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Feathers for Figg by ProfPosky
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: He'd been called Mundungus for years; he knew what people thought of him -- he thought it of himself. Unable to face the Death Eaters flying at him, he Apparated away in a moment of panic, leaving Alastor Moody to his fate. No one has come looking for him since. He made sincere attempts a losing himself. And yet, there is one person he knows who wonders, cares, and remembers the name of his glory days, and does something about it.
Along the way, there may be some mild profanity, threatened violence and sexual situations, but nothing graphic.
This is ProfPosky of Gryffindor writing for the 2013 Great Hall Valentines Day Cotillion Challenge. I am no longer a mod.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Substance Abuse

Word count: 3423 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
01/22/13 Updated: 06/28/14

Reviewer: ElmFeather Signed
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 1: The Apparation of Arabella Figg

I did indeed read until the end, and look, here is my review to prove it!
I must say, this was very interesting! Personally I've always found Dung to be a fascinating (if that is a word that could be used to decribe him..?) and highly underused character, and I am looking forward to seeing where this thing goes between him and the indomitable Mrs. Figg. Plus, it's quite refreshing to read about these more peripheral characters, and it will be fun to see what directions you decide to go in with them.
Great job! I can't wait to read more!


The Truth Behind the Fur by dmbw7052
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Argus Filch has a cat. That cat is not normal. Nothing is normal with the two of them. One day, everything changes, and Argus' life is shattered.

This is Draco7052 of Slytherin writing for the 2013 Great Hall Cotillion

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4880 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
02/27/13 Updated: 03/07/13

Reviewer: ElmFeather Signed
Date: 07/18/13 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Ooh, I can't believe I just found this!
This was so imaginative and such a great twist on that inexplicable relationship between a man and his cat. I always felt there was just something off about the two of them, and this certainly answers that question. You really made me stop and think and say: 'Of course Mrs. Norris was Filch's wife - why didn't I think of that before??' haha.
Brilliantly done. Great job, Georgia.
- Bree


Summary: Past Featured StoryIn November 1981, Remus Lupin returns to the headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1410 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
04/09/13 Updated: 04/12/13

Reviewer: ElmFeather Signed
Date: 06/10/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, dear... I saw the title of this and was compelled to click on it. I immediately opened a new window and went to Youtube, and played Eddie Redmayne's version of this song. After the first paragraph, I had tears in my eyes. When I reached the middle, and I realized that this was Harry's little sister grabbing Remus's hand, and his brother in the background - the other children Lily and James never got the chance to have - I was bawling like a baby. But don't feel badly about it - there are very few people who can make me sob, so please consider it an achievement!
I agree with another reviewer who said that you really captured Remus perfectly. He is also one of my favorite characters, and I always love to see him characterized well.
Thank you for this, it was wonderful. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you for this lovely review! I'm glad you thought it worked well with the song, because songfics haven't always been my strongpoint. I've always seen a connection between Remus and Marius at this point of their stories, because I think the initial order were a bit like the revolutionary students, because in the end they really didn't have a chance, but they wouldn't not fight. And both Remus and Marius basically lose everyone in one night (although Marius does still have Cosette so he's better off). I'm sorry you were bawling - but then like you said, that's really the point of the story. I think Remus possibly has the hardest life of anyone in the books, he's had to deal with so much, so thanks for saying that his character really came across. Anyway thanks again for leaving such a wonderful review, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ~Katrina


Love, Lily by dmbw7052
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: A collection of letters from Lily to Sirius

This was written when I saw it was Lily/Padfoot11333's birthday. I had the idea in my head for a while, and it seemed the perfect time to write it. Sorry it's so late.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1381 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
05/16/13 Updated: 05/18/13

Reviewer: ElmFeather Signed
Date: 06/10/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey there, stranger! ;) When I saw this at the top of the page, I just had to pop by and throw a 'hi' your way! Such a sweet little epistolary, I can't wait to read more!
- ElmFeather/Ms.Marauder/Bree
Geez I have a lot of names... xD

Author's Response: Hiyah Bree! glad you liked it! I already wrote the last chappie. Just need to get it betaed and put it up. -dmbw7052/Draco7052/Georgia I have lots of names also and those are just on this sight.

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