Summary: Starts out in James and Lily's 7th year at Hogwarts. Not exactly your average James/Lily
Overall, it was an amazing story and I did enjoy it. However, there were some errors like patronuses, people's name's and ages. There were a few grammar/spelling mistakes(sorry to be picky), and sometimes when you put in comments it got a tad confusing. Apart from that, excellent story.
Summary: What caused Lily to loathe James and James to loathe Lily? How did they come to fall in love? What bumps and bruises did they acquire along the way? From hexing to comforting, this is the way it all started. Endure dangers and hardships, perplexity and mind games, and matters of the heart.
That was an amazing story. I liked how it could be funny at times, but also have some sad parts too. I think, unlike some other fan fiction, you made them stay true to their character and everything.
Some people don't like it, but the ending was pretty good. Because that is what happened in the books and all. However, the Charlie thing was the only bit I would change. Maybe make it so she died fighting Voldemort or something more Gryffindor.
Overall, it was an amazing story, and I really liked it.
Rose was a Weasley. She never gave Scorpius Malfoy a second glance. They were sworn enemies, even though they’d barely even spoken to each other. But sometimes all it takes for love to blossom is a Potions lesson, a few snide remarks and a dropped book.
Two people. Two entirely different worlds that are suddenly intertwined.
AAHHHH!!!!! Amazing! I am currently really tired as I have stayed up REALLY late the last two nights reading it!
It was an absolutely amazing story, beautifully written. It was definitely one of the best fanfic, of any kind, that I have ever read.
I adore all the character development and surprises and ABSOLUTELY EVERYHING that you have done with the story!
I love how long it was, because good, long fics like this are hard to find!
Favourite Chapter- I don't have one! They were all so good! I even liked what you did with the Quidditch matches because some authors make the really boring, but not you!
Favourite Character- Scorpius and Draco. I loved the fact that they both had a lot of background to the character and lots of character and development. And for the fact I am just literally in love with the Malfoy bad boys :)
Favourite Quote- That would have to be in Chapter Six, when Scorpius asks Ben what he wants and Ben replies something like "Rosie. Kindly give her back." Or something. Just the way I imagined that happening and all made me actually laugh out loud.
I need to now read all of your stories! You should DEFINETLY write a Maurauders Era one if you haven't yet, with some Jily! I think you would be able to write them all perfectly!
But all in all, amazing story! Keep writing! And I need to sleep now! Bye!