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I am a big fan of Harry Potter, although when I was younger I didn't like the films because they just looked wierd. I think I loved the films after Goblet of Fire, and although I had previously watched Philosopher's Stone,Chamber Of Secrets and Prisoner of Azkaban, I didn't really like them until Goblet of Fire. Ever since, I have loved all the films probably because I looked at them in a different perspective. I have alway liked the books to.
Summary: London: Four murders have taken place under bizarre circumstances, for what seems to be an equally bizarre reason.
Harry, a happily wedded man with a wonderful wife and a cute daughter, is an Auror at the Ministry of Magic and is now given a new case to solve with Ron and four other Aurors. Incidentally, the four Aurors include Ginny, Harry’s ‘schoolboy crush’; and it turns out to be much more than a crush when Harry sees her again. What’s more is that Harry is working upon a case that seems to connect to him directly. And once again, it opens up old fears: fears of losing loved ones.
Ron, on the other hand, seems to be tired of Hermione. Tempers are running high and fights are breaking out more often than usual. Are they really falling apart? Or can they sort this out before it is too late?
Then there is the case itself. Who is trustworthy, and who is not? Who is deadly enough to murder four people in cold blood?
Indulge into the gut-wrenching action, combined with warm romance and tingling suspense; while I tell you a story of love, ambition and obsession… a story of what those killer instincts can do. EDIT: MAJOR revamping going on, with regard to plot, characterisation, and general style of writing. I would urge you not to read this until I've removed this notice because I wasn't very good six years ago, and this is as bad as I was. *Places traffic cones*
Love it! Ginny’s my past and you’re my present. ‘The past is history, the future’s a mystery. But today is a gift and that’s why, it’s called the present.' KUNG FU PANDA REFERENCE!!!!
Author's Response: :p Funnily enough, I remember that phrase from a very long time ago. I wrote this part in 2007 too, when Kung Fu Panda hadn't come out yet. ;) Actually, this was written or a poster or something in my fourth grade classroom, I think. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the fic! :)
Summary: After a year full of bombings and killings, we thought it couldn’t get worse. But we were horribly wrong. And then they struck the final blow… upon our tolerance.
This was the day when Mumbai, India’s financial capital was attacked by terrorists. They kept the city hostage for around sixty hours taking hundreds of lives and injuring many more. This attack is counted amongst the most deadliest terrorist attacks so far. It raised a wave of fury and unity in Mumbai.
But after all this, are we, as residents of this diverse world, really united? Why do we fight with each other, just because we belong to different religions? Does difference in faith really matter?
I am Ginny Weasley Potter from Hufflepuff and this story is for the Written Word Challenge of the Hogwarts Spring Term, 2009. I am writing to support the organisation called ‘Citizens For Peace’.
Well writen, and to be fair, I understand why the others didn't want the girls to go. Very good start, but please continue as I hate really good stories to have cliffhangers so early on (I can tell this will be great!) :P
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! I'll try to write this one, I really will. I'm just kinda stuck so hard on this fic. :o Let me see...
Summary: Lord Voldemort is quickly taking over the wizarding world and people start to lose hope. Harry and his friends begin the hunt for Horcruxes and start preparing for the final battle which is fast approaching. Will Harry find the Horcruxes and move closer to fulfilling his destiny? Is love really the power the Dark Lord knows not? Can Harry push Ginny away? Read to find out...
Well ended, I espescially love the part about saying how everyone says they want to be his brother/sister (apart from Ginny, which is cool because they are going out), and it was a great way to finish this side of the chapter. I also enjoyed the awkwardness in this chapter. Well done!-SGozzy
I loved it, I tought the characters descriptions were great and completely canon- and I think you need to continue :D
Author's Response: Thanks for this review. I'm glad my character descriptions are canon. Of course I'll continue the story and i hope you'll continue reading and leave more reviews!
Summary: Vivian Moore (OC) is a vampire. After being bitten at the tender age of sixteen, she had to leave Hogwarts to get used to her new body and her new way of life. But when she comes back to complete her sixth year, things are different. With the war against Voldemort on the horizon, times are tough. But Vivian won't let it get her down; she just wants to get through with school and get out. But when she meets Harry Potter, and becomes wrapped up in him, the game is changed. How far is she willing to go to for the one she loves?
Great, and a nice cliff-hanger to end the chapter on. Well wriiten
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter five is in progress; t should be coming soon!
AMAZING! I loved the way you desrcibed the attack on Harry with lust and need-it suited it well. And yes, I forgive you XD
Author's Response: Yay! o very glad that I've been forgiven. I appreciate your loyalty to Miss Moore :)
Again, I keep re-reading this because it is fantastic! The way you describe her seclusion is amazing! Keep it up, please!
Author's Response: Thanl you so much! I'm quite flattered. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I know the update isn't here yet, but it's coming, and I thank you for your patience. Enjoy!
Summary: Katie Bell was surprised to receive an official note from Harry Potter. Usually he just popped his head around the door when he wanted a chat, but then he tells her he needs her help tracking down a dangerous Dark wizard who is targeting Muggle girls.
She can't possibly refuse, especially not when it's Harry asking her.
Disclaimer: It is pointless me pretending any more. Look, I'm not JK Rowling, and never have been.
This is Equinox Chick of the Mighty House of Badgers, writing for the Inaugural Great Hall Cotillion thingy.
Well written with a lot of detail involved. Please continue as it's too good to stop!
Author's Response: It's finished and with one more chapter, which I'll post as soon as I've tweaked. Thank you very much for the review and I'm glad you liked the story. ~Carole~
Summary: Harry saved Hermione from a troll, but wound up in a coma. Hermione wished she could help her savior wake up. Who knew an innocent kiss would have such magical ramifications? Future Harmony.
I loved it! I thought the plot was great and I espescially liked the idea of a 'Magical Core.' Also, being myself, I loved the way you described the gore in the fight with the troll! Please continue to write! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it so much. =) The idea of a 'magical core' came to me because of the Naruto world. I figure, something like magic should also eventually run out. And, if it can run out, what happens then? =)
When will the next chapter be up and can you give us a clue as to what's happening next?
Also, who's Tippy?
Summary: In the days after Ron leaves them behind, Hermione reflects on the things that are, the things that were, the things that should be, and the things that never were. She thinks about her feelings, and what she should have done. She thinks about Harry, and she thinks about Ron, and all of the people she’s left behind on her journey to help Harry seek out and destroy the Horcruxes. But mostly, she waits. And while she waits, she is restless.
A little one-shot set during Deathly Hallows.
I really thought this was good. It was entertaining and a good read. I was wondering when you were going to continue "Crimson Clover" because I was really enjoying that one aswell!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. As for Crimson and Clover, I'm working out a few kinks, but I promise that chapter three will be up soon! Sorry about the wait- too many unexpected problems. But fear not- there shall be more Vivian in the near future :)
There are some things that you can't say in a letter.This is a sequel, of sorts, to my story Laugh. However, it is not necessary to read that first.
I've read the other comment, and I agree. There was a slight mistake, but it may not be a mistake. Its your story, and you've adapted J.K Rowling's work into something new, so don't be down-put by the mistake.
Overall, it was a good fic. Young pregnancy happens a lot, and this is a prime example of that. Had a detailed plot, so, well done!
:D - Sean
Sean, thank you for the review :)
I have now fixed the nitpick, so there's no need to worry about that anymore.
Thank you for the compliments. I wanted to write a Harry/Ginny fic that wasn't utter fluff, and I also wanted to write a sequel to my story Laugh, so young pregnancy sprang to mind. I'm glad it had a detailed plot, because that's what I was going for.
And once again, I have written a response longer than the review, so I will stop now :D