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Real name: Vicki
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I'm an American, have been married for "a long time", and have a son and a daughter, so to me the characters are like sons and daughters. I like to study history and science, and I usually don't write (or talk) unless I have something to say, so I tend to be serious. I try to stretch my writing skills by entering challenges and forcing myself to write to prompts that I would otherwise not write, such as romance or vigorous action, and am surprised to discover that it can be done.
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M.I.T.: Entente Cordial by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: A strange and seemingly inexplicable death in London's West End brings an unlikely collection of individuals together. Can Aurors Creevey and Cresswell, and Detective Chief Inspector Wood make any sense of the crime?

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 9889 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
09/28/14 Updated: 11/02/14


Reviewer: Oregonian Signed
Date: 11/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: On the Beat

Hi, Neil. I am enjoying your story, as I do with all your works. Just wanted to let you know that you have done me a favor. I am writing a story for my creative writing class here in Oregon, based loosely on some hpff ideas I have had, but with all the names changed, of course, and I have a scene in which members of the police inspect a skeleton that has been uncovered in the course of an excavation. I didn't know what title to call these policemen, but I saw that you had characters who were identified as Detective Constables, so I googled that term and found much information on the British police; that turned out to be the very title that I needed. So thank you.
Vicki

Author's Response: Thanks Vicki. I try to keep the "Muggle police" aspects of my stories (particularly the MIT stories) as accurate as possible, to the extent that I've even noted the date the Metropolitan Police's specialist firearms unit stopped being SO19 and became CO19 (2005). Now, they're SCO19. I'm no expert, but if you need any information, just ask. -N-

 

Bikini Girls on Brooms by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Harry and Ginny visit Portugal for sun, sea, sand, and something else.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7736 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/14/14 Updated: 11/14/14


Reviewer: Oregonian Signed
Date: 11/17/14 Title: Chapter 1: Bikini Girls on Brooms

An interesting idea, to have Harry playing with and against professional Quidditch players. We tend to think of him as the boy wonder of Quidditch because of his youthful start on the Gryffindor team, but he did not actually play for several of his school years, and you remind us that the caliber of school-yard play is less than that of the professional leagues. And the unique setting makes this game less ho-hum than many of the other games we've read about.

Thanks for noting the 10th anniversary of MNFF. It deserved to be mentioned somewhere. I enjoyed your story.

Vicki

Author's Response: Thanks Vicki.
A reviewer on another site wasn't happy about which side won, so I'm glad you can see my reasoning. Even if Harry is a good amateur, he's likely to be a little out of his depth against professionals. He missed at least one (possibly two) of the three games in his sixth year, and didn't play at all in his seventh. At the time I've set this story he's a few days shy of his 22nd birthday.
-N-

 

The Necromancer's Army by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1]

Summary: One moonlit night, a mysterious sorcerer raises up an army of Inferi.

Disclaimer: the following is purely fiction and any resemblance to any real or fictitious persons is clearly coincidental, unless the resemblance is to Voldemort, in which case, this poem was no accident.

Written for the 6th Annual Race To Halloween poetry challenge

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders, Violence

Word count: 204 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/21/14 Updated: 12/09/14


Reviewer: Oregonian Signed
Date: 12/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: The Necromancer's Army

Nagini, I loved this poem. You have such a vivid image of these rotting corpses rising up from the graves. Every little detail is so perfect and so spot-on. I loved the dirt in their unhinged jaws. Your choices of words never falter. All the line are imaginative but keenly observant and perfectly clear. Very, very good job.
Vicki

Author's Response: Thank you! I really liked this one, too. :) If only more people had entered the challenge... Then it might have won a place!!!! Keep reading. ;) ~Nagini

 
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