more coming, I got so sucked in! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I always appreciate positive feedback. Hopefully you'll enjoy the next installation as well. --Jenny



Epithalamium by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 79 Reviews
Summary: Weddings don't just happen you know! They need planning.
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/19/12 Title: Chapter 4: Eighty Seven Days: Sweeping Misconceptions

Lovely story! Found a typo, thought I'd share:
We only won because we’d finally listened top his advice, apparently.

Should be:
We only won because we’d finally listened to his advice, apparently.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and for letting me know. I’ve fixed it. –N-



For Hogwarts: A Regency Gamble by Subversa

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 71 Reviews
Summary: After the war, Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry is in a financial bind. Special Ministry worker Hermione Granger is on site with a team of helpers, full of fundraising ideas, and it seems that Headmaster Snape objects to her very presence there. What prizes will be carried away by all those who embark on Miss Granger's madbrained Regency gamble?
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/16/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - September 2001 to June 2002

This story had me hooked from the start. I stayed up until 1am reading it!!! Omg, it is fantastic!



Paths to Platform 9 and ¾ - Year 2017, and Beyond by ntoforhp

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 57 Reviews
Summary: Voldemort is dead. Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny have survived. Now, the young warriors have a future. They have dreams, and dreams cost nothing; however reality has its price. The path each chooses has twists, potholes, and detours. They find that life plays tricks on people. These issues have to be confronted before they make it Platform 9 and ¾ in 2017 and beyond.
Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 08/15/12 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Tragedy and Wedding Plans

Yay, update!!! I want to smack both Harry and Ginny right now! Ugh! LOL!



Strong Enough to Break by Acacia Carter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 12 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: It had been three years since his wife's death, but the first woman to make him feel something is the last woman he'd have thought. The fact that he's closer in age to her father than to her does not help matters.

Otherwise known as All Soraya's Fault.

Important note: I used the Student/Teacher warning as a precaution; the relationship in this story is between a teacher and his former student, for whom he had no feelings while she was under his tutelage. Just to be clear.

Another important note: I'm not JKR. She has a much nicer house.

Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 06/23/12 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Yay, 2nd chapter! Omg, this is so sad but so good!! Keep on writing, I know I want more :)



Reviewer: Lady_Rayne Signed
Date: 07/19/12 Title: Chapter 3: Three

Oh!!! Yes!