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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: smart_one Signed
Date: 01/28/06 Title: None

Wow! Very good beginning! I like the way you've left it hanging and your descriptions are very good. Two things, however, that I must suggest. For one, in the beginning you describe Snape wanting to "wretch". If you meant "throw-up" the correct spelling is "retch". And secondly, Snape could be more evil... (grins maliciously) Great job!

 

Git in Shining Armor by juniorauthor
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 314]

Summary: Ronald Weasley struggles with his teaspoon's worth of emotions during Hermione's stay at the Burrow summer after fifth year. With the Twins succumbing the household to spontaneous product trials, and a new Minister of Magic, one would think that Hermione's Bulgarian pen pal would be the least of Ron's problems.



And that would be what one would get for thinking.





Surprises abound (the Good and the Bad) assure the Weasleys and their house guest this will be a summer all but one of them will never forget.



Final chapter is in queue. Wow, that took forever, didn't it?

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 50899 Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Published:
07/13/05 Updated: 07/14/07


Reviewer: smart_one Signed
Date: 04/14/06 Title: Chapter 10: Out of the Fireplace and Into the Fire

AAAGH! Is there a Dark Mark or not? This was such a suspenseful chapter!

It was so obvious though that Hermione was hoping Ron was going to say something along the lines of "I love you." That was really cute. But the rest of the chapter is one suspenseful cliff hanger! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: You\'ll just ahve to wait an see, won\'t you? I\'m glad you liked it, though. i think you can expect the next chapter within the next two weeks(I\'m taking great care writing the next chapter). That should be the final chapter, save for an Epilogue-Chapter Hybrid I have planned. :-)

 
Reviewer: smart_one Signed
Date: 03/19/06 Title: Chapter 9: Just When You Thought Things Couldn't Get Worse

Aahh! It was a bit confusing! But I still love it. Ron is going to make a fool out of himself since Krum isn't really a Death Eater. Great job. KEEP GOING! :)

Author's Response: I intend to! At the moment, there are to be two more chapters; but that will ultimately depend on the outcome of a poll I'll hold in the next chapter, 'Out of the Fireplace and Into the Fire'.

 

Despair and Hope by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: She felt like everything inside of her had been dumped into a cauldron, mixed up and swirled around, and then dumped out at her feet, leaving her to figure out the mess. It was rather annoying, actually.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1876 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/13/05 Updated: 08/13/05


Reviewer: smart_one Signed
Date: 08/26/05 Title: Chapter 1: Despair and Hope

That was pretty good one-shot. I think it could've used a little bit more detail, especially with the poison and Hermione's emotions. But I enjoyed reading it and I hope you do other one-shot R/Hrs!

 

Absent Friends by Trust_Me
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Note: While this contains no outright HBP spoilers, it was written with them in mind. So if I were you and hadn't read book six yet, I wouldn't read this. ~~ It was inspired by the Veil from OotP and the ending of HBP, which completely shocked me and begged for proper closure. This is my feeble attempt at doing that, in bringing the Veil, Fawkes, and Harry together. It doesn't have much plot, because it's about one specific point in time and is very character driven. Please r&r, but please don't devastate me. Thanks for reading.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 839 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/27/05 Updated: 08/27/05


Reviewer: smart_one Signed
Date: 08/28/05 Title: Chapter 1: (this is the first and last chapter.)

This was beautifully written. Your attention to detail set the entire mood and reallly brought the story out. Although it was a little on the short side, it got the point across. Keep up the fabulous work! 9/10!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate the encouragement. My next one will probably be a little longer. :)

 

In his bed by Cho_c10
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 56]

Summary: Hermione has been having nightmares. She wakes in the middle of the night and needs a friend. She goes to Ron and spends the night In His Bed. Will Ron ever let Hermione know his feelings for her? Will Hermione ever let Ron know her feelings for him? A Seventh Year fic.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5214 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/26/06 Updated: 01/26/06


Reviewer: smart_one Signed
Date: 02/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Nightmares

Aww that was just so adorable! You could really feel their comfort with each other and yet their uncomfort with telling each other their feelings. Very descriptive and sweet. A very good, [and a bit fluffy] short-story!

Author's Response: thx! ^^ i'm really glad!

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