I don't know why you are here, anyway, but if you must, proceed.
Most of what I write are one shots for challenges. I might try again at an on going story.
I love to read and write fictional stories. (You could have guessed that!)
A few things about Me(As if you care!):
Country I live in: U.S.A.
Favorite color: Yep
Favorite beverage: Apple Juice
Favorite Subject: Drama
Favorite number: 1842
Great story. I wonder where this story is going? Well remember to UPDATE SOON!
I liked it. I think it would make a good humor story though. If you have any questions the answer is pizza. Trust me, I know. Anyway, good story and keep on writing. You do have a talent for it.~HermyRox12~
ps. If you don't get the pizza thing, just ask. And of course I'll tell you...pizza!
Author's Response: Erm...pizza....okay. But I'm glad you liked it, and I thank thee for reviewing my piece. *exists stage right*
*sings* For this was a jolly good story! For this was a jolly good story! For this was a jolly good stor-y! And This is my review! *stops singing because it is worse than Percy's and the world will die if I continue plus it is the end of the song* Wonderful! very random. You know, I want spiked hair but just because I'm a girl my mom won't let me get one. *sobs* Why did it have to end? WHY? Well I'm going to see if we can go to Taco Bell for lunch. Maybe I'll see Aragorn. GO TACOS! *sings* And this is my review! *Stops singing again because it is worse than Percy's and the world will die if I continue*
Author's Response: I complement you on your singing. *cough* :) Thanks for the review! (I'm sorry the story had to end. I really am.)
HAHAHA! Funny. I like it. you are a good humor writer. ~HermyRox12~
Very Random!(That's good) I hope the Mods accept chapter three soon! 10/10. It's on my favorites! HAHA! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank You- i hope they accept it soon also! yay i love being on favorites. tHANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BETA-ING
This is a wonderful fic. When Harry and Ginny are having their argument, could you please put a space between no and one. Thanks! The part that liked best was when Harry told her the secret. It let's the reader know that they have come to a place of trust.
Nice. Hermione and Snape? Didn't think of that one. I liked the ending letter bit. Funny. I'll remember never to trust a D.E.W.W. member again. (Even though they were really nice...NOT)
NOOOOOOOOOO! Why did it have to end? WHY? I guess all good things come to an end, but all GREAT things have a sequal. As you can see your story is GREAT! Loved it. Post your sequal soon. (Please?) I WILL be looking. *searches*~HermyRox12~
Author's Response: I'll remember that word of wisdom "All good things come to an end, but all great things have a sequel." Yes, I like that a lot. ;)
Great Chapter! Make sure James and Lily will get to know their son and vise-versa. Will Remus and Sirius go to the same time as Harry or will they go sometime else. Update soon.
Author's Response: They'll get to know Harry, don't worry. Remus, Sirius and Peter will go to Harry's time in the sequel- although, it would be interesting if they went to a different time. How about they go to 1969 and become part of the Monty Python team? JFK's assassination? World War II? I thought not.
Wonderful Story! I loved it. I like Youth's idea of putting reviewer's names as guests. My name is Telia btw. (Not to be confused with Delia. Or mayby it is) You should do it! If not that's alright. Keep writing and remember to put your raisins in your peach carts. 10/10.
Author's Response: Ack, I already submitted chapter 11 in...but I still have chapter 12, the epilogue, to write...mwahaha...but I'm glad you loved it!
HaHaHa! Very random. I LOVE it! Can't wait for the epolouge. Write more. I was SOOO exited when I saw an update. YAY! 10/10
Author's Response: Umm...don't count on an epilogue :) Glad you liked it!
I love your story!. UPDATE SOON, OR ELSE! (Or else I'll haunt you every time you think of PIZZA) Anyway 10/10. Keep writing.
Author's Response: thanks so much! chapter 2 is in queue which isn't saying much as the mods are on break till saturday. chapter 3 is ready 2 b submitted after chapter 2 is verified and chapters 4 and 5 are at the beta. additionally, chapter 6 is almost finished. yes, i've been working VERY hard.
Loved it! Very funny? I Think that the blood test guy should do an extra 15 years for running over a poor, evil, old, Voldemort. ( Loved that part :) ) Hope you write more stories. ~HermyRox12~
Very good! I like your explanation for Dark Magic. I'll probably never look at it the same way again. Bravo! My only suggestion is that when Septimus is talking to Severus she uses the word Dearest to much. Other than that I couldn't find anything that needs fixing. 10/10. Yeah, Light Magic does seem like it is on a diet. Well, see you. This is on my faves.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the story is still interesting, even if canon has overtaken it. Thanks for reviewing! -S.
I remember reading this. But I don't think I reviewed. Anyway, gr8 story. I was laughing when I read this. It was so good I told it to my sister. 10/10
I liked this. In the letter, Hermione uses the word Ah alot in the same area. I would change that. Other than that, I realy liked this story. Sad, but nice.
First off, you wrote: One of them cake to a stop, when I believe it should be: One of them came to a stop.
Poor Mrs. Norris. Wait. Did I just say that? Anyway, great story and very unique. I never would have thought about that. Where did you get the idea for this? 10/10.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and pointing out the typo. I'll fix it. To be quite honest, I can't really remember where I got the idea for this. I think I might have been joking around with some friends about Filch and Umbridge when I came up with the idea.
Very Good! The rythm is very good. You did a nice job of writing the thoughts of Harry. Bravo! 10/10
This was funny. I love the Banana jokes. It's amazing how Ron can give F&G the most extraordinary ideas, isn't it? I think that you coul calm down on the all caps, it feels better on the eyes to have some lower case. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks. I actually only used caps at the very beginning when Ron and Hermione were fighting and then once later when Ron said \"PIE!\" but I suppose the reader knows best :) Thanks for the constructive criticism.
Ah, this is nice. I can imagine the shooting stars above the heads as they speak. I think that the idea of a traveling Quidditch team is cool. It is amazing how people can change for the better, sort of like the group of Slytherins. I couldn't find anything that needs fixing.