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I have been writing fan fiction for about one year -- reading it for about two and a half years. My earliest stories [i.e. Falling to Pieces, Dead Promises] are far from flawless. You are sure to find errors like grammar, characterisation, etc.



-Falling to Pieces
-Dead Promises
-Shivers of Pain
-A Mother's Heartbreak
-Porcelain Doll

On Hiatus:

Tarnished Soul

Beta Readers:

I'd like to thank the following beta readers with whom I'm currently working, or have worked with in the past:

-OuchKibble [Falling to Pieces]
-Sectumsempra [Dead Promises]
-Insecurity [Shivers of Pain; Unforgiven; Silent Tears of Remorse]
-songbook99 [A Mother's Heartbreak]
-Konrad [Tarnished Soul]
-Celestial Melody [Porcelain Doll]

Story Recommendations

-For Padma's Sake by Hermione Dancr
-Imperfect by annie
-Marie-Antoinette by Tinn Tam
-Secret Friends by Harriet Evans
-Hope Dies Last by Evy Black
-Faithful by malko050987

About me:

I'm a teenage girl from Malta who likes angst and dark romance.

Reviews are more than welcome. :)

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Reviews by silver_tears

A Normal Life by weasleywarrior

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron and Hermione use the time turner so Ron can experience time travel and in doing so, alter a past event, causing their future to be drastically changed.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Normal Life

Well done for writing such creative and original work! The description is brilliant and I liked the way the whole story is like linked together in a way that makes so much sense. Reading this, it sometimes felt as though I was peeking in your mind. I'm glad this story contains no OOC, grammar mistakes and a very well-thought plot. Congratulations and keep up the good work! 10/10

Tainted Love by OuchKibble

Summary: A Snape/Narcissa one-shot based on the song 'Tainted Love' covered by Marilyn Manson.

Love is such a confusing thing to Severus Snape and Narcissa Black. The two have found it in each other, but certain circumstances make it almost impossible for them to be together. Can they overcome these obstacles, or do they have a Tainted Love?
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 09/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: Tainted Love

Awesome fic! I really like the plot and the theory why Snape is so cold hearted is fantastic. You’re a brilliant author, OuchKibble (and beta). Keep it up!

Of the Sorrows by Lacerated

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
"Now Laws. No Limits. One Rule. Never fall in love."

Struggling to find out what he really believes, Draco Malfoy returns to Hogwarts for his seventh year with a head full of many new ideas. His father however, doesn't seem too keen to let Draco think for himself. To make matters worse, Home-schooled beautyqueen freak Deirdre shows up, and seems to have an agenda of her own. Could something more be going on behind closed doors?

What was this so-called ‘love’ anyway? Did it look like anything? How could you tell? Was there a moment when everything burst into a brilliant flame about you - or did it happen gradually and slowly? What was it like?

He wondered, for he had never known.

Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 02/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Black and White

Hiya! The first chapter of your fic is so wonderful...I can't wit to read the rest. ^^ Draco is adorable, as always, but here he's evil. Poor house-elf. I like the way they met and I can't wait to find out who "the man" is...Terrific piece of writing. Keep up the Slytherin Pride! And the good work. =) A definate 10/10

It's Done by Undividable410

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Harry Potter has rescued Ginny from the Chamber of Secrets, but in her opinion, she's not yet safe. As she sits in her bed in the hospital wing, Ginny questions who she can trust, including herself and her judgement.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 09/21/05 Title: Chapter 1: It's Done

It's a very well written fic, personally, I'm very fond of Ginny fics and I liked the way you showed her emotions. PS- It would be nice if this one had a sequel, writing Ginny's PoV of Harry's adventures.

Author's Response: Ginny's PoV for Harry's adventures... Wow that would be really long! lol Especially with all her emotional feelings towards Harry... Thank you for the review! ~Undividable

Love and Tears by Roxy Black

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The war is over and both sides have had their losses. Friends and loves have been waiting for news but time is passing and there is no sign of recovery. Can a letter help with the emotional load one of our heroes is carrying?

Challenge Number Two

A one-shot liking a person or situation to shattered glass. In other words, using shattered glass as a metaphor.

Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 10/30/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

WOW! I loved it! Well done Roxy! BUT I have a couple of questions: Did Harry wake up? How did he react when he read the letter? I'm really curious! :) Keep up your brilliant work! Rating: 9

Author's Response: Ah, the questions. yay, someone asked :) Ok, here are a few ickle answers. Did Harry wake up? - Yes! How did he react? - hmm, well, if you read my fic, Love Wins... End of. I sort of carries on the story ever so slightly. Ok real answer... I can't say too much incase people read both this and LoWi..EnOf, but he was very touched and she was very happy with what he told her in return!

Still there by hattiepotter

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Challenge Two: Ending of a New Beginning It's the first Christmas after the Last Battle. Dark memories are being relived and loneliness has become a central part of Harry Potter's life. It is time to learn to live without those that have been lost... H/G and R/Hr. House = Hufflepuff
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 12/25/05 Title: Chapter 1: Still there

Wow! I absolutely love this fic! It expresses Harry's emotions and pain really well. It's very realistic and well written. 10/10 Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much - that's lovely. I really wanted to understand what Harry would be feeling, so I'm glad that it was fairly realistic. xxx

Paradise by ravenclawslion17

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: She saw all of the destruction. She lived in tortured pain. She wallowed in what could have been. All she wanted to do was give up. One-shot.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 12/26/05 Title: Chapter 1: Paradise

Oh, man! This is what I call true angst. I loved how you expressed Hermione's feelings, which went really well with her actions. I also liked how you described how each person had died, and Hermione's point of view of their death. I'll rate this 10/10 Well done and Keep it up!!

Author's Response: Wow! This was such a nce review! It certainly made my day =)

An Unlikely Apology by ElspethBates

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: New Years Eve after the final battle, Harry and Draco finally confront the night that Dumbledore was murdered. AU
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 05/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: An Unlikely Apology

Although this is the first post-Hogwarts fic I’ve ever read on MNFF, I liked it a lot. You have very good theories about what’s going to happen in the seventh book and what’s going to happen after the war.

In many fics, readers consider Harry and Draco being friends as out of character, but you made this fic very realistic because you gave a lot of back-story. Although it’s a one-shot you narrated this story at a very good pace, therefore not too fast or too slow that it becomes boring.

There’s only one thing that’s preventing this fic from being perfect – a spelling mistake or what I think is a typo in this sentence:
It would'nt have been real, it would have only been a way for him to gain control over you before you could learn to defend yourself.”

Would’nt should be wouldn’t.

Other than that, I really enjoyed reading this. Well done! 9+/10


Author's Response: Wow, what a great review. It\'s obvious you pay quite a bit of attention to what you read and I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story and leave such a well written review! Thanks so much! By the way, I fixed the spelling error! Thanks for pointing it out.

Andantino by Noldo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: On Andromeda and decisions and loves and regrets. Poetry, peculiar.

No fixed rhyme scheme or meter; jumps to and fro between styles rather erratically.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 09/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Andantino

Wonderful poem, Noldo. Mind that this is coming from a person who does not usually read poetry, but I appreciate it immensely.

I like the rhyming a lot. Even the air of mystery throughout the fic as you use 'her' and 'she'.

It was sad but very well written, especially the last stanza.

Keep it up. :)


Walking Alone by frosted windows

Summary: It seemed an eon ago that he realized that defeating Voldemort was his path, and his path alone. But he did think that perhaps the world was slightly fair—that his friends could accompany him, see him to the bitter end. Perhaps Harry underestimated just how lonely his road was. One-shot; Please R&R
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 12/26/05 Title: Chapter 1: Walking Alone

I like this fic but...It would have been better if you'd have added a bit of backstory of how all those people had died. I love the ending and the bit where you said "He had never felt so empty" after he had killed Voldemort. I would give this fic 8/10 Well done and keep it up!

The Violin Teacher by stardust

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Wherever his reputation preceded him, he was unwelcome. So he kept inside and played his violin. And the music carried through his open window, and, unseen, he serenaded the city... Remus Lupin, as a Muggle, tutors one Hermione Granger, a brilliant young violinist with a promising career. (AU, slightly allegorical.)
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 5: Heartsong

Hello stardust [sorry I don't know your real name!]

I started reading the first chapter of this story just after you posted your last one. It's simply because I didn't know about it until someone recommended it to me.

What struck me most while reading this fic is the choice of words and how they flow beautifully to create the air of lyrical writing, which goes great with the theme of the story.

You have gone into so much interesting detail about music and how Hermione, as a passionate violinist, thinks and reacts. Also, I do imagine Remus to be the kind of person who likes music. :)

The plot is excellent and the characters are very in-character so congratulations for writing this!

Good luck for future writing. :)


Author's Response: Hi Debbie! (Ana here; it\'s nice to meet you! :) ) I\'m glad to know at least one person has read this, now, without having to put up with my dillydallied updates. :) And let me say it\'s just an unexpected delight to get such nice feedback... thank goodness Hermione\'s music came across in the right way, because my interpretation for both character and craft has been quite limited and the whole prose-y aspect of the story was experimental. :)

Thanks for your review and for the well-wishes. It\'s very kind of you indeed and I wish you all the same. :)

Firecracker by KalHoNaaHo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Amazing how something born from insignificance and a dire need to measure up is the one thing that brings Ginny Weasley back. One-shot.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Firecracker

I am impressed. When you start reading this story, you immediately feel like you're in Ginny's place. Every word is perfect and carefully chosen to make the reader see what Ginny sees; feel what she feels. There is a lot of talent in this fic when it comes to emotions and describing situations.
Yet, they didn’t fall down to the grass below and leave her a smoky shadow but instead lit up the world and danced with her — danced with her until she could feel the warm beams of sunlight streaming through her skin, and she was weightless and beautiful and just Ginny again.
I particularly like this sentence because it's a great example of the perfect description.

She was a kite, buoying along in the breeze — then a bird, gliding, swerving, diving, only to shoot back up, no longer craving the solidity of earth beneath her feet.
The imagery is brilliant. What struck me here is how you illustrate every small detail to make the fic really pleasant to read.

Ron, who had betrayed her. Who had always been her best friend, even when he hated playing with a girl and would tag along after his brothers. Ron, who had found other people — better people — and no longer needed her to play chess with or make-up games where brother and sister battled giant trolls.
This made me think about it a lot. Even after I finished reading the story, I thought about how Ginny must have felt when Ron made other friends. Indeed she would have felt betrayed because suddenly Ron isn't paying nearly as much attention to her as he used to. Kudos for writing this piece.

Kal, this story is truly wonderful. Kudos to you!


Only Rain by Noldo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sirius had always hated rain.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 10/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Only Rain

Wow. This is another absolutely amazing story, Noldo.

Apart from the fact that I totally love Sirius and anything Sirius-related, I love this fic because of the plot. Although it’s very short and to the point, it’s beautifully written and there is a lot of feeling in every word in the story, and its mingled with a bit of angst as well. :)

I think you were able to interpret Sirius’ character extremely well – as always, I cannot detect any hint of OOCness. :)

Overall it’s brilliant – well done.

-Debbie xox

Forgotten by acerbus_lunaris

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: There are so many moments that are long forgotten; tender smiles and laughter, times when we didn't have to think about our destiny... Hermione thinks about the tender moments of their lives lost in the midst of a war.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 04/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Congratulations acerbus_lunaris, for writing such a terrific poem. I love the way you expressed Hermione’s feelings. You really made me realise that we should be more grateful at small, everyday things. Another reason why I liked the poem is because it had this somber feeling from top to bottom. I have never read any poems on MNFF, so yours was the first one and I’m certainly not disappointed for reading it. And I’m honored to be the first reviewer of this poem. Keep it up and good luck for the future! :) 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm honored that you like my writing!

Toll This Bell by Noldo

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Five very different careers for Sirius Black. (Wartime, though, is always the same.)
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 04/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This fic is great! It’s very original – I’ve never read anything like it – and interesting as I too have often wondered what Sirius’ job, if any, was. I like certain phrases including Fire, fire — fire and torture, he writes, and he knows that in more senses than one this war is about blood. and And, stumbling, blind in the groping dark, he waits for the end, and for the world to shatter, and he thinks that if they cut him open they will find the war written in fire across his heart. I keep reading those phrases over and over again and they make more sense every time I read them! So, congratulations for writing such a fantastic story and keep up the brilliant work!

Girl Meets Werewolf by Aly Delacour

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Remus Lupin is committed to doing all he can for the Order, all he can do to protect Harry, all he can do to rid the world of Voldemort. But something is distracting him from his duty and he is not used to his heart ruling his head. Nymphadora Tonks is young, eager and naive. As she tries to prove that she is a capable witch and find a place for herself in the Order of the Phoenix, she finds herself falling for the last person she expected to.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: A New War

I'm glad to read a brilliantly written first chapter, with buckets of potential. And it's also interesting to read the missing scene before Book 5.

The characterisation is awesome -- well done. I liked the idea of seeing more of Sirius *sniff* and Dumbledore again.

Also you did a fantastic job in writing the beginning of the plot -- One could never get too much Lupin/Tonks.

Well done and keep up the good work! :)


Author's Response: Thank you very much! I have submitted chapter 2 and have several more already written so keep reading!

Faithful by malko050987

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Post-OotP one-shot. Written from Hedwig's POV, as she tries to help Harry deal with Sirius' death. Harry/Ginny
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Faithful

Wow. That was beautiful, Chris.

From the very first words it caught my attention. The way you made Hedwig realise that Harry needs help, but she doesn't really know what to do, is fabulous because although written in quite an extraordinary way point of view, it sounds very realistic and I couldn't detect a hint of OOCness.

The overall plot is so well-thought -- the need Hedwig feels to help her master, or friend, and her compassionate feelings that eventually result in her wanting to tell Harry's friends what he was feeling, are expressed in a brilliant way.

You did a good job in expressing their feelings -- even the owl's -- but what struck me most was definitely the way Hedwig wants people to understand her so much that she went to desperate measures to ensure her master's health -- both physical and psychological.

I found one small typo which I thought I should let you know about.
I whish that I could talk to my master and tell him of the wonders beyond the veil.

Finally, the paragraph which I liked most:
His letter is finished, and I fly to his shoulder to watch him sign it. After his first two letters, it has become a ritual. I would fly to his shoulder and watch him sign it. At first, it was "Harry". Then "Your friend, Harry." After some time, it became "Love, Harry."

You did a great job with this; keep it up. :)


Author's Response: Thanks for the great review :) This has got to be the best review I\'ve ever received :D I\'ll correct the mistake right away, thanks for pointing it out :) Chris

He's Gone by malko050987

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: What if a person suffered through despair so overwhelming that it broke them? What if that despair not only took away their magic, but also all the magic around them?

Post-OotP fic, based around something Dumbledore says in HBP. It's obviously AU, and the entire premise of the fic is AU.

Reviews are appreciated
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: He's Gone

Great story, Chris.

I absolutely loved the plot. Stories where Harry loses his magical powers are very rare, and so, very appreciated. :-) And this is coming from someone who hardly ever reads AU.

It amazed me how you managed to keep all characters in place -- from Dumbledore, with his formal tone but concerned for Harry when in the right situation, to Harry, for whom you gave a very accurate description and reasons for his feelings and actions.

I found one typo though:
He stood and nodded at Molly. “May Ron com join Harry?” he asked formally.

I can't say anything else about this...it's awesome. Well done. :)


Author's Response: Debbie!! :D

Thanks for the great review, and for pointing out the mistake *will correct it ASAP*

I\'m glad you like the story, and I\'m feling especially flattered that you read it despite the AU thing :) Thank you.


There's Nothing Left to Lose by blackhairedweasley

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Trent Silvershore is nothing special. He never has been anything more than what some would consider a stain on the wall. But things change when a man in long black robes comes to call. Trent is introduced to a world the likes of which he'd never dreamed of. Will Trent leave the only world he knows for one that might just be a hoax? Why not? After all, there's nothing left to lose.

Chapter III - A Satisfying Disappointment now up!

Contains Deathly Hallows Spoilers!!
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - The boy with the tattered clothes

Hey Jace :)

Indeed, I'm in love with this story.

It's amazing how flowing this story is - I barely realised I had finished reading the first chapter. And surprisingly, I had never read fics in which there were OCs.

That brings us to Trent. There is something awfully charming about the little boy, even though he happens to be such a dark character. The way you described him, I could imagine him perfectly - how his eyes brightened when he saw the apple; the sadness on his face when that man took the apple; and the confusion at the first signs of magic. Two thumbs up on characterisation.

The fact that Neville is now a Herbology Professor made me smile. And Flitwick being headmaster. :)

And finally - the kitten. You knew I had to bring this up, didn't you? It's absolutely adorable. :)

*huggles* Keep up the awesome work!


Author's Response: Hey, Debbie!

Ok, I haven\'t updated this story in God knows how long. I kinda doubt I will, but who knows? I might go over that second chapter and try to submit it again. Then maybe this plotbunny will come back to me..

- Jacie the Cat

The Jabberwock by malko050987

Rated: Professors •
Summary: All he wants is a little normality in his life. But after a Lovegood-grade encounter, he decides that normality is over-rated. A little Harry/Luna piece that wouldn't leave me along until I wrote it.
Reviewer: silver_tears Signed
Date: 09/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Jabberwock


Good...interesting...fun to read...a bit strange [well, that's Luna]...amusing...

Banishing Jabberwocks doesn't sound so bad after all... :)

Well done


*re-reads fic*

Author's Response: Hehe :D Thanks for the review :) Chris