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Dark Requiem by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary:

The irony does not escape Severus Snape as he seeks to gain the favour of the Dark Lord on, of all nights, Christmas. The spectres of days dead and gone spur him on to complete his mission, but can the fond memories stop him from committing an unspeakable act?

 

This story has been nominated for a 2011 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Marauder Era Story.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 3423 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/25/10 Updated: 12/25/10


Reviewer: Ariana84 Signed
Date: 03/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent, suspenseful story! First person worked very well and captured Snape well. I also enjoyed your perspective on Snape's thoughts about Lily during those last two years they didn't speak. Very good writing!

Author's Response:

Hello! I'd you enjoyed the story. I have to admit, climbing into Snape's head isn't a pleasant experience, especially considering the myriad of psychological disorder which he could very well have. It's a bit disconcerting, to be sure. First person was probably the best way to get that discomfort across to the reader without the over-the-top way second person POV would've done.

Even though Jo said that there was nothing sinister about the death of Lily's parents, it's actually very, very odd to think about the fact that both James's and Lily's parents died in the same timeframe. It would almost be ridiculous to think that were possible. So I decided that it wasn't, and here you have it.

Anyway, thank you for the visit and the review!

~Jess

 

Final Confrontation by artsy_werewolf
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Why did Peter Pettigrew do it? Why did he reveal the Potters' location to Voldemort? Why did things turn out that way?
One-shot. Rating is for strong language.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Strong Profanity

Word count: 1597 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/30/11 Updated: 04/07/11


Reviewer: Ariana84 Signed
Date: 03/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: Final Confrontation

Hey, I think this story was interesting but it was kinda a stretch for me to imagine Wormtail having the guts to go tell James what was up. Also, I think James would have told Lily. But nevertheless I think you did a good job of capturing what may have been running through Wormtail's and James' minds in this situation.

 

Promise by Golden_snitch91
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: At ten years old, Lily and Severus are already best friends. One day Lily goes over to his house to play and hears his dad drunk. She decides to confront him about it.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Abuse

Word count: 948 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/11/11 Updated: 04/12/11


Reviewer: Ariana84 Signed
Date: 03/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute story! And so sad. Also very sad many kids go through the same fear, abuse, and pain and often endure it for the sake of someone else, like their mother.

 

Always by angeoudemon
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Inspired by the "After all this time?" "Always" exchange in the Deathly Hallows. The friendship of Severus Snape and Lily Evans.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2309 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
05/12/11 Updated: 05/28/11


Reviewer: Ariana84 Signed
Date: 03/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Her Name Was Lily Evans

Nice story. I like how you expounded on some events presented in "The Prince's Tale" and captured both Lily's and Snape's perceptions. I also like that you included Snape's, shall we say dysfunctional, father/home because I think it is so important to how he turned out and perhaps why he disliked "Muggles" so much. Also this story really drives home the point that Severus was the person who introduced Lily to magic/the magical world, so obviously he had a real impact on her life. Plus, if your timeline is correct, they had two years of friendship and bonding going into Hogwarts. It is so sad how things turned out between them! :( But I guess it was all for the best so Voldemort could be defeated.

 

Look at Me by PrettyGreenEyes
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: This is a oneshot capturing the friendship between Severus Snape and Lily Evans a year before the dreaded "Mudblood" incident at Hogwarts. Set in August 1974, Severus and Lily are spending some time together in their favourite spot - a secluded field next to the park in which they first met - but little are they to know that this will be their final summer together as friends...

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1118 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/28/11 Updated: 08/14/11


Reviewer: Ariana84 Signed
Date: 03/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A really nice little story that has a lot of "between the lines" content, making it really meaningful and making the reader really have to track the dialogue, tone, and actions of the characters to get an accurate impression of what has happened. Seems true to the characters portrayed in the orginal books too. Enjoyed reading it!

 

Winter by Padfoot11333
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary:

He says when you gonna make up your mind?

When you gonna love you as much as I do?

Cause things are gonna change so fast

I tell you that I'll always want you near

You say that things change my dear

Boys get discovered as winter melts

Flowers competing for the sun *

Lily Evans and Severus Snape are best friends. Right?

Severus Snape and James Potter are worst enemies. Right?

But what happens when Lily has to make up her mind? What happens when she can no longer put up with Severus, and she can no longer ignore James?

Things change, and that's what Lily has to discover. But what else she discovers is that many things stay the same. And she can't decide what should stay and what should go.

*Lyrics taken from Winter by Tori Amos

Categories: Severus/Lily Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 2479 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
10/31/11 Updated: 12/08/11


Reviewer: Ariana84 Signed
Date: 03/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, although I would appreciate critique :)

Lily xxx

 
Reviewer: Ariana84 Signed
Date: 03/10/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This chapter is good too. I like how you incorporated so many Slytherin characters and the ambivalence you communicate in Severus.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, and I'm sorry the next chapter has taken a while :(

Lily xxx

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