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Restless by Envy_I_May_Be
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: In the days after Ron leaves them behind, Hermione reflects on the things that are, the things that were, the things that should be, and the things that never were. She thinks about her feelings, and what she should have done. She thinks about Harry, and she thinks about Ron, and all of the people she’s left behind on her journey to help Harry seek out and destroy the Horcruxes. But mostly, she waits. And while she waits, she is restless.

A little one-shot set during Deathly Hallows.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 3114 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/16/12 Updated: 02/20/12


Reviewer: BeauxbatonsWitch Signed
Date: 02/26/12 Title: Chapter 1: Restless

I don't usually read trio stories but read this because it looked interesting. You write very well especially Hermione's emotions. I loved it when she was dancing by herself and then with Harry. It was a beautiful moment. well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! I seem to have a knack for making people read things that they normally wouldn't. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

 

Whisper to the Dying Walls by hestiajones
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: Past Featured StoryViktor is thankful for uniforms; they make it difficult for him to identify individuals while flying at breakneck speed. But right now, he has to shake her hand. He dreads it, and hates himself for dreading it, so he doesn’t look into her eyes when their skin comes into contact, or when her fingers grip his a little more tightly than necessary.



This is hestiajones' seventh entry for the GH Cotillion Challenge. Thank you, Croll, for your support and ideas and jokes! I am not J.K. Rowling.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 8566 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/20/12 Updated: 02/29/12


Reviewer: BeauxbatonsWitch Signed
Date: 03/04/12 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue

I was very pleased to see that you had updated and finished this story so quickly. It has been a good read. I wasn't sure how I felt about Gabrielle dying but you'd hinted at the beginning that someone had died so i wasn't altogether surprised. i liked the subplot of maria being the one behind the story leaking. that was well played. i liked the epilogue and the hope he now has with the bulgarian girl. Will you write any more about Viktor and his new girlfriend? Good story. Well done.

Author's Response: Apologies for being a tool and replying to the review so late. :/ I'm thrilled you liked the story as well as the new girl. I do have a one-shot in mind for them, just not sure if I have the energy to write it in the near future, what with current WIPs taking up my brainspace. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: BeauxbatonsWitch Signed
Date: 02/26/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I think this story is very interesting and powerful. I like reading stories about the more minor characters in Harry Potter because they are often forgotten. Krum is a great character and you write him very well. Gabrielle seems quite like Fleur in her way of thinking and she's very sure of herself. Such a romantic date - it was lovely to see and well written as was the scene in the elevator. gabrielle certainly knows what she wants lol. well done.

Author's Response: This review gave me hope. :) I like reading about minor characters, too, and it when it comes to writing, they're my go-to subjects. For a long while now, I've been writing mostly Trio Era minor character fics. I;m happy you found Krum believable; it wasn't easy writing him lol. Gabrielle, I think, is indeed Fleur in miniature, but I hope I've managed to leave a few differences too.

I don't usually pimp my own fics in review responses, but if you really do like reading minor characters, you might enjoy two of my other fics "A Splendid Fate" and "Lacuna Mentis". :) Also, do check out the recent pages. We're having this challenge in the boards, and many of the entries use minor characters.

Thanks for the lovely review!

~Natalie

 

Frank by welshdevondragon
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: In the closed ward of St Mungo's, Frank sees:

This is based on a 2012 SPEW Lovenotes I wrote for Lily/Padfoot1333, but the lovenote aspect has been somewhat removed.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Mental Disorders, Violence

Word count: 1080 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/24/12 Updated: 02/24/12


Reviewer: BeauxbatonsWitch Signed
Date: 02/26/12 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Very sad and bleak. I feel so sorry for Frank and Alice and Neville. You write very well.

Author's Response: Alice and Frank's story is sad and bleak--I'm pleased you think I've portrayed that well. Thank you for your compliments, and thanks for reading and reviewing. Alex

 

Bloodshot Eyes by MistReader
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Theador Mist is assigned to a dangerous task that could change his life forever. It is only a matter of time when the truth about whether he can survive it hits him hard.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 831 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
02/26/12 Updated: 02/26/12


Reviewer: BeauxbatonsWitch Signed
Date: 02/26/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Silhouette of a Beast.

Interesting story. I wonder if Leonardo Hawk is really dead, tho. One thing I noticed. The plural of werewolf is werewolves - not werewolfs.

Author's Response: And the spelling is, "though" not "tho". ;) I have edited the last few lines. Thank You for reading.

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