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The Hidden Truth by majestic_ginny
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 35]

Summary: Natasha Osborne- better known as Tash- is a perfectly normal girl living in Australia. She's got all the problems that a normal teenage girl has: quarrels, boys, studies, and the list can go on and on. But when her father is transferred to England, she has to attend Hogwarts. When Tash meets the Boy-Who-Lived, her perfect world turns upside-down.

Natasha Osborne learns the secret her family have been hiding since she was a year old.

She learns her whole identity was a lie.

Follow Tash through her seventh, but first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Warnings for violence and self injury are strictly for later chapters.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Self Injury, Violence

Word count: 19887 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
08/12/10 Updated: 08/16/12


Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 03/28/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Mystery

its pretty good, i enjoyed reading it so far. Cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you :). I currently have my A level exams, so I can't write at the moment, but I promise to update in June :)

 

Snape's Son by FearlessFlyer
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Severus Snape's life was a mystery except to the very few that knew him well. Having a child was just one of his many secrets. This story is about Liam Snape and the family who raised him.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 2246 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/22/11 Updated: 12/30/11


Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 03/26/12 Title: Chapter 1: Snape's Son

At first i was iffy about it because you added Liam with the potter family but i found it a really good read in the end because you incorporated Liam into the family. Cant wait to see the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is a one shot, but I'm working on companion piece that should develop the family relationship a bit more.

 

Becoming Calla by FearlessFlyer
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary:

Complete!

Muggle-born Calla thinks she is prepared for life at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. After all, her parents both went to boarding school, so what could be so different?

Calla soon finds out that expectations are never the same as reality, and learns more than she ever thought she would about loyalty, friendship, good and evil.

A/N: This story takes place during the Next Generation era. JKR’s characters have small parts throughout, but are not the main characters. I’m continuing in the alternate universe I began in Snape’s Son.

The rating for most of the story is 3-5th years, with warnings for the end chapters.



Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Dubious Consent, Mild Profanity, Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Slash, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 51860 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/18/12 Updated: 03/03/14


Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 06/13/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Connections

If i must say, (i had to say that) I felt that there was a little J.K. Rowling technique there it really kept me in the story. Its always interesting to see different problems and things like that. Cant wait to see more.

Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. I'm humbled and honored by your remark about my writing techniques. This story has been a unique adventure for me.

 
Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 09/13/12 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Be Careful What You Wish For

I was beginning to worry if this was going to continue or not, none the less it was another good chapter

Author's Response: yeah like I said my muse went on summer holiday lol

 
Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 09/13/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Observations

i dont know why but the whole teenage thing kind of kept me into it, I guess the reason why is im writing a book and ill be getting into that stuff later in the series if i decide to continue it, besides that its really coming together nicely, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks once again! Chapter 7 is in the queue.

 
Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 05/29/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Impressions

This part is good, the description of each student in the Slytherin house, cant wait to see the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, your kind words are appreciated. I get so much enjoyment out of writing my characters. Chapter 4 has been submitted today, so look for it soon!

 
Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 03/26/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter 1 New Beginnings

i like it! Just one question, is Calla the daughter of Dudley? Besides that its a well written story so far can wait for the other parts. Also i like how you kind of split Hermione's personality by giving a boy the book reading part and the girl the law abiding type,

Author's Response: Yes, Calla is Dudley's daughter. You'll find out more in a flashback chapter I'll be posting soon. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 10/01/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Confrontation

No need to thank me, i should be thanking you for this story its really good. Now onto this piece, i was entertained by this one, with the fight, and also curious about lily and Fiona knowing each other, keept it up

Author's Response: Hi, just saw this again and realized that I never responded. Hope you found Chapter 8 :)

 
Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 04/17/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Welcome and a Memory

II waited forever for the second part lol, it was worth the wait but is slytherin your favorite house because its strange a muggle-born going there. It was still good but i dont see Calla as a slytherin, i see here like what the hat said a Hufflepuff, and interesting flashback too. Very good ill be waiting for part 3.

Author's Response: Nope, I'm a Hufflepuff. I'm trying to develop Calla's character slowly, but hopefully my readers will see the qualities that had the Sorting Hat put her in Slytherin.

 
Reviewer: darkallience Signed
Date: 04/19/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter 1 New Beginnings

Dont get me wrong though i think its still great, i was just kind of making a statement really...

Author's Response: :)

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