Penname: Nagini Riddle [Contact]
Real name: Kaylee
Member Since: 04/28/12
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I love Harry Potter fan fiction, because it allows my imagination to run free!
I probably could be doing something more productive, but since I love to read and write, and hope to be an author one day, this doesn't seem like a whole waste of time!!!!
I love this site so much. It really let's me challenge my mind and see things in a whole new light.
Go fan fiction!!!!!

EDIT: I am a poetry nut! So watch out for all my poetry and you can even check some of my poetry out on Poetry Anyone? in the Beta Forums, if you are able to get an account. :) Also watch out if you write poetry, too! I am sure to review it, and possibly leave behind a critique!

Since I write so much poetry, I thought I would make a list of my actual stories that are on the archives:

Completed:
If I Die Young
His Last Descendant
In the Realms of Jealousy
The Autumn Air
A Darker Nightmare
Vanishing Point
The Ghosts that Follow
The Baby-Sitter
Kill It Before It Dies
The Sight of Her
A Christmas Meal of Snow
The Man of Hogsmeade
Set in Silver Stone
Unfaithful
Pills and Potions
The Purity of the Turf
Pearls Mean Tears
The Ties That Bind
The Full House
Delayed Arrival
Hot Off the Press

WIP:
Murder in the Moonlight

To Follow:
I Stood in the Ruins
Questions (tentative title)
Eclipse of the Heart
Lines in the Sand


Here are all my poems (in order of update):

Poetry
Her Hand
His Only Friend
Mad World
Refusal
Negotiation With Death
An Unexpected Turn
The Coffin Brawl
Wasted Space
One Sweet Night
Life in Technicolor
The Bice Day
Dark Side
The Day the Music Died
Shades of Grey
The Endless Road
The Foulest Creature
The Lone Sentry
If No One Will Listen
Soiled
Just a Diary
Frozen
An Empty Photograph
Moonlight
Death's Horizon
The Canvas Life
The Sun Sets in Paradise
Grand Adage
The Banished Howl
Hear Me
Celestina's Songbook: Summer Lovin'
The Certain Dark
The Cursed Ruin
A Greying View
Silent Ash
Left Behind
Save You
With Silent Wounds
The Snow Globe
A Wintry Lust
Hogsmeade Lights
The Calming
The Possibility
Today I Do Not Want To Be...
Walls
A Brief Star
Beautiful Disaster
Where is Your Heart
Fix You
The Black Rose
A Failing Mission
The Darkest Realm
Godric's Hollow
Halo
Unspeakable
Hidden Mysteries
Salire
The Seasons Change
Petrified Desire
In Anguish
Paradeisos
In Final Minutes
The Wrong Child
For the Man on the Street
Something Better
Faust Arp
The Silver Doe/The Silver Stag
Fallen Leaves
Red is the color of death
Living Shroud
Little Bruno and the Evil Elf
Eternal Ice
For the Hero
Magical
The Frost in Melancholy
It's Christmas Time in Diagon Alley
It Came Upon A Charm So Clear
A Ravenclaw's Blue Christmas
Frēodōm
Corpses of the Shadow and the Night
You Just Wink (First Impressions)
His
In Agony
Killing Me Softly
Separation
Absentia
Don't Let Me Go
Pax Tecum (Peace Be With You)
Casualties
Blind Weakness
The Show Must Go On
A Coming War?
At the Battlefront
No One Can Ever Know
Do you think of me the same?
Into the Forest
A Lesson with Biscuits
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1
Sacrificium
A Restless Wait
Dawn (Go Away)
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2
Betty
BTSK
on this side of heaven
Colorblind
Through the Mines
The Sparrow and the Wolf
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Reviews by Nagini Riddle
 

Summary: Hermione watches Ron as they stand before the preacher, and thinks.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/01/12 Updated: 07/06/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/06/12 Title: Chapter 1: Ron and Hermione's Christmas Wedding

What a fun poem! I just love poetry of any kind (if you happen to look at my written stories and the reviews I've written, I think you would see that) and I really enjoyed this sweet poem! That last stanza just made me laugh! It captured Hermione perfectly. :)

~Nagini Riddle

 

Unite The Balance by crbluvsravenclaw
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: There's a time when friends bid their fairwells and another when they must re-unite to keep the world in balance.





Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 110 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/01/12 Updated: 07/16/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/16/12 Title: Chapter 1: Unite The Balance

What, no snake???? :) beautiful! I really enjoyed the messaging of uniting for a common cause! :)

Author's Response: Nagini Riddle, WOOHOO! MY FIRST EVER REVIEW!!!(: I am so you glad that you enjoyed reading my poem! And yeah, there is no snake unfortunately. He was the one that was shunned away from the other three because his views were different. But in the end, "three will become one and one will become all." In my line of sight, all four Houses will re-unite and the balance will be stronger than ever. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem! Thank you so much for being my first review ever and hopefully there are much more to come! I will be posting many more of my works and maybe the one from booksie that you thought sounded much like Dumbledore's ideas. Thanks again, Nagini Riddle for reading and reviewing this poem, ~crbluvsravenclaw (Cris)!!!(:

 

The Latecomer by HalfASlug
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: It's the day every Weasley has been dreading since the battle and now it's George's turn to speak. However, before he can begin, he is rudely interrupted by a latecomer.

Joint winner of Best Post-Hogwarts One-Shot at the 2012 Quicksilver Quill Awards



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Substance Abuse

Word count: 2458 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/01/12 Updated: 07/06/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/06/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! This was great! I loved how Fred and George were still able to joke around! What a great way to send Fred off... It's too bad he had to die... *silently cries*

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Like a little thing like death could stop them! I know... *dabs eyes* Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

 

Wolfsbane by Shiloh_Tovah
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: AU. Professor Snape finds himself in a bit of a predicament when someone from his school days shows up to teach at Hogwarts. Serena Wolfsbane, an accomplished Auror, takes up her new teaching position and discovers that there is definitely more to Snape than meets the eye. Follows basic plot of last 4 Harry Potter books.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7234 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
07/01/12 Updated: 08/30/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/14/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

teehee! i want to see where this goes!
since it was short, i really dont have much to really say as to how ot improve it. when your next chapter comes out, i will have a better evaluation! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is just waiting to be validated, so hopefully it'll be up soon. =]

 

Quiet In Our Town by the opaleye
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Past Featured Story

The earth is taking back what it’s lost. There are new terrors to battle now.

The end of the world comes not from the hand of Lord Voldemort, but an incurable disease. When Britain falls, those that are left must keep on running.

And never stop.

Winner of the 2012 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Alternate Universe!



Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 4172 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/02/12 Updated: 07/02/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Today we heard that someone left this earth.

Wow! I don't know what to say! You built it up so much- and then I had to laugh at the end! It all started from that small bite from the Snorcack, or whatever that stupid creature was. Ha! See, Xeno, they can certainly wipe the world of something!
This story felt very "I am Legend"ish

Author's Response: Thanks :) Glad you enjoyed it!

 

Her Eyes by Sly Severus
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: As Severus Snape lies dying, he stares into the eyes of the woman he's loved all his life.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 100 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/02/12 Updated: 07/02/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Her Eyes

I really enjoyed reading this in PA and now I still love it here! It's not too short! :) how did you get it updated so fast? My poem has been in the queue for nine days...
I especially enjoyed the last line- its comforting to know that he got to see her again after he died.

~Nagini Riddle

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the crit in PA. I also love to think that Severus gets to see Lily again. Even after she's gone, he dedicates his entire life to her.

 

Remembrances by The owl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Ginny thinks of Harry and wonders if he will ever return from his mysterious mission.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 104 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/02/12 Updated: 07/16/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! I love the rhythm it had! I especially enjoyed how you wrote mem'ries!!!!!! Way to take out a syllable! That, right there, says poet to me!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review, Nagini. Ellision (abbreviating a word like that) is very useful for making words fit into the meter, but I'm not sure that ellision a poet makes :P

~Sophie

 

The Last Enemy to be Conquered by AidaLuthien
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: On 31 July 2026, Harry's birthday celebrations are a bit different than normal.

This is AidaLuthien writing for Round 2 of the Character Clinic Triathlon.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1806 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/05/12 Updated: 07/14/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/14/12 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday, Dad

Augh! i did not see this coming, until Ginny was holding flowers!
great job, though! it was great to find out what the families were doing after the war, and able to move on with their lives. Out of curiosity, how did Harry die?

 

Cruciatus by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: The suffering of an Unforgivable Curse.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 137 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/05/12 Updated: 07/05/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/06/12 Title: Chapter 1: Shadows

Wow! Loved this poem! Am I correct in thinking that this is about the Longbottoms?
I especially liked how you placed the lines, staggering the stanzas. It really helps it move along in a jagged way, kind of like the cruciatus curse does. And the rhyme seemed effortless and beautiful! Wow! Not cheesy or silly, but absolutely stunning! *jaw drops to the floor in amazement* GREAT JOB!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it, I really appreciate the review. And yes, you are correct. I didn't set out to write about them, but as I was writing that's where it went. Thanks again! ~Gina :)

 

Falling by GinnyPotter95
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Sirius's last thoughts as he falls through the veil.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 103 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/06/12 Updated: 07/16/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Through the veil

Oh, GinnyPotter! I love your wit! :)
This poem is still beautiful, and I would have given it an honorable mention for the challenge! Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you soooo much for being my first review! This was just a quick thing I thought of for the challenge. Had to do the repitition for this though. Thanks again!!!!~Nidhi

 

Fall Behind by Ars Letalis
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: October 3rd. They still haven't told him; it's likely never will. This is the most and least selfish act they have committed, and in spite of it all they just can't let go. One-shot, Remus/Lily.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1701 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/06/12 Updated: 07/14/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/14/12 Title: Chapter 1: One

i am laughing even though this is sad!!!!!! goodness, everyone loved Lily! she is such a vixen! :)
nice story, though! out of curiosity, what would lily have said if Remus had asked her just then?
these types of stories only make me dislike James Potter more... Lily deserved better! *chuckles*

Author's Response: Now, I wouldn't say that! I've always been fond of James, and I like to think that while both he and Lily did some unsavory things, they were both good people with a nice, albeit short, relationship. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though. ;P As for your question, I think Lily was just very confused and emotional and maybe not being entirely honest with herself or, for that matter, Remus. I can't imagine she honestly would have said yes, and I don't think Remus could've let either of them go through with it anyway. As Rowling said, Remus really liked to be liked, and he would never be able to take Lily from James due in part to that need. And in her heart of hearts, Lily really did love and want to be with James.

 

Broken by iLuna17
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Pansy rolled over, and her eyes found a white wall staring back at her. Everything here was white: sanitized, blinding, annoyingly bright white. Even the loose cotton she had been forced to wear was white. But there was a reason Pansy was there. She was crazy. Pansy knew she was, but couldn’t bring herself to care.

Yes, life wasn't turning out the way Pansy planned, but it was manageable. Until he came along ...

This is iMusic17 from Slytherin writing for Round II of the CC Triathalon (2012).

Categories: Ron/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Mental Disorders, Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 3500 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/07/12 Updated: 07/14/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/14/12 Title: Chapter 1: There are different types of crazy.

wow! i am all for odd pairings, and i really enjoyed this! what a dark/angsty story! you are really good at this. :)
maybe you could try another strange pairing?

Author's Response: I'm glad you like odd pairings. I blame Jess (ToBeOrNotToTypeThisAllOut) for Ron/Pansy. And, yeah, D/A is kind of my thing. I'll try another odd pairing, soon; I promise. I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the review!

Ellie

 

Wandwork by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: The remarkable story behind Griselda Marchbanks' enigmatic reference to all those things Albus Dumbledore could do with a wand.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Student/Teacher Romance

Word count: 2666 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/08/12 Updated: 07/08/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Remarkable

So funny and great! :) I think, though, that they would have made him do harder spells than these- but since we don't know what happens at the N.E.W.T.s, it totally works!
Great dare! You should definitely keep letting people dare you to do these things!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the story. You made a good point about the spells being a bit on the easy side--but then you answered the point as well, because we just don't know much about 7th year and the spells they might have learned, so I had to do the best I could, and make sure Albus did a bit more than asked to make up for it. I'm glad it worked enough to make the rest of it worth it. And it wasn't quite a dare, more of a throw-away comment that I couldn't resist. LOL! I don't know if I should follow up on them if they all turn out like this, though. Thanks again for the lovely review! ~Gina :)

 

The Eyes That Do Not See by Envy_I_May_Be
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: All Petunia ever wanted (even if she never admitted it to anyone, including herself), was just to see. Is that really too much to ask?

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 140 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/09/12 Updated: 07/16/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Eyes That Do Not See

Again, I just loved this poem! It is so wonderful! I cannot fault it!

Author's Response: Yay! *Bows down low* My deepest gratitude, my dear.

 

The Hungarian Horntail by PeppermintToads
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: A short poem about the first task.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 105 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/13/12 Updated: 07/22/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Deadliest of the Dragons

Nice! I love the first two stanzas because of how you describe the dragon's appearance! I got a little scared of the Hungarian... :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I am very glad you liked it. I kind of struggled with those stanzas, haha. :)

 

Conversations by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: Ron and Hermione have some news.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2281 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/15/12 Updated: 07/15/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: Conversations

Typical Hermione! :) I loved how you characterized both George and Hermione! Ron seemed really mature! Although, I did like how he opened the door the office with his wand! I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks.
In my opinion Ron matured very rapidly in DH. His abandoning his friends was the catalyst. Malfoy Manor confirmed his feelings for Hermione, and the battle forced him to grow up. But he's still not afraid of using magic to shortcut things.
-N-

 

The Clocks in the House by minnabird
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Andromeda reflects on her choices, not long after the birth of her daughter.

Nominated for Best Poem in the 2013 Quicksilver Quill Awards

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 106 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/16/12 Updated: 07/22/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Poem

There's a minimum!!???
Anyways, beautiful poetry. I love the sounds this produced, and clocks can be fun to listen to- and sometimes annoy me. :) But this was great!

Author's Response: Yes, 100 words minimum. Bleh. And thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

 

Summary: There are many types of secrets. Some you keep for others, some you keep for yourself, and others you keep to avoid them.

When it came to feelings, I, Lily, was the greatest keeper of secrets.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1969 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/18/12 Updated: 07/19/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/19/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Augh! :) Remind me who Louis is again... Who are his parents?
What an interesting view! I think I liked it. Although, I'll admit, I was a little squeamish. However, I can tell that you are a very strong writer! Great job. :D

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm really glad you took the time to read this, even if it made you uncomfortable. And Louis is the son of Bill and Fleur. Maple

 

The Winter of 1539-1540 by hestiajones
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Past Featured StoryImmortality comes with a quiet price.

Written for Random Song Title Challenge at Poetry Anyone (?). This poem shares the title of the Helios song, and only the title.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 154 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/18/12 Updated: 07/18/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! What an ingenious idea!
In your first stanza on the last line, I have a problem with those last two words. I think the flow and rhythm would work better if it read "quite not".

With the second stanza, I feel similar for the last line. Maybe it should read "the hours after" or "hours after hours." it's just so it stays in line with the rhythm of the rest of the poem.

I loved it though! This will definitely allow the flobberworm to gain some fame!

 

A Dark Congregation by hestiajones
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: For the Death Eaters.

Written for Random Song Title Challenge at Poetry Anyone (?). This poem shares the title of The Hush Sound song, and only the title.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 119 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/18/12 Updated: 07/18/12


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle Signed
Date: 07/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm a Death Eater! Okay not really. :D
I of course loved it. I noticed, though, that the first two stanzas sort of rhyme, and the last two don't. What I mean is, in the first stanza, "masks" and "past" share the same vowel sound, and therefore give a sense of rhythm and rhyme. The same happens with the second stanza with "pink" and "eat." Just something I noticed. :)
I really enjoyed the spider imagery. It reminded me of the story, The Spider and the Fly, in which the spider does all he can to flatter the lady fly, and she finally gives in and he ties her up for a later meal.
Chills are running down my spine...

 
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