its pretty good, i enjoyed reading it so far. Cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you :). I currently have my A level exams, so I can't write at the moment, but I promise to update in June :)
At first i was iffy about it because you added Liam with the potter family but i found it a really good read in the end because you incorporated Liam into the family. Cant wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is a one shot, but I'm working on companion piece that should develop the family relationship a bit more.
Muggle-born Calla thinks she is prepared for life at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. After all, her parents both went to boarding school, so what could be so different?
Calla soon finds out that expectations are never the same as reality, and learns more than she ever thought she would about loyalty, friendship, good and evil.
A/N: This story takes place during the Next Generation era. JKR’s characters have small parts throughout, but are not the main characters. I’m continuing in the alternate universe I began in Snape’s Son.
The rating for most of the story is 3-5th years, with warnings for the end chapters.
If i must say, (i had to say that) I felt that there was a little J.K. Rowling technique there it really kept me in the story. Its always interesting to see different problems and things like that. Cant wait to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. I'm humbled and honored by your remark about my writing techniques. This story has been a unique adventure for me.
I was beginning to worry if this was going to continue or not, none the less it was another good chapter
Author's Response: yeah like I said my muse went on summer holiday lol
i dont know why but the whole teenage thing kind of kept me into it, I guess the reason why is im writing a book and ill be getting into that stuff later in the series if i decide to continue it, besides that its really coming together nicely, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks once again! Chapter 7 is in the queue.
This part is good, the description of each student in the Slytherin house, cant wait to see the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, your kind words are appreciated. I get so much enjoyment out of writing my characters. Chapter 4 has been submitted today, so look for it soon!
i like it! Just one question, is Calla the daughter of Dudley? Besides that its a well written story so far can wait for the other parts. Also i like how you kind of split Hermione's personality by giving a boy the book reading part and the girl the law abiding type,
Author's Response: Yes, Calla is Dudley's daughter. You'll find out more in a flashback chapter I'll be posting soon. Thanks for reviewing!
No need to thank me, i should be thanking you for this story its really good. Now onto this piece, i was entertained by this one, with the fight, and also curious about lily and Fiona knowing each other, keept it up
Author's Response: Hi, just saw this again and realized that I never responded. Hope you found Chapter 8 :)
II waited forever for the second part lol, it was worth the wait but is slytherin your favorite house because its strange a muggle-born going there. It was still good but i dont see Calla as a slytherin, i see here like what the hat said a Hufflepuff, and interesting flashback too. Very good ill be waiting for part 3.
Author's Response: Nope, I'm a Hufflepuff. I'm trying to develop Calla's character slowly, but hopefully my readers will see the qualities that had the Sorting Hat put her in Slytherin.
Dont get me wrong though i think its still great, i was just kind of making a statement really...
Author's Response: :)