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Summary: Five moments where Ginny Weasley helps Harry and the others during their Horcrux search and in the final battle, without anyone realizing. Set during DH and based on canon events, these are a series of missing moments revealing Ginny's vital hidden role.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 12215 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
07/17/11 Updated: 03/01/12


Reviewer: Hippothestrowl Signed
Date: 03/09/12 Title: Chapter 3: Weasley's Wizard Wheezes

Very well written and a good theme. Again, I think it lingers a little too much on thoughts and feelings and so seems a bit heavy. That should be spaced out more - separated by actions and dialogue.

To add that the speech is formatted right into paragraphs instead of spaced out like all modern fiction. This makes the reading of it harder and more claustrophic.

 
Reviewer: Hippothestrowl Signed
Date: 03/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding

Great idea well executed.

 
Reviewer: Hippothestrowl Signed
Date: 03/08/12 Title: Chapter 2: The Headmaster's Office

Excellent. Maybe slightly over-long at the start with Ginny's thoughts so we reach a point of 'get on with it' but well thought out.

 

Under Snape's Regime by joehook
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 60]

Summary: Neville and his friends have no choice but to return to Hogwarts. But will it even be like Hogwarts anymore, with Snape as Headmaster? Neville must stand strong while Harry, Ron and Hermione are surely on the run miles away...

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 37349 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/26/11 Updated: 11/03/11


Reviewer: Hippothestrowl Signed
Date: 03/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - New Times

Good start and I shall read the rest of this with interest.

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