This is a wonderful story!
Specially since Luna almost never is the lead character in the stories and still you can find a very interesting story with her in it. She is also one of my favourite characters.
But the best thing about this story is that it takes place in Sweden, which is where I live and it was so fun that you added some swedish into it as well! It always makes me happy to see that our country isn´t forgotten ;)
I am currently reading some of your other stories and looking forward to read the following chapters.
Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This isn't my first story with Luna. I can tell you that this (third person perspective) is a lot easier than attempting first person Luna.Sweden is a place I've visited only a couple of times, but it's a nice place (although doors which open out into the street surprise me every time). :-D As Luna believes the Snorcack to be native to Sweden, it seemed the logical setting for this story, too.
I hope that you enjoy my other stuff. Luna is in ECCENTRIC and What Luna Sees.-N-