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I love Harry Potter fan fiction, because it allows my imagination to run free!
I probably could be doing something more productive, but since I love to read and write, and hope to be an author one day, this doesn't seem like a whole waste of time!!!!
I love this site so much. It really let's me challenge my mind and see things in a whole new light.
Go fan fiction!!!!!

EDIT: I am a poetry nut! So watch out for all my poetry and you can even check some of my poetry out on Poetry Anyone? in the Beta Forums, if you are able to get an account. :) Also watch out if you write poetry, too! I am sure to review it, and possibly leave behind a critique!

Since I write so much poetry, I thought I would make a list of my actual stories that are on the archives:

If I Die Young
His Last Descendant
In the Realms of Jealousy
The Autumn Air
A Darker Nightmare
Vanishing Point
The Ghosts that Follow
The Baby-Sitter
Kill It Before It Dies
The Sight of Her
A Christmas Meal of Snow
The Man of Hogsmeade
Set in Silver Stone
Pills and Potions
The Purity of the Turf
Pearls Mean Tears
The Ties That Bind
The Full House
Delayed Arrival
Hot Off the Press
No Ghost is Safe
Qui Mortui Sunt (Those Who Are Dead)
Deadman's Party
The Suitcase Menagerie
A Conference About Spiders

Here are all my poems (in order of update):

Her Hand
His Only Friend
Mad World
Negotiation With Death
An Unexpected Turn
The Coffin Brawl
Wasted Space
One Sweet Night
Life in Technicolor
The Bice Day
Dark Side
The Day the Music Died
Shades of Grey
The Endless Road
The Foulest Creature
The Lone Sentry
If No One Will Listen
Just a Diary
An Empty Photograph
Death's Horizon
The Canvas Life
The Sun Sets in Paradise
Grand Adage
The Banished Howl
Hear Me
Celestina's Songbook: Summer Lovin'
The Certain Dark
The Cursed Ruin
A Greying View
Silent Ash
Left Behind
Save You
With Silent Wounds
The Snow Globe
A Wintry Lust
Hogsmeade Lights
The Calming
The Possibility
Today I Do Not Want To Be...
A Brief Star
Beautiful Disaster
Where is Your Heart
Fix You
The Black Rose
A Failing Mission
The Darkest Realm
Godric's Hollow
Hidden Mysteries
The Seasons Change
Petrified Desire
In Anguish
In Final Minutes
The Wrong Child
For the Man on the Street
Something Better
Faust Arp
The Silver Doe/The Silver Stag
Fallen Leaves
Living Shroud
Little Bruno and the Evil Elf
Eternal Ice
For the Hero
The Frost in Melancholy
It's Christmas Time in Diagon Alley
It Came Upon A Charm So Clear
A Ravenclaw's Blue Christmas
Corpses of the Shadow and the Night
You Just Wink (First Impressions)
In Agony
Killing Me Softly
Don't Let Me Go
Pax Tecum (Peace Be With You)
Blind Weakness
The Show Must Go On
A Coming War?
At the Battlefront
No One Can Ever Know
Do you think of me the same?
Into the Forest
A Lesson with Biscuits
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1
A Restless Wait
Dawn (Go Away)
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2
on this side of heaven
Through the Mines
The Sparrow and the Wolf
The Necromancer's Army
Given the Chance
Gelu Fatum
Oh Henry
Of Substance
The Cave
Gelido Dormitabis (An Icy Slumber)
All Hallow's Eve
Communi Damnum (Shared Loss)
Phoenix Est Lamentationes

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Celestina's Songbook: Summer Lovin' by minnabird, Equinox Chick, Karaley Dargen, the opaleye, hestiajones, rachelnotrach, The owl, Nagini Riddle

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

Slide on in and kick off your shoes. Celestina’s Songbook is back! Here are the hits of the summer season, brought to you by the authors of MNFF.

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/14/12 Title: Chapter 1: Gimme Three Steps, Wizard

Yay!!!!! :) I think we should all give a big virtual hug to Jess, who worked for over ten hours on submitting this alone. I don't think we appreciate the hard work she did enough. So thank you Jess!!!! And here are some virtual cookies, too, for your hard work. :)

As for everyone else, great job! I can hardly wait for the next songbook challenge...

~NAGINI, who will now go and review each individual one instead of all of them at once... :P

Author's Response: yes, it's fabulous. well done everyone for being fabulous and amazing and writing so fabulously fabulous.

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/14/12 Title: Chapter 1: Gimme Three Steps, Wizard

I loved this so much, and I could really hear the rhythm of it in my head. What a great way to really get down on some summer fun. Gimme three steps... ;]

Great job, minna. I love your work.


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/14/12 Title: Chapter 2: Ha-rry

Wow. I this computer let me use exclamation points, it would be all over this. ;] You incorporated the wizarding world really well in this song, and while parts of it were cheesy, I really enjoyed reading it and imagining Ginny singing it. ;] Cheers.


Author's Response: Thank you very much. I had fun writing this, not least because it meant I could keep listening to the song - ha ha.

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/14/12 Title: Chapter 3: Voldemort

Such wit. ;] I especially liked the end when you wrote [fade out]. It made me chuckle. Great job, fellow poet. We overcame the challenge. Mwahahahahaha.


Author's Response: Haha, thanks Nagini :) The challenge was good fun, although I'm not quite sure why you're cackling quite so ebilly...


Sing Me To Sleep by TheHarryPotterNerd

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Today is Lily's last day. Everyone she knows will soon be gone. Menkes had finally won, and she had lost.
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/25/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Goodness! How could she face her death that way? This really hit me. My own brother died almost five years ago, but it wasn't in this manner. He died of natural causes during his sleep, almost like Lily here, but I didn't know he was going to die. I don't know what I would have done if I had known...

Thanks for the story. I guess it shows that death is going to come and instead of fearing it so much, we really should learn to just live out our lives and then embrace death. I noticed that same theme in Deathly Hallows, and I'm glad you capture it.


Cause and Effect by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

Katie Bell fought hard to build a relationship with a difficult and reclusive Draco Malfoy, despite their dire past, but she felt like she was losing him more the closer they came to their wedding date. However, when Draco manages to strand himself far in the past with his newly-discovered Temporal Displacement Potion, Katie follows him back, only to find more than she bargained for.

She found the truth.

This is ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor of Ravenclaw, writing for the Ninth Round of the Gauntlet.

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/17/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gah, you have done so well with the prompts so far! I actually did not have to suspend my belief, Jess. :) I think the only thing I was skeptical of was the people burning Draco, because they normally didn't go after men for witchcraft, but I think it worked in this case so there was a sense of danger. Overall, I really enjoyed it! I was do excited to see this, and as I read, I tried to catch the prompts given to us. I was thrilled when she drank the potion, and equally impressed with how you incorporated the second prompt. I eagerly await the next chapter... :) In the meantime, would you mind reading my story and reviewing? It is sadly misrepresented with its zero reviews... :(

Great job Jess!


Author's Response:

Sorry for the epically late response!

Actually, they weren't burning Draco for being a witch; rather, he was caught stealing. Normally, they'd chop a hand, but if he tried to use magic at all to free himself, they very well might've tried burning him at the stake.

This story is weird. I still don't know if I'll ever be happy with it, and I'm pretty sure my Gauntlet fic from two years ago was better than this, but I had fun writing Draco and Katie, who are one of my OTPs. Thankfully, the endgame that I had planned for the story from the outset was more or less intact. When you know where you're going, it tends to be easier to get there.

Usually, I make it a policy not to review challenge fics I'm judging or stories I mod, but if I do happen to find the time, I will do my best to check out the competition!

Thanks for the visit!


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/19/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hello! :) Before I say how fantastic this is, I want to point out that in your eighth paragraph, you wrote that they put the skin out in the sun to "try," instead of "dry." you may want to fix that. Also, I wasn't sure on your spelling of "maneuver" right after Draco and Katie escape Aelbert. Just an observation...

Anyways, I love it! The relationship feels so real, and I want to steal it so badly! Maybe my next piece will feature Draco/Katie... :) Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it coming! ~Nagini

Author's Response:

Formalities first: I fixed the typo you pointed out, and the spelling in question is the British English spelling of 'maneuver'. Just weird, I guess. :)

Anyway, yayayayay at Draco/Katie shipping! Julia was happy when I told her (she's my Draco/Katie partner in crime). I fully endorse any Katico fic ventures, and I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story.


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/23/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, Jess. :) Character death doesn't bother me one bit! I have to say that Draco is just having a horrible life, isn't he? Too bad he didn't get a child.

I have to say, this was a brilliant story! It makes my story seem weak in comparison. But don't worry about me. I like reading these stories that blow me away.

Good luck, Jess!


Author's Response:

And here we are again!

To be honest, I'm surprised anyone can follow this story, let alone find it blown-away material. However, I am glad you found enjoyment in it - certainly more than I found in writing it with all those beastly prompts. Anyway, I'm sure the end wasn't shocking, but I think if you felt anything like me, you kind of wished upon a star that it wasn't going to turn out that way. In this case, my author's prerogative was overridden by the laws of time and causality.

Thanks for reading. Good luck with your own entry, as well!


The Lion's Son by Lost_Robin

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When Scorpius is staying with the Potters in Potter Manor, he suddenly disappears. It's up to Lily to find him and take them back to the right time. But what (or who) will she discover there? This is Lost_Robin of Ravenclaw writing for the Gauntlet Round 9.
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/21/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Lion's Son

Nice job! :) I am loving these gauntlet stories. Good luck on the challenge! ~Nagini, a fellow challenger

Author's Response: Thank you! Good luck to you too. -K

Teach Me How to Smile by Hokey

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •

This is Hokey from Slytherin submitting for Round 9 of the Gauntlet.

Her mind was already set. Hermione had never abandoned Harry before, and she wasn’t very well going to start now.
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/21/12 Title: Chapter 1: The One and Only Chapter

Yay! Another gauntlet entry! :)I really enjoyed reading this and picking out the prompts. Good job! Nice way to incorporate what was given you, and I got to see Harry in a new light. Good luck! ~Nagini, a fellow challenger

P.S. Check out my gauntlet story- The Ghosts That Follow!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't expecting all prompts to be pictures, so I was quite thrown by that :p Good luck to you, too!!

Goodbye by GreenEyesLoveNeverDies

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry's pain and Lily's sacrifice
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/25/12 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye

Wow! What inspired this? It was gorgeous in its simplicity and I liked how they were talking to each other. It seemed almost lullaby-like, and I have to admit that I was touched. Good job. :)

Author's Response: thank u so much :) this is my first piece approved on mugglenet and im so glad someone enjoyed it.

The Closed Ward by 1000timesingoldenink

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Thanks, Mum.

A look into the mind of a woman with no identity, no memory, and only the barest ability to feel. Nominated for a 2013 QSQ.
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 01/24/13 Title: Chapter 1: too light too too much color

Wow! I really enjoyed this! :) I actually thought that you were brilliant by leaving out capitalization and punctuation and just letting thoughts stream together, some not making any sense. Very poignant and the meloncholic tone really grabbed me. Great job! :) Don't hesitate to write some more poetry...

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my poem! I have always loved free verse; it's very good for conveying meaning, and it can sound nice too, if you make it flow right. I was actually not sure how I felt about the nonsensical-ness of my poem--it would make more sense if I had put commas in four or five places (but the mod wouldn't let me), or if I had added long spaces between words, instead of commas (but the site won't show them!) So it's really nice to hear that you think it's good even without that, and that you liked the tone! Adding emotion to the tone was tricky, since the theme of the poem is Alice's inability to understand what emotions and meaning are! As for more poetry--I just posted a new one, and there are several more in the making... :D

Shall I Compare Thee to a Winter's Eve by 1000timesingoldenink

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: There are stories everywhere. Some reveal themselves to their characters, but most do not.

One story goes like this: Once upon a time, there were two children, a boy and a girl, who were best friends. The boy had grown up in the cold, and he fell in love with the girl’s bright warmth; he cared more about her than anything in the world. Yet fate rejected them, and one day, without meaning to, the boy shattered their friendship forever. He tried to apologize, but it was too late. He had been swallowed back into bitter iciness, while the girl remained in the light of the sun.

Yet the girl does not know all this. She only knows of the turning point in the story, the hurt the boy has caused her, the reason she would not forgive him.

These are Lily’s words to Severus at the turning point in their story.

(It is also, for no apparent reason, a parody of Shakespeare sonnet.)
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 01/27/13 Title: Chapter 1: the turning point

You llama, you! :) What a fun way to use Shakespeare! Teehee! I really enjoyed it!

I wonder what you think of my own depressing fanfiction poetry.....

To quote my favorite movie: "Yay! I'm a llama again!" (The Emperor's New Groove)

Author's Response: Oh, I only know about llamas from the llama song. (Don't look it up. You'll hate me forever.) My third cousins twice removed (or something) own an alpaca farm, though. Your poetry is nice. I mean, yeah, I'm not always partial to depressing stuff, but I just like how they're written--you use vivid language. I remember one of yours that I really liked, about a person in a portrait... I think I do too much poetry that is very candid/write-like-you-talk, which is why I'm trying to branch out.

Shouting Kiss by GreenEyesLoveNeverDies

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: How Ginny feels as she kisses Harry before Bill and Fleur's wedding.
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 02/06/13 Title: Chapter 1: Shouting Kiss

Ah, short and so very Ginny. :) You really captured that Gryffindor within her. I would love to read the original! I hope to see more poetry from you.... *secretly is happy to be reading poetry.*

Pressing Flowers by minnabird

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When Alice could still remember her mother, she always thought of flowers.

Nominated for Best Poem in the 2013 Quicksilver Quill Awards

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 02/11/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazing job, minna. :) I am in awe of its beauty, and you have left me speechless.

The Spark by minnabird

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Salazar watches his home burn. A prose poem.
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 02/12/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love prose poetry! You did a magnificent job, minna. ;)

Growth by teh tarik

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story

Something has changed in Merope Gaunt, a thrumming of insect wings, a pulse kickstarting to life.

Merope is alone. Penniless, undernourished and pregnant - these are the last three trimesters of her life.
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 11/14/13 Title: Chapter 1: dull as dirt

I am thoroughly disturbed! But I really enjoyed this dark story. And now I can't get the image of Merope eating matches and dirt out of my head. :) For a more thorough review of this, you will have to see my discussion post on the beta boards... :) But I thought I would let you know that this story was fantastic!

Author's Response: Hiya Nagini!

Wow, thank you so much for this lovely review! ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that it left an impact on you; that's always what I hope to achieve with my writing :) Merope certainly had one of the more difficult lives, and I can't imagine that she was ever truly happy. And I have read your post in the SBBC! Thank you so much for such an in-depth and detailed discussion, and I'll be sure to answer your TQ for me before the end of the month. Thank you once again! ♥


Penumbra by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What promises could a cursed Ring possibly offer that could convince Dumbledore to put it on his finger, even knowing the consequences?

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 03/26/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed the asides you used. They add so much dimension to the piece!

Great subject, by the way. Trying to capture the struggle of Dumbledore's when he finds the resurrection stone. :) I liked how the poem didn't read overly fast, like he was greatly contemplating his decision.

I feel, though, that it could have had a bit more of a rushed feeling to it only to add the complex dimensionality of a rash decision. But honestly, it does well the way it is. The last line really says it all and spells out that regret. :)

I can't wait to read more of your work (again). :)

Lost by dmbw7052

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Does Mrs. Granger remember Hermione in any way? Is there a subconscious memory in the back of her mind?
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 03/05/13 Title: Chapter 1: Lost

I think you have a very good start for your first poem. :) I like the simplicity of it that allows the emotion to really shine.

I only wish that last stanza was a little longer and more complete. Perhaps with a message to tie it all in. Perhaps like, "Til then I'll keep waiting,/Endlessly waiting for what I seek."

Other than that, very nice. I look forward to more poetry from you.

~Nagini Riddle

Author's Response: Thanks Nagini. I did add a few lines now. I agree, it did need a little more at the end. -Georgia

Believing in Fairytales by HalfASlug

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione was his daughter and, therefore, was as perfect as a ten year old could be in his eyes. Sometimes the rest of the world didn't agree though.
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 05/29/13 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

I love dramatic irony, and this story fits it so perfectly. :) I want to reach out to the characters and tell them that I know what is happening!!!!!! I really wonder what exactly a parent would feel when they found out their child was magical. I wonder how I would react...

Anyways, this was a cute story and I loved the interaction between father and daughter. Very nice!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Yeah, I think without knowing that it all turns out okay in the end this story would have been very sad indeed. I guess as a kid you'd be more accepting of things like magic, but as an adult it would seem crazy. Although if my kid was magic the overwhelming emotion would be jealousy! Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!